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MaiN khushiyaN lekar aauNgi
Arbab-e-sukhn, 'kanya bhroon hatya' (female foeticide) naam ka ek marz humare muashre ko khaaye ja raha hai..ek nanhi si guRiya, jo abhi iss duniya meiN nahi aayii hai, uska dard bayaan karne ki koshish pesh kar raha hooN.
Ilfaaz ka intekhhab itna baRhiya nahi hoga, lekin jazbaat ko paRhne ki koshish kijiyega. Aur apni besh qeemti aara'a zaroor rakhiyega. MaiN nanhi si guRiya hooN, khushiyoN ki maiN puRiya hoon HansuNgi hansaauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi main khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi.. Par... ... ... ... Yeh kya karne lage haiN log, mujhe pakaRne lage hain log kyuN mujhe yeh maar rahe haiN, dekho toh dhikkaar rahe haiN MaiN bhii jeena chahti hooN, par cheekh kise sunauNgi main khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi Taras mujh pe khaao maaN, papa ko samjhao maaN Poore karuNgi saare sapne, garv kareNge mujh pe apne Ek baar tum mauqa de do, ghar ka maan baRhaungi maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi Dard sabhi ka jaanuNgi, kehna sab ka maanuNgi Ooncha aapka sar hoga, khushiyoN bhara ghar hoga Bete jo bhi karte hain woh sab kuchh kar dikhauNgi main khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi Koii toh sun lo meri pukaar, de do mujh ko thoRa sa pyar Bhaiya ka khilona ho, ya phir chaandi sona ho waada karti hooN sabhi se, haath na maiN lagauNgi main khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi Kya laRki hona gunaah hai, jo itni baRi sazaa hai? SaanseiN meri rok rahe ho, zara bhi nahi soch rahe ho Dard mujhe jo ho raha hai, kisko maiN sunauNgi main khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi Main.ne toh yeh socha thaa, jaise bhaiya chhota thaa MaaN ki aaNkh ka taara thaa, daadi ko bhi pyara thaa Waise he toh maiN bhi sab ki laadli ban jaauNgi maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi MaaN tum bhi toh laRki ho, phir kyuN nahi samajhTi ho LaRki he jab na hogi, duniya phir yeh kahaN hogi Apne komal haaThoN se maiN khaana tumheiN khilauNgi Jab bukhaar hoga tum ko, sar-maatha dabauNgi Kuchh din apne saath toh rakh lo, phir parayii kehlauNgi BooRhi jab tum ho jaogi, haal poochhne aauNgi Waada karti hooN, tumhara dil kabhi na dukhauNgi KhushiyoN ki maiN puRiya hooN, khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi. SAGAR AASHNA |
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saagar saahab aaj se meraa naam aap apne mureedon me shumaar kar lijiye....... na jaane kya asar thaa kya jaadu tha is kavitaa me ke yaqeen maaniye meri aankhen bhar aayee hain aur maine apne sabhi ajeezdaaron ko aapki ye kavitaa aapke naam ke saath forward kar di hai , ke hamaari SDC me aise gauhar bhii paaye jaate hain.... aapki ye kavita mujhe itni pasand aayee hai ke main ise abi ke abhi gauhar e SDC me move kar rahaaa hoon..... aur ummeed karta hoon aap apne aise hi acche acche kalaam ke saath hamaare saath mahfil ko roshan karenge.... apna khayaal rakhenge aur bas meri tahe dil se daad pesh hain aapko...... Reps also added ++++++ Shaad..... |
Sagar ji...har stanza har line me dard hai apki kavita me...padte padte kab aankhein nam ho gayi pata hi nhi chala...bahut hi achcha likha hai aapne.....
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Bohot.........bohot.....bohot ache Sagar ji.
Bohot gehrai se aapne ek bejuban ki takleef bayan ki hai.........aaj aisa aalam hai log betiyo ko paida hone se pahle hi katl kar rahe hai......jin docters ko kabhi log bhagwan saman mante the....vo aaj chand sikko ke liye kasai ban baithe hai....... Aapki ye peshkash mai apne fb profile par apke naam ke saath share kar raha hoon.. Beshumar daad Bhushan joshi |
Sagar bhai apki mehnat aur jazbaaton ko salaam .. Bahut hi Nayab peshkash ..
Salutations and reps for it . Sanjay Sehgal |
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Bohot bohot shukriya Shaad saahab. Khaksaar ko itni daad aur itni baRi izzat ke qabil samjha, iskeliye mamnoon rahunga. Aur reps keliye bhi bohot bohot shukriya. Aapka khair khwah SAGAR AASHNA |
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Madhu ji, aise he nigaah-e-karam banaye rakheiN.. Tah-e-dil se shukriya. Regards SAGAR AASHNA |
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Bilkul durust farmaya aapne Bhushan saahab. Aur hausla afzayi keliye bohot bohot shukriya. Apni nigah-e-inaayat banaye rakhein. Aapka khair khwah SAGAR AASHNA |
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Sehgal saahab, nawazish keliye dil ki gehraaiyoN se shukriya. Apni besh qeemti raa'e bakhshte rahiyega. Aur reps keliye bhi tah-e-dil se shukriya. Aapka khair khwah SAGAR AASHNA |
Sagar bhai
Namaste Aapki yeh peshkash dil ko chhu gayiin...dil se daad hi daad Khush rahiye...apnaa khayaal rakhen Duaaon ke saath ijaazat Aapka Dhaval |
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Aapka khair khwah SAGAR AASHNA |
reps +++ added
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Bhai...arse baad aapki es nazm par nazar gye, nazm kya yeh to aapne dil hi nikaal kar rakh diya...bahut kismat wale hote hai log jinko beti ka pyar naseeb hota hai. har baat bahut saleeke se aur bahut stick sabdoN mein kahi, dil ke khaas kareeb rhi yeh nazm. aur es behtar nazm ke liye aap points ke haqdaar ho. meri taraf se aapko reps +++ added duaoN ke saath aapki dii :) sorry reps points abhi add nahi ho rhe...koi baat nahi dil se to aapke liye add kar diye maine :) |
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