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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th July 2004, 06:20 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 4,190
Posted By aap_ka_dost
Ek patThar ko yuuN Khuda karke Kya milaa aisa...

Ek patThar ko yuuN Khuda karke
Kya milaa aisa tajarba karke

Dard baRhta gaya davaa karke
Lmaha-lamha, zara-zara karke

Ban gayii baddua Khushi wo hi
Jis ko maanga kiye dua karke
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th July 2004, 01:25 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 5,790
Posted By aap_ka_dost
jaf sahab aap ki rachna pasand aayi yaha...

jaf sahab

aap ki rachna pasand aayi
yaha bannte to sab shayar hain, par koi achha nahi likta hain, koi kahi se churata hain to koi kahi se,
koi pakistani shayaro ki shayari apne naam se...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd November 2003, 11:25 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,645
Posted By aap_ka_dost
Doston Likhna sirf likhna nahi hota hai. Insaan...

Doston Likhna sirf likhna nahi hota hai. Insaan Kabhi kabhi jo baatein kah nahi paata hai wo kalam ki zubani bayaan kar deta hai.

Meri aadaton main taareef karna kabhi shumaar na raha magar KHUDA...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th October 2003, 10:14 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 2,866
Posted By aap_ka_dost
Damn hain aap ki soch main paheli entry...

Damn hain aap ki soch main
paheli entry english main wo bhi kamaal ki
waise achha likha hai
modern poet nahi tume to modern ghalib hona chahiye
aap ka dost
aaya tha kshitiz ki request pe par...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 20th August 2003, 05:57 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,942
Posted By aap_ka_dost
bahot achha lika hai cool man aaise hi...

bahot achha lika hai
cool man
aaise hi likte raho
aap ka dost
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th June 2003, 03:42 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 880
Posted By aap_ka_dost
sab chor ho aap log ye bhi churai hui hai ...

sab chor ho aap log
ye bhi churai hui hai
mohammad hasan jafri ki hai
kitaab ka naam hai
daastane tasawwur
jafri share karne se aap ki ye kaha se ho gaye
aap to hasan ho na
naam same...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th June 2003, 03:11 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 471
Posted By aap_ka_dost
Mafhume-nazdo-mahmilo-laila maan gaye aap...

Mafhume-nazdo-mahmilo-laila

maan gaye aap ko kya khoob farsi ka istemaal kiya hai aap ne
in alfaaz se hame mirza galib ke sher yaad aa gaya
deewan-e-galib se inspired hai aap ki

wasie...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 9th June 2003, 06:04 PM
Replies: 101
Views: 120,310
Posted By aap_ka_dost
koshiish achhi ki hai aap ne ghazal or shayari...

koshiish achhi ki hai aap ne ghazal or shayari main use hone wale technical alfaazo ki
waise kuch cheeze aap bhi galat likh gaye ho
n kuch miss kar gaye ho
aap ka dost
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th June 2003, 05:59 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 573
Posted By aap_ka_dost
achha likha hai aap ne bas ye alfaaz badle...

achha likha hai aap ne
bas ye alfaaz badle gaye hain is kalaam main
warna kisi or ka kah deta
alfaaz badal ke aap ne credit le liya
aap ka dost
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th June 2003, 05:57 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 880
Posted By aap_ka_dost
1 se bad kar 1 kalaam hai aap ke maan gaye...

1 se bad kar 1 kalaam hai aap ke
maan gaye sahaab aap se achha shayer to maine deakha nahi hai
aap ka to main mureed bann gaya hoon
aap ka dost
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th June 2003, 05:55 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 645
Posted By aap_ka_dost
waah kya umndaa kalaam kaha hai aap ne dil...

waah kya umndaa kalaam kaha hai aap ne
dil karta hain choom loon aap ke kalam ko jisse aap ne itna behtar kalaam likha hai
aap ka fan
aap ka dost
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th June 2003, 05:53 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,446
Posted By aap_ka_dost
bahot hi achhi tasveer banai hai pani ki aap ne ...

bahot hi achhi tasveer banai hai pani ki aap ne
maan gaye
aap jaisa shayar to bahot muhkil se hota hai
hum pakistani hai
aap aap ka dost
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