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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd August 2007, 10:00 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 974
Posted By a4arun4u
Jai ambe!!!!

hi gudiya jee.

dhanyrwaad aapka aur aapke pyare sabdo ka...
Aapka andaaz pasand aaya humen:)
me kosis to karunga ki yahan aata rahun.. par time bhi nahin milta na..
ok np.. let c..
keep in...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st July 2007, 10:17 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 974
Posted By a4arun4u
Hi

Dhanywad kashif jee..
aur is site par bahut dino baad aaya hoon...
bas kabhi likh lete hain.. aur yun hi ga lete hain,
Ek jamana tha ki koi humari yaad me likhta tha..

keep smiling.. :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th July 2007, 11:02 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 974
Posted By a4arun4u
Apne Gamon ko chupa lena

Doli me jaao to, ek baar rukkar picche dekh lena.
Jise chod chale ho yahan, uske bare me soch ke dekh lena.

Hath na aaya mujhe humare pyar ka ek bhi panna,
Apni us kitab ko ek baar padh ke...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 26th July 2006, 07:42 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 907
Posted By a4arun4u
wow... it's good yaar. mene aapko pahli baar...

wow...
it's good yaar.
mene aapko pahli baar hi padha hai.
bahut achch likha hai.

keep writing
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 13th July 2006, 07:10 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 561
Posted By a4arun4u
wow, mast hai yaar. ye mohbbat bhi kya...

wow,

mast hai yaar.
ye mohbbat bhi kya chiz hai, jisse karo, usi se chupani padti hai.

nice .

keep sharing.
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 12th July 2006, 06:29 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,795
Posted By a4arun4u
By you... "Woh mere rabb the mere sabkuch.. ...

By you...

"Woh mere rabb the mere sabkuch..
aeey rabb muje apne rabb se dobara milwa de..
Kyunki yaad unhiki aati hai.."


By me but little changes...

subkuch maan liya unko e rabb,
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 12th July 2006, 06:25 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,795
Posted By a4arun4u
hi shoanparra, aapki ye kavita kaphi achchi...

hi
shoanparra,
aapki ye kavita kaphi achchi lagi. haan thoda sa sabdo ka sahi taal-mel hota to chaar chand lag jaate. pls don't mind. but try to look into this. sabd aapne sahi use kiye hain, par...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 12th July 2006, 06:16 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,335
Posted By a4arun4u
hi divya its' nice yaar. keep writing

hi
divya
its' nice yaar.
keep writing
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 4th July 2006, 11:33 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,839
Posted By a4arun4u
hi saahil jee it's really nice poem... and...

hi
saahil jee

it's really nice poem... and nice abhivaykti..
aur haan pallavi ne jo kaha hai... it's really help u to imporve ur approach.

keep wrinting and share with us.
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 27th June 2006, 12:10 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 686
Posted By a4arun4u
Talking Is baagh mein titliyaan hazaaron hain

Shaadi ke liay doston, ladkiyan hazaaron hain
Har khidki mein hai ladki, aur khidkiyan hazaron hain

Koi to milegi ladki khaandan mein humein
Phuppiyan hain beshumar, chachiyaan hazaaron hain
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 15th June 2006, 09:12 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 852
Posted By a4arun4u
hi dheer it's really nice.. kuch kuch...

hi
dheer
it's really nice..
kuch kuch samajh me aaya. kyun ki meri urdu knowldge bahut hi kam. hai. par aapka andaj-e-byan se iski khubsurti jaroor mil gayi.

keep writing
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 15th June 2006, 09:07 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 659
Posted By a4arun4u
hi sahil aapka andaaz-e-byan bahut pasand...

hi
sahil

aapka andaaz-e-byan bahut pasand aaya...

aese hi humen apni rubayon se ro-bro krate raheye..
Forum: Humourous Shayri 15th June 2006, 08:40 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 948
Posted By a4arun4u
Talking You can laugh here

Similarity between Gandhiji & Mallika?
Dono ne kapde tyag diye,
ek ne desh ke liye,
doosre ne Deshwasion ke liye!




...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th June 2006, 09:47 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 406
Posted By a4arun4u
wow... it's reallly nice...suknaya.... ...

wow...

it's reallly nice...suknaya....

keep writing...
Forum: Shayri-e-Mashahoor Shayar 13th June 2006, 08:51 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,374
Posted By a4arun4u
wow... tere bina ji le , aisa gunha ho na...

wow...

tere bina ji le , aisa gunha ho na paaye.
kudha kare iski saja me humne tujhe bin dekhe maut mil jaaye.

keep writing
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 10th June 2006, 04:57 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 646
Posted By a4arun4u
hi bijender it's really nice. achch laga...

hi
bijender

it's really nice.
achch laga apko padh kar.

keep writing
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 10th June 2006, 04:53 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 466
Posted By a4arun4u
hi kavita (if it's ur name) good poem and...

hi
kavita (if it's ur name)

good poem and good andaaz for sharing your heart.

although something is missing in this poem. aur wo sayad, ki ya to aap aesi nahin hai, ya phir aapne ye kavita dil...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 10th June 2006, 04:48 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 851
Posted By a4arun4u
hi ranju jee, jitni bhi taarif karun is...

hi
ranju jee,
jitni bhi taarif karun is kavita ke liye, kam hi hogi.
really, mene bahut hi kam kavitayen itni achchi padhi hain is shayri.com par. aur unme se ye ek hai.

it's really nice one.
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 6th June 2006, 05:12 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 3,795
Posted By a4arun4u
Thumbs up The Best Sher/poem

Hello
Friends,

Welcome to u in this thread "THE BEST SHER".
aap dosto se gujaaris hai ki aap is thread me apni pasand ka sabse khubsoorat sher arz karen.
please share your favourate one sher....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th June 2006, 05:01 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 642
Posted By a4arun4u
hi nice one.... ek - do jakham nahin saara...

hi
nice one....

ek - do jakham nahin saara badan hai jakhmi.
dard vechara paresaan hai kidhar se uthe.

keep writing
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th June 2006, 04:59 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 1,739
Posted By a4arun4u
wow sunita jee aapse se to sarna padega.....

wow

sunita jee
aapse se to sarna padega..
are yaar .. wo chum hi to raha tha...
aur aapne khoon kar diya...

but good sher.

keep writing
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 6th June 2006, 04:50 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 872
Posted By a4arun4u
it's really nice... dil ko chu gayi ye...

it's really nice...

dil ko chu gayi ye lines.

keep writing.
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 6th June 2006, 04:45 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,154
Posted By a4arun4u
To Ranju, Dhanybaad... enjoy...

To
Ranju,

Dhanybaad...

enjoy...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 6th June 2006, 04:43 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,154
Posted By a4arun4u
thanks piasandali mohabbat se badi woh...

thanks

piasandali

mohabbat se badi woh cheez hoti hain
jo tujhe mohabbat karne ki ehsas dilati hain
aur maan lo woh cheez nahin khuda hoti hain...

achcha kalaam hai...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 6th June 2006, 04:42 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,154
Posted By a4arun4u
thanks Red_ruchika... apna real naam to...

thanks
Red_ruchika...

apna real naam to bata dejiye...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 5th June 2006, 06:46 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 2,611
Posted By a4arun4u
wah wah... good

wah wah...
good
Forum: Humourous Shayri 5th June 2006, 06:44 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 609
Posted By a4arun4u
hi resma jee it nice one ... tuhar...

hi
resma jee

it nice one ...

tuhar bhasa dekh kar lagta hai, ki aap laalu ji kaphi prabhabit hai.

ya aap kudh bihar se hain.

apke chanda se ek sher yaad aaya...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 2nd June 2006, 04:06 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 915
Posted By a4arun4u
Hi, Ishq, hum umeedon ki duniya basaate...

Hi,
Ishq,


hum umeedon ki duniya basaate rahe
wo bhi har kadam per aazmaate rahe
jab mohabbat mein marna paraa
hum to marr gaye...
or wo bahaane banaate rahe....
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 2nd June 2006, 04:00 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,938
Posted By a4arun4u
Thumbs up wow ranjana jee i hv no words beside to...

wow
ranjana jee

i hv no words beside to say good...

itne simple words me aapne bahut si baate kah di...
apne dil ko ujagar kar diya mano.

keep writing.
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 30th May 2006, 01:26 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 641
Posted By a4arun4u
wah wah... neel jyothi its really...

wah wah...

neel jyothi

its really nice....

keep writing...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 29th May 2006, 07:44 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,068
Posted By a4arun4u
Sarab ki...., dukan aa gayi hai...

us sarab ki...., dukan aa gayi hai...


ruk jaao mere janaze ko le jaane waalo,
mujhme sayad phir se jaan aa gayi hai...
jisko pi-pi kar me mar gaya tha yaaro,
us sarab ki...., dukan aa gayi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 29th May 2006, 11:43 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,154
Posted By a4arun4u
hi piasandali thanks.... keep in...

hi

piasandali

thanks....

keep in touch
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 25th May 2006, 01:11 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,154
Posted By a4arun4u
Post ab neend kaese aaye unke intzaar me..

is jahan me yadi raat ka sama na hota,
to khwab me unse milne ka sawal hi na hota,
wo to kah gaye ki aayenge khawab me,
ab neend kaese aaye unke intzaar me..

Kajal banke teri aankho mein bas...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th May 2006, 12:57 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 260
Posted By a4arun4u
Post hum apni sari zindagi jee lete

yun toh bahut tha baatne ko,
dil me chupa rakha tha us dewane ko,
kya khabar thi yun tanha chod deega woh,
acha hua ki mere dukh ki, kabhar bhi na mil paayi pemaane ko.

zaraa palat kar to dekh...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 25th May 2006, 12:55 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 4,529
Posted By a4arun4u
it's really nice one. keep writing arun

it's really nice one.

keep writing

arun
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 3rd May 2006, 06:28 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 485
Posted By a4arun4u
Post tere dedar-e-husn ko tarste hain.

daman tham lo apna, kahin ud na jaaye,
hum jese diwane, har mod par ghumte hain.

doob jaata hoon anant ki ghahraayion me,
jab hum tere labon ko dekhte hai.

teri kali kali laton me kahin ulajh...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 30th December 2005, 07:48 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 475
Posted By a4arun4u
Post Happy New Year 2006 !!!

Happy New Year


At this special time of the year

We reflect on what we hold dear

Family and friends whether far or near

And they r what gives us reason 4 cheer!
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 24th December 2005, 01:43 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 767
Posted By a4arun4u
nice geetali Keep writing

nice geetali
Keep writing
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 23rd December 2005, 01:40 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 523
Posted By a4arun4u
Marry Cristmas!!!

MARRY CRISTMAS!!!


Wish you in next year 2006 Good Health , Good appetite If you are single, wish you find your lover , and get married soon; If you are married, wish you love each other...
Forum: Ghazal Section 11th December 2005, 09:35 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 438
Posted By a4arun4u
thanks farahana jee i like this very much.

thanks farahana jee
i like this very much.
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