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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd July 2003, 09:47 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,432
Posted By SMAH
phir milen

2-1-2 2-2-2 1-2-1 2-1-2
Faa-I faa-lun faa-lun fa-U-lu U-lun Fa

Phir milen to hum unka haal pucchenge
Dil mai jo bhi hoN wo sawaal puuchenge

Haal-e-dil hai ke khud bataaye naa bane...
Forum: Quotable Quotes 2nd July 2003, 01:18 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 898
Posted By SMAH
hiiii

no pain without gain

i mean no gain without pain

the extra mile is never crowded
Forum: Inspiring Stories 2nd July 2003, 01:03 AM
Replies: 28
Views: 3,684
Posted By SMAH
kavita ji waha i feel sorrier for the...

kavita ji
waha

i feel sorrier for the girl. now that she has to live in that pain.

smah
Forum: General Stories 2nd July 2003, 12:58 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,306
Posted By SMAH
post your story in two different segments or...

post your story in two different segments or threads. then it wont be too long. divide it up into as many as it takes.

i dont want to buy winzip. hope you know what i m saying.

smah
Forum: Aapki Shayri 2nd July 2003, 12:54 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,140
Posted By SMAH
phir mileN to

2-1-2 2-2-2 1-2-1 2-1-2
Faa-I faa-lun faa-lun fa-U-lu U-lun Fa

Phir milen to hum unka haal pucchenge
Dil mai jo bhi hoN wo sawaal puuchenge

Haal-e-dil hai ke khud bataaye naa bane...
Forum: Ghazal Section 2nd July 2003, 12:52 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,248
Posted By SMAH
phir mileN to

2-1-2 2-2-2 1-2-1 2-1-2
Faa-I faa-lun faa-lun fa-U-lu U-lun Fa

Phir milen to hum unka haal pucchenge
Dil mai jo bhi hoN wo sawaal puuchenge

Haal-e-dil hai ke khud bataaye naa bane...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd June 2003, 12:13 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 844
Posted By SMAH
Varinder sahab bohut shukriya housla afzai...

Varinder sahab

bohut shukriya housla afzai ka. Jo mujhe theek laga likhdiya aapko pasand aayi to mujhe badhi khushi huii.

moin hussain
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd June 2003, 11:50 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 844
Posted By SMAH
Priya sahi kaha tumne Agar woh sab jaante...

Priya sahi kaha tumne

Agar woh sab jaante aur samajhtey to kuch aur hi baat hoti.

Maine yeh lafz to likhdaale lekin humesha kisee cheez ka wahi maana ho zaroori to nahi.

smah
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd June 2003, 11:32 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 844
Posted By SMAH
sanam sahiba Ghazal pasand farmaane ka bohut...

sanam sahiba

Ghazal pasand farmaane ka bohut bohut shukria.

waise naam to aapko sahee milaa. Pataa kaise chalaa?

housla afzaai ka bohut shukria.

syed moin al hussain (smah)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 21st June 2003, 09:38 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,196
Posted By SMAH
accha likha hai, par ye kya baat huii ke jo dunya...

accha likha hai, par ye kya baat huii ke jo dunya mai koii apka deewaana nahi to aap jeena nahi chaahti. just kiddin. i get what you are saying.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 21st June 2003, 09:34 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 844
Posted By SMAH
Kabhi teri tasveer jalaa doon

bohut dinon baad ek peshkash liye aap sab ke khidmat mai aaya hoon, ummeed hai pasand aayegi



Ab to tu laut aaja ke tujh bin viiraan hai
Bas tera khayaal har dam baaqi anjaan hai

Tujh bin...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 21st June 2003, 09:26 PM
Replies: 101
Views: 139,606
Posted By SMAH
This has always been a confusing task for me....

This has always been a confusing task for me. Putting baher in ghazals for me has actually been impossible.
I wanted to ask you a question. Where can I find the 36 bahers and how do you make your...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 21st June 2003, 09:22 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 983
Posted By SMAH
Smile well I dont know if friendship is the best...

well I dont know if friendship is the best relation buddy. :) :) :) :)

i liked your four lines. kaafi kuch seekh hai aapne.

smah
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 21st June 2003, 09:11 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,372
Posted By SMAH
bohut khoob simple hai lekin bohut...

bohut khoob

simple hai lekin bohut khoobsuurat.

smah
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 21st June 2003, 09:05 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 785
Posted By SMAH
Red face kabhi teri tasveer jalaa doon

Dostoon bohut dinon baad kuch post kar raha hoon.
Ummeed hai pasand aayegi.


Ab to tu laut aaja ke tujh bin viiraan hai
Bas tera khayaal har dam baaqi anjaan hai

Tujh bin har shay bekaar...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 23rd February 2003, 12:34 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 834
Posted By SMAH
there is nothing, more precious then your smile

i have tried some english. tell me how it sounds. i know it stinks.


There is nothing, more precious then your smile.
But I realize that I have to live without it for a while.

So much I would...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 15th February 2003, 02:36 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,304
Posted By SMAH
taj mahal bhi patthar hee hai. hahah enough...

taj mahal bhi patthar hee hai. hahah

enough of that. khoob likha hai aapne. likhte rahiye.

moin hussain
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 15th February 2003, 02:32 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 853
Posted By SMAH
if u want good shayars then here u go: ghalib,...

if u want good shayars then here u go: ghalib, mir, ahmed faraz, badr, badayuni, qateel shifai, and so many otheres.
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 15th February 2003, 02:30 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 853
Posted By SMAH
well if you want to go and find some shers or...

well if you want to go and find some shers or poetry you can always do it on some search engine but some good websites are urdupoetry.com and mushaira.org. there are thousands of other sites that u...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 15th February 2003, 02:26 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,138
Posted By SMAH
thank u so much anas sahab. thanks for...

thank u so much anas sahab.

thanks for replying and all the respect and tareef. well i am glad that i accomplished what i wanted to accomplish. and that is maintaining some sort of flow. well in...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 14th February 2003, 08:44 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,138
Posted By SMAH
ok someone has to post something and tell me how...

ok someone has to post something and tell me how this is. its not fair come on.

moin
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 11th February 2003, 07:09 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,115
Posted By SMAH
zeba ji muaf keejiye. sorry i couldnt live...

zeba ji

muaf keejiye. sorry i couldnt live upto expectations.
i will try harder next time. i was trying to get a thought through but i guess the thought wasnt very clear behind these sill...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th February 2003, 07:03 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,193
Posted By SMAH
chaand sahab deep thought and good structure...

chaand sahab

deep thought and good structure bolster your poem to high ranks

moin hussain
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th February 2003, 06:59 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,078
Posted By SMAH
teri kaali ghata jaisi zulfain kabhi meri dil ki...

teri kaali ghata jaisi zulfain kabhi meri dil ki chaon thi

yeh line acchi lagee. bohut accha start kiya hai aapne poem ko magar mere khayaal se end mai thodee jaldi mai ya impatience se kaam liya...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th February 2003, 06:53 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 909
Posted By SMAH
khoob likha hai sidh sahab aapne kaafi...

khoob likha hai sidh sahab aapne

kaafi postein nazar aayeen aapki.
sab padhne ka to mouqa kabhi nahi milega par shuruaat karli hai. kaafi dilchasp sawaal poocha hai aapne. shaayad dilchasp islye...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 11th February 2003, 06:16 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,047
Posted By SMAH
aadaab kya haal hai. bohut accha likha...

aadaab

kya haal hai.

bohut accha likha hai aapne.
zyaada likha karen, hume padhne ka mouqa milega.

moin
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 11th February 2003, 06:15 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 642
Posted By SMAH
please ignore this post. for som reason i cant...

please ignore this post. for som reason i cant seem to delete it either.

smah
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 11th February 2003, 06:12 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 642
Posted By SMAH
reply

aadaab sahab

kya haal hai. ummeed hai khush haal honge

pehli baar aapse muqataib huaa hoon. ummeed hai acchi rahegi
bohut khoob likha hai aapne aur zyaada likha keejiye.

moin
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 10th February 2003, 05:39 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,115
Posted By SMAH
mushkil baat hai, samjhaye koii

mushkil baat hai, samjhaye koii
dil mai raaz hoN to bataaye koii
aise andheroo mai hume na rakhna
roushni ki jhalak dikhaaye koii
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 10th February 2003, 05:36 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,138
Posted By SMAH
tasavvur hai uska

hi guys how you all doin.
well this is my first time writing a nazm so please tell me how you feel or else i will never know.

tasavvur hai uska,
aur intizaar bhi!
wo jaan hai meri,
aur jaan e...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 26th January 2003, 08:13 PM
Replies: 2
dil
Views: 814
Posted By SMAH
good job sahee farmaya aapne. ishq milna to...

good job
sahee farmaya aapne. ishq milna to mushkil hai saccha ishq jaise namumkin.

lihte rahiye.
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 24th January 2003, 07:20 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,817
Posted By SMAH
heer aur ranjha you guys are heading off the...

heer aur ranjha you guys are heading off the right way.
bas ek dar hai ke zindagi ki raahein to waise hi mushkil hain magar pyaar ke dakhl lene se aur bhi mushkil ho jaati hain. bas bohut hoshyaar...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 24th January 2003, 06:59 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,467
Posted By SMAH
good job. when you actually think about it its...

good job. when you actually think about it its really deep.

moin hussain
Forum: Aapki Shayri 12th January 2003, 09:47 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,118
Posted By SMAH
assalaam adil sahab kya haal hai. acchi...

assalaam adil sahab
kya haal hai.

acchi ghazal likhi hai aapne. sharaabi sahab ne bhi bohut acche observations kiye hain relating to the structure of the shers which in a way was very wise...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 12th January 2003, 09:09 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,817
Posted By SMAH
doubt to koii nahi par taajub zarror hai ke koi...

doubt to koii nahi par taajub zarror hai ke koi itnee aasaani se jo sooche kaise kehde.
impressive


moin
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 5th January 2003, 12:03 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,817
Posted By SMAH
dangggg r these poems that you post...

dangggg

r these poems that you post everytime r they all urs.

moin
Forum: Aapki Shayri 5th January 2003, 02:39 AM
Replies: 4
Poll: koshish
Views: 979
Posted By SMAH
reply

romance ji

bohut shukriya.
mai aur bada shaayar to hargiz nahi hoon. abhi bohut saal hain bade shaayar ke aas paas bhi pohanchne ke liye.
shukriya

moin hussain
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 3rd January 2003, 12:46 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 750
Posted By SMAH
phirse aman sahab bohut shukriay

phirse aman sahab bohut shukriay
Forum: Aapki Shayri 3rd January 2003, 12:38 PM
Replies: 4
Poll: koshish
Views: 979
Posted By SMAH
aadaab sharaabi sahab shouq sharaabi kuch...

aadaab sharaabi sahab

shouq sharaabi kuch milte julte hain humaare(joke).

aapki housla afzai ka bohut shukriya. mai bohut shukr guzar hoon aapka.
aapne mere sher padhne aur samajhne ka waqt...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd January 2003, 12:21 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 585
Posted By SMAH
ghazal

hi everyone
aaj phirse kuch pesh e khidmat e haaziraan hai.
ummeed hai pasand aayegi.

behr : faailaatun faailun faailaatun faailun

maqsad-e-hastii-e-faanii na haasil kar sakaa
justajuu e...
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