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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th December 2003, 06:27 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,710
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Love Tere Naam-3

Hi friend
dil ne fie ek baar kuch likhna chahe so likh diya
shayad unki bhi shikayat door ho jaye jo yehe kehet hain humne unheine bhola diya hai.........


"tu hi bata kisse se kahon...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 8th December 2003, 08:59 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,037
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Nazakat

Hi doston
Bahot waqt ke baad kuch likh raha hoon.kissi ne mujhe se uski importance poochi meri life meine ,meine kuch aur to na bol saaka bus yehe 2 lines bol di .....Meine nahin janta kiska sher...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 4th September 2003, 04:40 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 868
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Hello meetu ji Bahot hi khoob likha hai...

Hello meetu ji
Bahot hi khoob likha hai aapne.jitni bhi tarif ki haye kam hai.

"janeey yeh nadaan-dil is mehfil mein,
terey honey ka ehsas dhundtaa hai!"

kya baat hai.Humeine bhi batane ka...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 22nd August 2003, 02:55 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,329
Posted By Aam_aadmi
thanx meetu jee ,yehe to pata nahin yehe bhari...

thanx meetu jee ,yehe to pata nahin yehe bhari hai ya halka but jo bhi hai Direct Dil se hai......Ek sher suna tha bahot pehele yahan likh raha hoon ..........

"Armann to itne rakhte hain ,ki har...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 21st August 2003, 09:59 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,329
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Shimul jee yehe to humeine khud bhi nahin pata...

Shimul jee yehe to humeine khud bhi nahin pata .......Pata hoga to jaroor bataoonga ....
Cruiser jee aapki yehe line bahot hi umda hai ,likhte raheyega.........
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 20th August 2003, 05:23 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,329
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Post meetu jee yehe bhi bahot khoobsurat hai ...par...

meetu jee yehe bhi bahot khoobsurat hai ...par ise ishq meine bewafyee bahot hai..........Kuch lines llikjhin hain ,gaur farmayega....

"Khwaiish to yehe bhi hain ke hum unke noor-e-nazar hoon
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 19th August 2003, 10:34 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 953
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Hi dostoon thanks Kshitiz and shimul for such...

Hi dostoon
thanks Kshitiz and shimul for such encouraging words....But aap jaisa to meine shayad hi kabhi ikh paoon ...apki har rachna apne meine khaas hoti hai...likhte raheyega.
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 18th August 2003, 11:21 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 953
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Thanks meetu jee for your beautiful reply.But...

Thanks meetu jee for your beautiful reply.But meine kya karoon meine itna optimist hoon ki mujhe aasroon pe bhi vishwaas hai......duniya Vishawaas pe hi to chal rahi hai warna to kuch bhi ho sakta...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 18th August 2003, 11:13 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 953
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Love Tere Naam 2

Kya karoon dostoon unki yaadeine peecha nahin chodti aur ek khuda ka aasra hai ..........Woh kehti hain assre na bana aye dil aasre chott jaate hain....par kya kareine aasre aur dostoon ke bina...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 14th August 2003, 11:08 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,716
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Bahot hi gheri baat kehe gaye aap jassuj. Ki...

Bahot hi gheri baat kehe gaye aap jassuj.
Ki tanhayee meine yaad aaye unki bewafayee.
Likhte raheyega..
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 11th August 2003, 02:34 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 968
Posted By Aam_aadmi
thanks shimul for the appreciation...........

thanks shimul for the appreciation...........
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 11th August 2003, 02:31 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 786
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Love "Humeine apne khyaloon se tumne ek pal ke liye...

"Humeine apne khyaloon se tumne ek pal ke liye juda kiya
Khuda ki ksam aisa laga fir jindagi ne dhoka diya
Saanse atak gayee thi ,ruh chal hi padi thi
tabhi tumhari yaad aaye,aur Dhadkanoon ne...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 11th August 2003, 11:22 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 968
Posted By Aam_aadmi
tere naam-2

Aankh se aa tapke mere ansoon kuch yoon ahista ahista
Fir Dard unke chubha gaya khanjar kuch yoon ahista ashista
jee raheine hain intezaar meine unke hum kuch yoon ahista ahista
Maut bhi humko...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th August 2003, 10:03 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 866
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Wajood kabhi Juda nahin hota.Jisse se pyaar kiya...

Wajood kabhi Juda nahin hota.Jisse se pyaar kiya wohi wajood ho gaya
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 8th August 2003, 06:15 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 968
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Shimul jee aap kuch jyaada hi pareshaan lag rahin...

Shimul jee aap kuch jyaada hi pareshaan lag rahin hain .Pehele aap yehe batyee ke aap mujhe address kar rahi hain ya aviral jee ko
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 8th August 2003, 03:30 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 968
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Shimul jee ...........Agar woh bewakoof hoti to...

Shimul jee ...........Agar woh bewakoof hoti to bahot hi pehele haan kar deti..........Waise woh samjhdaar hain tabhi to ise tarah se izhaar kiya hai.............aage khuda ki marzi
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 7th August 2003, 11:50 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 968
Posted By Aam_aadmi
sukhriya aviral jee...........Hum bhi une se...

sukhriya aviral jee...........Hum bhi une se yehi umeed rakhte hain...........Waise aap bhi kafi achcha likhteine hain .App ke hi kalam se leke 2 line yahan paisah kar raha hoon..

is...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 7th August 2003, 09:49 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 968
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Love Tere Naam

Hi dostoon
kissi ke liye choti choti do line likh raha hoon.Aur shayad use pata hai .............Dekheine use aehsaas hota hai ya nahin ..........

Justjoo jo kee khuda se ,Khuda ne humeine woh...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 6th August 2003, 05:40 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 3,571
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Post Dosti aur Sharab

dostoon ike aur kalam hazir hai ......
yehe Une logoon ke liye hain Jo meri tarah sharab aur dostoon ke bina jee nahin sakte aur nahi jeena chahte hain...........

"Aaqibat yehe hoga mere hosh...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 6th August 2003, 05:14 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,393
Posted By Aam_aadmi
shimul jee aap bahot achchi insaan hain...yehe...

shimul jee aap bahot achchi insaan hain...yehe aapki batoon se pata chal raha hai ,warna aaj apnoon ki koi madad nahin karta aapto mujhe jaise ek anjaan aadmi ki help karne ke liye tyaar...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 6th August 2003, 11:34 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,655
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Bahot khoob kya baat hai Manoj jee.....jitni bhi...

Bahot khoob kya baat hai Manoj jee.....jitni bhi tariff ki jaye kam hai .............Yehe do line aapke hi sher se Fir dohra raha hoon

"jaane kyaa tuutaa hai paimaanaa ki dil hai meraa
bikhare...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 6th August 2003, 11:26 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 6,345
Posted By Aam_aadmi
bahot khoob Nazzy jee,Bilkul sahi baat ki hai...

bahot khoob Nazzy jee,Bilkul sahi baat ki hai ..............
fir se ek baar woh sher dohrane kaa jee kar raha hai .Gaur farmayega..........


"aksar Hum nasheine meine hotein hain ,aur raat...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 6th August 2003, 11:18 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,393
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Thanks dostoon for you wonderful reply ...... ...

Thanks dostoon for you wonderful reply ......

Shimul jee aapke sawal pe to meine yeh kehna chaoonga

"Himmat agar hoti hum meine unheine Dard -e dil dekhane ki
Kasam se kabhi bhi shakal na...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 5th August 2003, 10:31 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,393
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Post sharabi nahin tha meine-2

Hi dostoon ,ek baar fir kuch likha hai ,aasha karta hoon ki aap logoon ko pasand aayegi....

Rakhte the hum bhi janab Dil deewane ka
Dil humara bhi karta tha kabhi kuch Gun-gunane ka

Ek baar...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 4th August 2003, 10:46 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 2,437
Posted By Aam_aadmi
hi Dard-e-sush sahab Welcome to this Mehfil. ...

hi Dard-e-sush sahab
Welcome to this Mehfil.
But yehe line kuch padi huyee hain ,ise form pe ek sher hai.Poora sher kuch ise tarah hai ....

Jab Nikala Mera Janaazaa To ek baat yaad aa gayi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 1st August 2003, 07:07 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,117
Posted By Aam_aadmi
sharabi nahin tha meine

Dostoon Ishq ki fitrat ke baare meine kya kahyee,kahin yaar bewafa hai aur kahin kismat.apna to donno pe hi bus nahin chalta hai ...so kuch lines hain gaur farmayee.....
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st August 2003, 04:37 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 866
Posted By Aam_aadmi
hi Friends Just the previous one in hindi ;;;;;; ...

hi Friends Just the previous one in hindi ;;;;;;
आरज़ू थी क़ुछ ०कुछ और हो ग़या
जागतॆ रहॆ हम़०ओर यह वख़्त सौ गया
लब पॆ उऩ्के मॆरा ज़िक्ऱ तक ऩ आया
दॊस्त मिळ गए उऩ्हॆं बहुत०मॆरा वजूद तक खौ गया।
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st August 2003, 04:22 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 866
Posted By Aam_aadmi
आरज़ू थी क़ुछ ०कुछ और हो ग़या "Arzoo thi kuch...

आरज़ू थी क़ुछ ०कुछ और हो ग़या
"Arzoo thi kuch ,kuch aur ho gaya
Jagte rahe hum,aur yehe waqt so gaya

Laboon pe unke mera Jikr tak na aaya
Dost mil gaye unhein bahot,mera wajood tak kho gaya"
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st August 2003, 11:38 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 866
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Thanks meetu!!waisey yehe pata hota ki yehe Dil...

Thanks meetu!!waisey yehe pata hota ki yehe Dil kya dhoond raha hai to har insaan sukhi hota.
Sab yahan Dil ke hathoon hi majboor hain
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st July 2003, 02:57 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 866
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Post Tanhayeeiaan

Sair-e-hasti meri rehe gayee ghar se maikade tak
khushiyaan mere sath itna bhi chalna nahin chahti

huye bahot humare habeeb,Abhi ise kismat ki sham tak
tanhayeiaan humeine phir bhi tanha...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th July 2003, 10:34 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,723
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Hey come on Kshitiz sahab ,abe aap mujhe sorry...

Hey come on Kshitiz sahab ,abe aap mujhe sorry kehe ke sharminda kar raheine hain,are mehfil aise hi banti hain aur sher aise hi ubharte hain.....Are isi sawal aur jawab ke darmiyaan dekho humne...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th July 2003, 10:08 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,399
Posted By Aam_aadmi
kya baat hai Kshitiz sahab ,bahot khoob farmaya ...

kya baat hai Kshitiz sahab ,bahot khoob farmaya

"ban gaye hum talabgar unke
jo hain dard de kar khushi pane wale.............."

Aapne Jindagi aur mohabbat bahot pass se dekhi huyee lagti...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th July 2003, 11:15 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 640
Posted By Aam_aadmi
chand sheron mein kahan dhalti hai ehasaas ki aag...

chand sheron mein kahan dhalti hai ehasaas ki aag
Ghum kaa ye rang nikharana to abhi baaqi hai

Kya baat hai hafeez sahab ,bhai kayal ho gaye hum ine shabdoon ke......Bahot hi umda sher hai...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th July 2003, 10:17 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,723
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Thats beautiful lines meetu ...no more replies ...

Thats beautiful lines meetu ...no more replies
will treasure them....:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th July 2003, 09:56 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,723
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Mr. Kshitiz and madhegum....you replies were...

Mr. Kshitiz and madhegum....you replies were excellent.I think I am not a good shayar like you both ..just an amateur one..But will try to learn from you
.......Thanks and keep the spirit of this...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th July 2003, 02:11 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,723
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Meetu jee bahot hi badiya likha hai aapne Par...

Meetu jee bahot hi badiya likha hai aapne
Par kuch meine bhi likhna chaoonga iske jawab meine

"Rakhte hain hum ehsaas bhi pyaar ka
Aitbaar hai unke ise iqrar pe bhi
Par kambhakht ise dil...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th July 2003, 12:47 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,723
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Door bahot hain woh ,par pass hone ka ehsaas...

Door bahot hain woh ,par pass hone ka ehsaas dilate hain
Pyaar chupp chupp ke karte hain,laboon pe kuch na late hain
Taa jindagi ise baat ke intezaar meine guzaar doonga
Ek baar to kaheine...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd July 2003, 03:31 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,723
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Dil jab kiska Udaas ho Kissi ki yaad tak na...

Dil jab kiska Udaas ho
Kissi ki yaad tak na pass ho
Jindagi se door jaane ko Dil karta hai
Na jaane kyoon
Forum: English Poetry 14th July 2003, 10:59 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 695
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Love Hi Meetu These Lines I don't know how I will...

Hi Meetu
These Lines I don't know how I will treasure them,but these are the sweetest one I have Ever got from anybody in my life.
These lines are invaluable in the sense that they are staright...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 12th July 2003, 12:56 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,436
Posted By Aam_aadmi
Tariff ke liye sukhriya manoj jee. Lekin meine...

Tariff ke liye sukhriya manoj jee.
Lekin meine ek aam aadmi hi rehena chahta hoon.Tabhi jindagi ko pass se dekhene ka jyaada moka milta hai .
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