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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th September 2011, 04:50 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,314
Posted By Ajnabi
Sahil pe jo numayan...

Sahil pe jo numaayan, qadmon ke ye nisha'n,
Mitjaayenge ye chund, Maujon ke aane par!

Meri hasti meri zeest aur mera wajood,
Mitjayenge ye chund, Lamhe guzar jaane par!

Raha hai koun aur kya...
Forum: English Poetry 8th September 2011, 03:38 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,693
Posted By Ajnabi
Thumbs up Blessed is the person who wrote this, Blind is...

Blessed is the person who wrote this,
Blind is the person not to note this!
Blessed is the one who has concieved this,
Blessed are the ones who have recieved this!
Forum: Introduction Forum 8th September 2011, 04:29 AM
Replies: 147
Views: 25,167
Posted By Ajnabi
Smile Janaab Aadaab once again.... Ji aap ne sahi...

Janaab Aadaab once again....
Ji aap ne sahi fermaya...laikin mera nazrya ye tha ki pehle to wo log atleast beti ko paida to hone dete par ajkal to ussay bhi badtar hain wo log jo female foeticide...
Forum: English Poetry 7th September 2011, 09:21 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 993
Posted By Ajnabi
Thumbs up Thank You Paa G! I agree with you 100% Kaash sab...

Thank You Paa G! I agree with you 100% Kaash sab aapki terha sochtay!
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 7th September 2011, 09:16 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 2,836
Posted By Ajnabi
Singhmar Sir G waqai boht zabardast ashaar!Daad...

Singhmar Sir G waqai boht zabardast ashaar!Daad he daad, mujhe lgta hai you intended to post it in the relevant section (shayri e dard)but it got posted here! But emnu ik swaal baar baar dmaag ch...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 7th September 2011, 08:57 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,740
Posted By Ajnabi
Smile Aap apni nazre inayat se sanu sharminda karraye...

Aap apni nazre inayat se sanu sharminda karraye o Sir G! Thank You So Much! Wish You all the very Good in life Sir!:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 7th September 2011, 08:54 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,274
Posted By Ajnabi
Smile Sir G aapki daad sar aankhon pr(o v bina chashma...

Sir G aapki daad sar aankhon pr(o v bina chashma lgaye):)
Thank You very very much G!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th September 2011, 08:48 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,768
Posted By Ajnabi
Thumbs up Vikas Baii, Ik honda ha apni dil di gal shairy...

Vikas Baii,
Ik honda ha apni dil di gal shairy ch dusna hor duja honda ha khoobsoorti ch ik gazzal nu complete kerna.....a dono di ustaadi hasil kerne per main tohnu congrats kaenda han!
Keep...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 7th September 2011, 08:40 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,234
Posted By Ajnabi
Thumbs up Kee baat ha! Wwaah! Gurmit Sir G thodi poetry se...

Kee baat ha! Wwaah! Gurmit Sir G thodi poetry se main kaafi impress hogya c! Ek gal kerna chavanga tussi naal....thodi is poem mein sanu Baba Farid di poetry di jhalk nazr aundi! Keep it up G!:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th September 2011, 05:40 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 829
Posted By Ajnabi
Thumbs up Zabardast Ghazal Sajid Saahib! Aap ik waqai aala...

Zabardast Ghazal Sajid Saahib! Aap ik waqai aala darje k shayer ho!
Sadi oar se dheron daad kaboul kerleo!
Forum: Introduction Forum 7th September 2011, 04:42 PM
Replies: 147
Views: 25,167
Posted By Ajnabi
Thumbs up Jinaab Mas'ood sahab bohut boht...

Jinaab Mas'ood sahab bohut boht Shukriya.....aapke jawabon ka.
I agree with you except for the last answer. Re question 3 don't you believe its same as commiting female foeticide which is so rampant...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th September 2011, 04:33 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 844
Posted By Ajnabi
Thumbs up My O my....what have you done.......do you...

My O my....what have you done.......do you realise that???...you've just posted an excellent example of philisophy in poetry...its not just about rhyming or metrics or the arrangement of...
Forum: Hindi/Urdu Lyrics 7th September 2011, 05:39 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,527
Posted By Ajnabi
Dil Cheez Hai Kya Jaana-Bally Sagoo

Dil cheez hai kya jaana
Ye jaa'n bhi tumhari hai
Teri baahon main dam niklay
Hasrat yeh humari hai

Dil cheez hai kya jaana
Ye Jaa'n Bhi Tumhari Hai

Roti hoon tadapti hoon
Bujhti hi...
Forum: Introduction Forum 7th September 2011, 05:25 AM
Replies: 147
Views: 25,167
Posted By Ajnabi
Mas'ood Bhai Ko Ajnabi Ka Aadaab! Boht...

Mas'ood Bhai Ko Ajnabi Ka Aadaab!

Boht khushi huee aap ko jaan ker! Lijiye Janaab aapki pesh-e-qidmat hai mere chund swaalon ki fehrist:

1. Who is the most influential person in your life? who...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th September 2011, 03:16 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,352
Posted By Ajnabi
Thumbs up A lo g kallo gal! Ik oar dhmaka! teen vari is...

A lo g kallo gal! Ik oar dhmaka! teen vari is gazzal nu parya c...jaise jaise dmaag ch settle hondi jaandi waise waise lutaf aaunda jaanda! Thank you yaar for the experience!
Aakhri sher ne sada dil...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 7th September 2011, 03:08 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,246
Posted By Ajnabi
Thumbs up A huii na koi gall! Ik var fir tainu main...

A huii na koi gall! Ik var fir tainu main shukriya kainda han! Keep it up Sir G!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th September 2011, 03:01 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,981
Posted By Ajnabi
Thumbs up A fabulous and elegant gazzal.....boht...

A fabulous and elegant gazzal.....boht khoobsoorti se takmeel ki hui! Bahut sunder Radhika G!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th September 2011, 02:56 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,493
Posted By Ajnabi
Thumbs up Waah G wah! baut chngi nazm likkhi PRANEETA G...

Waah G wah! baut chngi nazm likkhi PRANEETA G aapne! V nice.....I liked the what you call non-banawati lehja used a mean saadgi lehje ki aur andaz-e-bayan baut achchay lagay!
U know what mai...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 7th September 2011, 02:42 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 845
Posted By Ajnabi
Smile Thanks Janumanu G! Mai jabse is site ch aya...

Thanks Janumanu G!
Mai jabse is site ch aya han tbse thonu ik bat btana chaandaa...mere do jigar de tukde mere pra de do puttar han v cute ek da naa ha Jaanu te duje da Maanu.. dono de asal naa...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 6th September 2011, 05:39 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 845
Posted By Ajnabi
Thank You Praneeta G!:) For your comment as well...

Thank You Praneeta G!:) For your comment as well as the beautiful addition! Thanks for your saath so far...a couple o days more...and it'll be Arrivederci for me for this site...probably for a year...
Forum: English Lyrics 6th September 2011, 05:49 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 2,463
Posted By Ajnabi
Love Viva Forever-Spice Girls

Viva Forever By Spice Girls


Do you still remember how we used to be
Feeling together believe in whatever my love has said to me
Both of us were dreamers young love in the sun
Felt like my...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 6th September 2011, 05:31 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,271
Posted By Ajnabi
Gurmeet Paa Ji, Welcome to Shayri.Com! Main...

Gurmeet Paa Ji, Welcome to Shayri.Com! Main tohada dili welcome kerda yhaan! E vaddi changi kavita de saath shruaat ki tussi ne. Meri ek rquest ha ki ihaan sab nu gurbani parhan nai aundi so aap...
Forum: Celebrations 6th September 2011, 05:20 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,066
Posted By Ajnabi
Smile Happy BirthDay Sajid Ghayel Bhai!

Wishing You a Very Very
Happy,
Amazing
Pleasant,
Peaceful and
...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 6th September 2011, 05:10 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 845
Posted By Ajnabi
Smile Baab_Al_Bahisht: On Father's Day!

On Father's Day...Mere Baba G k liye meri tarf se ye chchoti si koshish...
A Few Clarifications:
Hope everyone understands I mean no disrespect to my Baba G, its just betakalluf lehja in referring...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 4th September 2011, 02:39 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 3,683
Posted By Ajnabi
Thumbs up I say a say an excellent piece of shayrana...

I say a say an excellent piece of shayrana expression! A just read t multiple times its a book completed in two stanzas and a bit! Quality posting!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th September 2011, 02:33 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,408
Posted By Ajnabi
Thumbs up Salman Saahib adaab g! Thodi gazzal menu vaddi...

Salman Saahib adaab g!
Thodi gazzal menu vaddi changi lagi...khaskar a highlighted shair ne apna ek assar chadya hai dmag ch!
Keep sharing with us! Need litlle touch ups here n there but a bit on...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 4th September 2011, 12:49 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,210
Posted By Ajnabi
Thumbs up Good effort Ankita G! Aisa laage ha tussi ek...

Good effort Ankita G! Aisa laage ha tussi ek free wheeling poetess ho...who cares more about the expression than about the rules...in one sense its alright! Good emotions and expressions!
Forum: Hindi/Urdu Lyrics 3rd September 2011, 05:52 PM
Replies: 52
Views: 9,844
Posted By Ajnabi
Smile That is a fully sick collection....I mean...

That is a fully sick collection....I mean bellisimo.....it resonates with my choice!
Shimul paa g thank you for sharing this awesome collection! This song one of my childhood favorites!
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 3rd September 2011, 05:45 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 2,397
Posted By Ajnabi
Smile No worries g but a to meri drishti mein...

No worries g but a to meri drishti mein suggestion aur swaal tha na ki correction...your choice is the correct if we just focus on the pair I mean the last two lines of the stanza but when you go...
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 3rd September 2011, 05:31 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 3,763
Posted By Ajnabi
Thumbs up Adarniye Naresh Sahab, Mujhe ye aapki kavita...

Adarniye Naresh Sahab,
Mujhe ye aapki kavita behad pasand aayi..maano mera hriday ek ek shabd aur pankti per keh raha ho wwah..sahi...sahi...aap jaise ek asaadharan kavi ko humare beech paana ye...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 3rd September 2011, 05:21 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 3,862
Posted By Ajnabi
Thumbs up Hello Mas'ood Sir G! Ek ba-saroor, ba-khumaar,...

Hello Mas'ood Sir G! Ek ba-saroor, ba-khumaar, madhosh ker dene wali ghazl ki inayat per shukriya min taht al albi! Walla shokran giddan giddan ya habeebi albi! Alf mabrook ya sayyid!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd September 2011, 05:06 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 938
Posted By Ajnabi
Thumbs up Hello Shaik Sahab, Now we're talking...ek boht...

Hello Shaik Sahab,
Now we're talking...ek boht zbardast koshish k liye mubaarkaan g!
I can c you're very well on you way towards some hectic stuff...I mean serious stuff...liked your thoughts,...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 31st August 2011, 03:52 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,928
Posted By Ajnabi
Smile Ashk Sir G nu Ajnabi da adaab! Inni high class...

Ashk Sir G nu Ajnabi da adaab!
Inni high class poetry to ik paayedar poet ne he likh pana, oda sboot nazran ch saamne hai!
Ik ik shair sanu sochan per mjboor kerda ha aisa v mumkin ha..inni sohni...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 31st August 2011, 03:36 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,740
Posted By Ajnabi
Smile Thank You Kumkum G! Sorry for thanking You Late...

Thank You Kumkum G! Sorry for thanking You Late g! :)
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 31st August 2011, 03:33 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 2,397
Posted By Ajnabi
Question What will happen if u make it bikhrayega? Just a...

What will happen if u make it bikhrayega? Just a silly question...sanu khatk reya tha a stanza..may b its just me n my itchy mind!
Forum: Ghazal Section 31st August 2011, 03:22 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,241
Posted By Ajnabi
Smile Mujhe jinni hasee a comment perhker aai shaid he...

Mujhe jinni hasee a comment perhker aai shaid he pelle kavi aai ho!
Pelli baat Benna tussi ne roman mein likhya e nai aur agr menu hindi nai aundi maine comment kisliye kitta? Anyways opar se inni...
Forum: Hindi/Urdu Lyrics 30th August 2011, 07:46 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 2,535
Posted By Ajnabi
Aankhon Ko Ankhon Ne...Junaid-Jamshed

Aankhon Ko Aankhon Nay Jo Sapna Dikhaaya Hai
Dekho Kahin Toot Jaye Na
Itnay Zamaanon Main Jo Laut Kar Aaya Hai
Phir Kahin Rooth Jaye Na

Chehray Tumharay Pay Jo Rang Hai Bahaar Ka
Pichli...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th August 2011, 07:42 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 3,574
Posted By Ajnabi
Ishk Paa G Nu Ajnabi Da Salam! Rajinder baii,...

Ishk Paa G Nu Ajnabi Da Salam!
Rajinder baii, ye todi gazzal menu bout mitthi lagi...hor main tehra khari khari bolan wala admi..khaas taur per apne yaaran or changay maanus k liye main sada tayyar...
Forum: Introduction Forum 30th August 2011, 07:30 PM
Replies: 243
Views: 32,571
Posted By Ajnabi
Thanks For YOur Answer G: And You Also...

Thanks For YOur Answer G:

And You Also Didnt read my inserted comment which I am pasting below... woh perhen aur apni tippani dein!
Originally Posted by Praneeta...
Forum: Celebrations 30th August 2011, 07:22 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,210
Posted By Ajnabi
Smile Eid Mobarak! Wishing All My Fellow Members...

Eid Mobarak!

Wishing All My Fellow Members A Very Happy Eid!

Enjoy G! :)
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