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Taish

11th July 2010 12:59 PM

mujhko SAAWAN ke aane ka intezaar hai...!!

ahl-e-bazm ko nacheez ka aadaab, Barish ho rahi hai baahar, aur mujhe barsaat humesha se bahut jyada pasand rahi hai... par kuch dino pehle hue ek accdny ke kaaran maiN is barish me dhang se bheeg v nahiN paa raha, par koi nahiN, sawan pe hi kuch likh daalte haiN.....!!

Abki baar jo aaya saawan,, baarish me bheega tera wo badan,, mujhse aa kar lipatna tera,, aur kehna saajan, saajan,, bearish ki booNdoN ki wo khan-khan, khan-khan,, teri payaliya ki chan-chan, chan-chan,, vichlit hota mera mann,, abki baar jo aaya saawan…………………..!!!!

Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai………….

Wo biNdiya,wo pallu,wo kaajal,wo kangana,
Hai yaad ab v, humse tera wo milna,
Wo saawan ki bearish me tera aana,
Mujhse lipat ke thoda sharmaana….!

Bearish ki booNdoN me tera hi deedaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………

Wo bearish me tera mujhko bhigaana,
Kagaz ki kashti me sapne bahaana,
Saawan me tera wo mujhko saajan bulaana,
Bhula nai jaata wo saawan deewaana…..!

Tujhse fir milne ko dil beqaraar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………

BadaloN ka,humara pyar asmaN se chupana,
Tera wo mujhko pallu me sehlaana,
Jab v aashiqoN ke bare me pooche zamaana,
To saawan ka humari kahani sabko sunaana….!

Kya bataauN,tujhse mohabbat kitni beshumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………

Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai……….

sunita thakur

11th July 2010 01:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ghayal_shayar (Post 401406)

ahl-e-bazm ko nacheez ka aadaab, Barish ho rahi hai baahar, aur mujhe barsaat humesha se bahut jyada pasand rahi hai... par kuch dino pehle hue ek accdny ke kaaran maiN is barish me dhang se bheeg v nahiN paa raha, par koi nahiN, sawan pe hi kuch likh daalte haiN.....!!

Abki baar jo aaya saawan,, baarish me bheega tera wo badan,, mujhse aa kar lipatna tera,, aur kehna saajan, saajan,, bearish ki booNdoN ki wo khan-khan, khan-khan,, teri payaliya ki chan-chan, chan-chan,, vichlit hota mera mann,, abki baar jo aaya saawan…………………..!!!!

wow............................kya mast mast likha hai :)

Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai………….

Wo biNdiya,wo pallu,wo kaajal,wo kangana,
Hai yaad ab v, humse tera wo milna,
Wo saawan ki bearish me tera aana,
Mujhse lipat ke thoda sharmaana….!

Bearish ki booNdoN me tera hi deedaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………

Wo bearish me tera mujhko bhigaana,
Kagaz ki kashti me sapne bahaana,
Saawan me tera wo mujhko saajan bulaana,
Bhula nai jaata wo saawan deewaana…..!

Tujhse fir milne ko dil beqaraar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………

BadaloN ka,humara pyar asmaN se chupana,
Tera wo mujhko pallu me sehlaana,
Jab v aashiqoN ke bare me pooche zamaana,
To saawan ka humari kahani sabko sunaana….!

Kya bataauN,tujhse mohabbat kitni beshumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………

Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai……….

ab ke jo aayega saawaN,
apne rang meiN tuje,
rang loongi maiN saajaN,
rakh looNgi dunia se chuppa ke,
apne aaknkoN ka kaajal bana ke.

Dear Lucky............sawaaN to muje bhi bahut pasand hai, barish meiN bheegna aur aur aur.......barish meiN bheegne ka bhi alag majja hai aur barish meiN jab dard uthta hai dil mein to bhi alag hi sakooN deta hai dil ko....aapne bahut accha likha hai.....maine bhi do lafz likh diye haiN, zara masti meiN aakar, aapki poetry pasand hi etni aaye ki main bhi likhe bina na rah saki.

Barsaat par reps +++

duaoN ke saath
diii

sorry reps nahi de paa rahi hoon abhi

naresh_mehra110

11th July 2010 08:01 PM

Baarish ki boondoN me bheege romaani ehsaas padhke accha laga...
kahiiN antar ko giilaa karte lage mujhe....Lucky Ji !

dil se daad hazir hai...qubuul farmaayen...khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....

Taish

12th July 2010 11:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sunita virender (Post 401408)

thanku thanku d, jaan kar ahcha laga ki ehsash aapko pasand aaya, bas aage v aap yuNhi saath nibhane ki jehmiyat uthaati raheN...!!

Taish

26th July 2010 12:37 PM

naresh ji,

pranaam,

bahut der se jawab dene ke lye maafi ka talabgaar hun, par thoda shayri ki taraf rukh nahin kar paya tha, aapki daad sar aankhon pe umeed karta huN aap aage v yuNhi saath nibhaate raheNge.....!!

parveen komal

26th July 2010 12:55 PM

ghayal bhai , jaan hi nikaal di aapne, mere yahan badal to hai'n par barish nahi'n,aapki is nazam ne is qadar bijli girai dil pe ki maine phone uthaya aur unke shahar ki barish ka haal poochhte poochhte balance hi khatam ho gya, please recharge karva do na,
Wo biNdiya,wo pallu,wo kaajal,wo kangana,
Hai yaad ab v, humse tera wo milna,
Wo saawan ki bearish me tera aana,
Mujhse lipat ke thoda sharmaana….!

Samne ye koun aya dil me hui halchal
dekh ke bas ek hi jhalak ho gae hum ghayal

BHEEGI HEEGI GOLDEN DAD BHI VASOOL KEEJIE

Diya_Jale

26th July 2010 01:09 PM

Lucky ji ,
yahan barish 3din se lagatar ho rahi hai ....
upar se aapki yeh rachna ......saawan bhi padh le to pani mein aag lag jayegi
very romantic ji
daad kabul kijiye

apna khayal rakhiye
Diya

parveen komal

26th July 2010 01:16 PM

Apne nazuk ahsaaso'n ko bhadkne se bachaie huzoor
machhlian mar jaengi, pani me aag mat lagaie huzoor

yasmeenraaz

26th July 2010 03:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ghayal_shayar (Post 401406)

sawan ka khoob maza laelaetae ho
jamae raho
razia

Taish

26th July 2010 03:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by parveen komal (Post 403753)

tareef aur hausala afzaai ke liye shukriya parveen sahab, bas yuNhi saath nibhaate rahiye aap, waise sher ahcha kaha hai aane.....!!

Kavita Negi

26th July 2010 04:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ghayal_shayar (Post 401406)

ahl-e-bazm ko nacheez ka aadaab, Barish ho rahi hai baahar, aur mujhe barsaat humesha se bahut jyada pasand rahi hai... par kuch dino pehle hue ek accdny ke kaaran maiN is barish me dhang se bheeg v nahiN paa raha, par koi nahiN, sawan pe hi kuch likh daalte haiN.....!!

Abki baar jo aaya saawan,, baarish me bheega tera wo badan,, mujhse aa kar lipatna tera,, aur kehna saajan, saajan,, bearish ki booNdoN ki wo khan-khan, khan-khan,, teri payaliya ki chan-chan, chan-chan,, vichlit hota mera mann,, abki baar jo aaya saawan…………………..!!!!

Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai………….

Wo biNdiya,wo pallu,wo kaajal,wo kangana,
Hai yaad ab v, humse tera wo milna,
Wo saawan ki bearish me tera aana,
Mujhse lipat ke thoda sharmaana….!

Bearish ki booNdoN me tera hi deedaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………

Wo bearish me tera mujhko bhigaana,
Kagaz ki kashti me sapne bahaana,
Saawan me tera wo mujhko saajan bulaana,
Bhula nai jaata wo saawan deewaana…..!

Tujhse fir milne ko dil beqaraar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………

BadaloN ka,humara pyar asmaN se chupana,
Tera wo mujhko pallu me sehlaana,
Jab v aashiqoN ke bare me pooche zamaana,
To saawan ka humari kahani sabko sunaana….!

Kya bataauN,tujhse mohabbat kitni beshumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………

Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai……….

Bahut khoob lucky ji, kya baat hai..... .....dil se daad hazir hai qubool kijiyega.....:)

parveen komal

26th July 2010 08:07 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by parveen komal (Post 403759)

apne nazuk ahsaaso'n ko bhadkne se bachaie huzoor
machhlian mar jaengi, pani me aag mat lagaie huzoor

kwahish

27th July 2010 01:03 AM

Ghayal sahab AadaaB!

Wah janab Ghayal bhi ho aur aise khayaal....:D
Janab aapki is romantic sawaaN ki bunde to kafi damdaar rahi kya baat hai waqai bahut umdaa likha hai aapne..... ahsaas aise the ke mann machal utha.... :D;-)

Wel Aapka ab ka sawaN yaadoN meiN guzra hai to dua karuNga ke agla sawaaN in khawaboN ko pura karke guzre..... :)

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez........ :)

Taish

27th July 2010 03:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Diya_Jale (Post 403757)

Lucky ji ,
yahan barish 3din se lagatar ho rahi hai ....
upar se aapki yeh rachna ......saawan bhi padh le to pani mein aag lag jayegi
very romantic ji
daad kabul kijiye

apna khayal rakhiye
Diya

diya ji, muddaton baad aapke deedaar hue, ahcha laga aapko yahaaN dobara dekh kar, aur khushi hui jaan kar ki aapko ye chand alfaaz pasand aaye, umeed karta hun ki aap aage v yuNhi saath nibhati raheNgi...!!

Taish

27th July 2010 03:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by yasmeenraaz (Post 403766)

sawan ka khoob maza laelaetae ho
jamae raho
razia

shukriya razia ji, bas aapse hi seekh rahe haiN.....!!:p

Taish

27th July 2010 03:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kavita Negi (Post 403785)

Bahut khoob lucky ji, kya baat hai..... .....dil se daad hazir hai qubool kijiyega.....:)

kavita ji, ye humari khushkismati ki aapko ye chand panktiyaan pasand aayin, bas yahi chaah rahegi ki aap aage v yuNhi saath nibhaati raheN....!!

shipra

27th July 2010 04:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ghayal_shayar (Post 401406)

ahl-e-bazm ko nacheez ka aadaab, Barish ho rahi hai baahar, aur mujhe barsaat humesha se bahut jyada pasand rahi hai... par kuch dino pehle hue ek accdny ke kaaran maiN is barish me dhang se bheeg v nahiN paa raha, par koi nahiN, sawan pe hi kuch likh daalte haiN.....!!

Abki baar jo aaya saawan,, baarish me bheega tera wo badan,, mujhse aa kar lipatna tera,, aur kehna saajan, saajan,, bearish ki booNdoN ki wo khan-khan, khan-khan,, teri payaliya ki chan-chan, chan-chan,, vichlit hota mera mann,, abki baar jo aaya saawan…………………..!!!!

Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai………….

Wo biNdiya,wo pallu,wo kaajal,wo kangana,
Hai yaad ab v, humse tera wo milna,
Wo saawan ki bearish me tera aana,
Mujhse lipat ke thoda sharmaana….!

Bearish ki booNdoN me tera hi deedaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………

Wo bearish me tera mujhko bhigaana,
Kagaz ki kashti me sapne bahaana,
Saawan me tera wo mujhko saajan bulaana,
Bhula nai jaata wo saawan deewaana…..!

Tujhse fir milne ko dil beqaraar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………

BadaloN ka,humara pyar asmaN se chupana,
Tera wo mujhko pallu me sehlaana,
Jab v aashiqoN ke bare me pooche zamaana,
To saawan ka humari kahani sabko sunaana….!

Kya bataauN,tujhse mohabbat kitni beshumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………

Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai……….

bahut khoob ghayal ji....
last one is tooo.. good....
keep writin...

take care....

ISHK EK IBADAT

27th July 2010 05:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ghayal_shayar (Post 401406)

lucky bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob likha hai aapne dil se daad

Taish

28th July 2010 02:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kwahish (Post 403862)

samer bhai aap aaye, aur aako lekhan pasand aaya, jaan kar dil ko behad khushi hui, bas yahi dua rahegi ki aapka saath yuNhi bana rahe...!!

Taish

28th July 2010 02:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shipra (Post 403923)

bahut khoob ghayal ji....
last one is tooo.. good....
keep writin...

take care....

shipra ji aane ka dhnyawaad, aur tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya, dil ko bahut tassallli mili jaan ke ki aapko likha pasand aaya, aage v aap bas yuNhi saath deti raheN....!!

Taish

28th July 2010 02:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT (Post 403929)

lucky bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob likha hai aapne dil se daad

ishq ji pranaam, kaise haiN aap, bas yunhi saath dete rahiye....!!

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