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Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 29th August 2017, 02:59 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 2,535
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Dhaval saahab aur Hassan saahab, taakheer keliye...

Dhaval saahab aur Hassan saahab, taakheer keliye muazrat chahunga.
Aapka bohot bohot shukriya iss be beh'r be wazan koshish ko bhi itna pasand kiyaa.
Aate rahiye.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th August 2017, 02:53 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 360
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Mashkoor huN jenab, aapki tehseen paa kar bohot...

Mashkoor huN jenab, aapki tehseen paa kar bohot masarrat huyii.
YuNhii hausla afzaayii karte rahiyegaa.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th August 2017, 02:51 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 360
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Nacheez ko itni izzat bakshne keliye tah-e-dil se...

Nacheez ko itni izzat bakshne keliye tah-e-dil se shukriyaa.
I'm humbled. Saath banaaye rakhiyegaa.
Duaa go.
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 29th August 2017, 02:46 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 469
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Kyaa baat huzoor ! As always, rock on. Bohot...

Kyaa baat huzoor !
As always, rock on. Bohot umdaah asha'ar huye haiN.
Bohot bohot mubarakbaad !
Likhte rahiye.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th August 2017, 12:47 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 360
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Post Kya Kya yeh barsaat bahaa kar nikli hai

sdc ki purkhuloos mehfil ko Sagar Aashna ka adaab !
Ek arse baad sdc pe aana hua hai.

KahiN par ek unwaan tha 'kya kya yeh barsaat bahaa kar nikli hai'. Uss par ek chhoti si koshish pesh kar raha...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th September 2016, 01:40 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 788
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Tehseen keliye behad shukriya. YuNhi sath...

Tehseen keliye behad shukriya.

YuNhi sath dete rahiyega.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th September 2016, 01:38 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 788
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Tah-e-dil se shukriya Madhu ji, hamesha ki tarah...

Tah-e-dil se shukriya Madhu ji, hamesha ki tarah saTh dene keliye.
Khush raheiN aur duaa bhi kareiN.

Regards
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th September 2016, 01:30 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 566
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Qasid sahab adaab ! Lajawaab likha hai aapne....

Qasid sahab adaab !
Lajawaab likha hai aapne. Behad khoosuarat peshkash. Likhte rahiye.
Forum: Ghazal Section 12th September 2016, 01:24 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 862
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Bohot baDhiya Mujeeb sahab. Dili daad qubuul...

Bohot baDhiya Mujeeb sahab. Dili daad qubuul farmaayeiN.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th September 2016, 01:20 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,032
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Wah.

Awesome.
Bohot baDhiya Madhu Ji. Har naye kalaam ke saTh nikhaar baDhta ja raha hai.
Likhte rahiye. Khush rahiye
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th August 2016, 03:08 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 788
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Raah miri wo takta hoga

Haazreen-e-mehfil ko mera pyar bhara adaab.
Ek muddat ke baad apni ek adna si koshish ke sath mehfil meiN shirkat kar raha huN, iss umeed ke sath ke aap dostoN ka pyaar aur sath bana rahega....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st October 2015, 01:22 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,204
Posted By Sagar Aashna
यूँ चले आओगे जो महफ़िल में.. किरकिरी माहताब की...

यूँ चले आओगे जो महफ़िल में..
किरकिरी माहताब की होगी..

है सिफर भी रेयाज़ी* का हिस्सा..
शायरी भी हिसाब की होगी..



Wah !
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st October 2015, 01:17 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 2,817
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Umdaah, bohot aala kalaam madhu ji... Hamesha ki...

Umdaah, bohot aala kalaam madhu ji... Hamesha ki tarah.

Baar baar paDha yeh kalaam maine aur har baar aur bhi zyaada tamanna huyi isko paDhne ki.

Likhte rahiye.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st October 2015, 12:46 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,034
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Muaziz qaar'yeen ko mera adaab ! Sab se...

Muaziz qaar'yeen ko mera adaab !

Sab se pehle maiN taakhiir keliye maazrat chaahuNga. Waqt ki qillat ke chalte aap se ruubaruu nahi ho paaya.
Aap dostoN ka itna achha response dekh kar yaqeenan...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th September 2015, 12:58 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,034
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Darkhaast baraaye tarmeem

Mast sahib, sab se pehle to bohot bohot shukriya iss qadar hausla afzaayi keliye. Yaqeen maaniye, aap jaise dost hausla afzaayi karte haiN to likhne ka mann bhi karta hai. Aur lagta hai hum shayari...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th September 2015, 12:00 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,034
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Smile Nawazish

:)


Aapki khoobsurat basaartoN ka kamaal hai mohtrama Madhu ji jo aapko iss qadar pasand aayi meri yeh koshish. MaiN aapka behad mashkoor-o-mamnoon huN.
Aap jaise qadardaanoN ki wajah se hee yeh...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 24th September 2015, 10:58 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 3,075
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Wah Sarika ji. Bohot baDhiya kalaam hua hai. ...

Wah Sarika ji.
Bohot baDhiya kalaam hua hai.
Daad qubuul farmeiN.
Aise he likhte rahiye.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 24th September 2015, 10:56 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,034
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Bohot bohot shukriya jenab. Yunhi saaTh dete...

Bohot bohot shukriya jenab.
Yunhi saaTh dete rahiye.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd September 2015, 11:26 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,034
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Daastaan-e-gHam kahi to

Haazreen-e-mehfil ko mera adaab !

dosto, pesh kar raha huuN beh'r meiN apni pehli koshish. Ummid hai aapko pasand aayegii. ismeiN islaaH ki zaruurat hai, isliye usaatza hazraat se darkhwast hai ke...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd September 2015, 11:00 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,480
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Kamaal ho gaya dii. MaiN aapke kalaam ka muntizar...

Kamaal ho gaya dii. MaiN aapke kalaam ka muntizar thaa aur darasal kehne bhi wala thaa ke aap aajkal likhte nahi haiN. Aapne likhaa, aur yun likha ke dhamaka huaa.

Bohot bohot mubarakbaad....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd September 2015, 10:57 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 608
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Bohot khuub jenab. Badae dino baad aapko...

Bohot khuub jenab.

Badae dino baad aapko paDha aaj, achha laga.

aate rahiye.
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 21st September 2015, 02:03 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 873
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Wah ! Bas wah wah hee nikal rahi hai iss ko...

Wah !

Bas wah wah hee nikal rahi hai iss ko paDh kar.

Bohot khuub. Daad qubuul kijiyega.

Likhte rahiye.
Forum: Ghazal Section 21st September 2015, 01:57 PM
Replies: 70
Views: 2,951
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Thumbs up wah ! Ek se baDh kar ek ghazal/nazam. Iss...

wah ! Ek se baDh kar ek ghazal/nazam.

Iss baar bohot competition hai aur achhi khaasi entries aayi huyi haiN. Mods ko aur sabhi participants ko bohot bohot mubarakbaad.

competition is very...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th September 2015, 04:47 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,392
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Saxena saHb ko nacheez ka adaab.. jenab...

Saxena saHb ko nacheez ka adaab..

jenab bohot alaa darje ka kalaam hua hai. dil se daad-o-mubarakbaad qubool farmaayeiN.

Regards
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th September 2015, 04:36 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 786
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Rajeev ji, bohot umdaah khayaal. Aise he likhte...

Rajeev ji, bohot umdaah khayaal.
Aise he likhte raheiN.
Khair andesh
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th September 2015, 04:35 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 760
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Wah ! Hazrat kamaal ka likha hai aapne. Bohot...

Wah !
Hazrat kamaal ka likha hai aapne. Bohot saari daad-o-mubarakbaad.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th September 2015, 07:48 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 998
Posted By Sagar Aashna
MaikasH sahib ko nacheez ka adaab ! ...

MaikasH sahib ko nacheez ka adaab !


Kamaal ki ghazal hai saahb.

yeh 13-14 saal puraani ho kar bhi itni maturity bhari hai, jawab nahi.

yeh teen asha'ar bohot khaas lage:

tuu rooTh gayaa...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 4th September 2015, 07:29 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,390
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Namaskar jenab Amanush/Danny sahib. Bohot...

Namaskar jenab Amanush/Danny sahib.
Bohot khuubsuurat nazm huyi hai.
Dil ko chhuu gayi.

Aap humare kaafi tajurbakaar aur varishth member haiN lekin aajkal aap kam dikhte haiN sdc pe. Iltijaah...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 4th September 2015, 07:22 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,201
Posted By Sagar Aashna
radhe radhe Ishk ji. Ati sundar varnan kiya...

radhe radhe Ishk ji.

Ati sundar varnan kiya hai aapne kaanha keliye gopiyoN ke prem ka.

Mantramugd kar dene wala.

Bohot khuub.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th September 2015, 07:19 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,701
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Lajawaab. Bohot baDhiya ghazal huyii hai...

Lajawaab.

Bohot baDhiya ghazal huyii hai jenab.

yuNhi samaa bandhte rahiye mehfil meN har baar.

khair andesh
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th September 2015, 07:15 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 341
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Bohot achha likha hai. Likhte rahiye.

Bohot achha likha hai.
Likhte rahiye.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st September 2015, 02:03 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,176
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Radhe Radhe Rajender sahib. Aapka bohot...

Radhe Radhe Rajender sahib.

Aapka bohot bohot shukriya ke aapne isko paDha aur aapko achha bhi laga.

Aate rahiye.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st September 2015, 02:00 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,176
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Sab se pehle takheer keliye muazrat chahunga...

Sab se pehle takheer keliye muazrat chahunga Mehra sahib.
Aur aapki aamad se mera likhna safal ho gaya, aisa maiN maanta huN.

Tehseen keliye bohot bohot shukriya.

Apna aashirwaad hamesha mere...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 1st September 2015, 01:55 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,557
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Nawazish keliye shukriya Sarika ji. Itna...

Nawazish keliye shukriya Sarika ji.

Itna achha to nahi likha hai par aapko achha laga, ye meri khushnaseebi.
Aate rahiye.

satTh dene keliye ek baar phir se shukriya.
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 1st September 2015, 01:50 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,557
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Bohot bohot Shukriyaa bhai. Aap saaTh dete...

Bohot bohot Shukriyaa bhai.

Aap saaTh dete raheN, koshish rahegii k likhte raheN.
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 1st September 2015, 01:46 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,261
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Bohot khuubsuurat ghazal .. Likhte rahiye.

Bohot khuubsuurat ghazal ..

Likhte rahiye.
Forum: Ghazal Section 1st September 2015, 01:40 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 2,726
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Mubarak ho !

Mubarak, mubarak, mubarak, mubarak..

dheroN mubarakbaad Sarika ji. Bohot he khuubsuurat likha hai aapne.
TPT forum aapka huaa..

Aapne to qabzaa kar liya iss par ;)

Khuda kare zor-e-qalam...
Forum: Ghazal Section 28th August 2015, 02:21 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 2,726
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Sabhi participants ne qaabil-e-tareef likha hai....

Sabhi participants ne qaabil-e-tareef likha hai. Itna achha ke kis ko vote kareiN aur kis ko nahi, kehna mushkil hai. sab ko mubarakbaad.
Mods ko bhi bohot bohot mubarakbaad jo itni mehnat kar rahe...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd July 2015, 01:22 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,176
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Khaak ilfaaz ko bhi itni tehseen ataa karte haiN...

Khaak ilfaaz ko bhi itni tehseen ataa karte haiN jenab aap.

Aapki iss baat keliye aapko dil se shukriyaa.

Isi tarah hausla baDhaate rahiye jenab, to shaayad kalam ko kuchh quwwat mil jaaye aur...
Forum: Shayri-e-Mashahoor Shayar 23rd July 2015, 01:15 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 613
Posted By Sagar Aashna
Waah... Kyaa baat ! Bohot achha laga paRh...

Waah... Kyaa baat !

Bohot achha laga paRh kar.

Thanks for sharing Dhaval ji.
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