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Forum: Ghazal Section 20th May 2013, 11:24 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,095
Posted By Feroz
achi ghazal kahin hai ghayal sahab. mubaarak...

achi ghazal kahin hai ghayal sahab.

mubaarak ho .

Feroz
Forum: Ghazal Section 18th May 2013, 11:42 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 872
Posted By Feroz
doori nahin hai theek makeen - o- makaan mein

dosto,

ek arsaa e daraaz ke baad ek ghazal pesh kar rahaa hoon, qubool farmaayein. yeh jald hee aani waali meri kitaab "feroz" mein se hai.



doori nahin hai theek makeen - o- makaan mein...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 7th May 2013, 02:37 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 920
Posted By Feroz
Dhaval Sahab, namaste izzat afzaayi ke liye...

Dhaval Sahab, namaste

izzat afzaayi ke liye aap ka mashkoor hoon, main to yahaan aana tark kar chuka thaa lekin maikash, jo mere bhaiyon jaise hain, ke israar par mainey phir se yahan aana shuru...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 6th May 2013, 11:26 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 920
Posted By Feroz
doori nahin hai theek makeen - o- makaan mein

dosto,

ek arsaa e daraaz ke baad ek ghazal pesh kar rahaa hoon, qubool farmaayein. yeh jald hee aani waali meri kitaab "feroz" mein se hai.



doori nahin hai theek makeen - o- makaan mein...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 6th May 2013, 11:10 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,503
Posted By Feroz
adaab aap ki ghazal padhi, bahut achi lagi....

adaab

aap ki ghazal padhi, bahut achi lagi. alfaaz kee khoobsurti ke saath saath khyaalaat kee pukhtagi par daal qubool karein.

Feroz
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th April 2013, 05:33 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,343
Posted By Feroz
maikash bhai, bahut khoob. aap kee is ghazal...

maikash bhai,

bahut khoob. aap kee is ghazal mein riwayati rang bakhoobi nazar aata hai, aur wo aap ki pahchaan hai. tamaam ashar khoob lagey.
aaj dil khol kar pilaa saaqi
kal kareNge hisaab ki...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 26th April 2013, 05:23 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,514
Posted By Feroz
ghazal to achi hai , lekin ye aap ne hamaari...

ghazal to achi hai , lekin ye aap ne hamaari sama'aton ko buzurg kah kar ...
khair.. aap jis narmi se ghazal kee tamheed baandtey hain, us key baad tanqeed kee gunjaaish kam hee rah jati hai..
...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 26th April 2013, 05:17 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,638
Posted By Feroz
kaat kar wo hamaare par bole | jaao parwaaz ki...

kaat kar wo hamaare par bole |
jaao parwaaz ki ijazat hai ||

Teg hai maiN hooN meri gardan hai |
ek bus aap ki zaroorat hai ||

Very nice..

Feroz
Forum: Aapki Shayri 26th April 2013, 05:14 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,516
Posted By Feroz
Janab Jawed Sahab bahut khoobsurat...

Janab Jawed Sahab


bahut khoobsurat khyaalat hain,

Feroz
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd April 2013, 06:11 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,147
Posted By Feroz
dosto, aaj ek arsaa e daraaz ke baad idhar...

dosto,

aaj ek arsaa e daraaz ke baad idhar se guzar hua.

Maikash bhai, adaab arz hai.

khud apni ghazal dekh kar thori hairaan hui, lekin baharhaal, hausla afzai ke liye mashkoor hoon.
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd April 2013, 06:05 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,576
Posted By Feroz
Neetu Bala ji mukhtsar bahar mein sher kahna...

Neetu Bala ji

mukhtsar bahar mein sher kahna kaafi mushkil hota hai. koshish ke liye aap shabash kee haqdaar hain.

Feroz
Forum: Aapki Shayri 25th May 2008, 04:03 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 2,357
Posted By Feroz
pahli baar aap ka kalaam padh raha hoon.. acha...

pahli baar aap ka kalaam padh raha hoon..
acha laga... bahut khoob

Feroz
Forum: Aapki Shayri 25th May 2008, 04:01 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 2,222
Posted By Feroz
dhalegee shayari mein ....

dosto, aap mein se zyadatar log mujh ko nahin jaantey hongey, is site par barson pahley aaya karta thaa, shaayed mere azeez dost 'maikash' aaj bhii yahan par aatey hongey... khair.. "idhar se guzraa...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 18th October 2002, 07:49 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 844
Posted By Feroz
zara suniye shukria aap kaa kii aap ne...

zara suniye
shukria aap kaa
kii aap ne yahaaN aa kar merii ghazal ko paDhney par waqt sarf kiiyaa aur phir hauslaa afzaai bhii kii .. ye ghazal itnii jaldii ban gayii ki maiN khud hairaan huuN....
Forum: Aapki Shayri 13th October 2002, 07:31 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 665
Posted By Feroz
lubna sahabaa aadaab aaj aap kii ghazal...

lubna sahabaa
aadaab

aaj aap kii ghazal pahlii dafaa paDhnaa nasiib huii hai.. aur maiN is bazm meiN aap kaa isteqbaal kartaa huN..
aap kii ghazal bahut pasaNd aayii.. zaahir hai ki aap kucch...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 10th October 2002, 10:53 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 844
Posted By Feroz
teraa dar ho - ek taazaa ghazal

dosto

Sept 28 ko kahii ek ghazal haazir hai.. mere khyaal se mainey itnii muKhtsar bahr meiN pahley kabhii ghazal nahiiN kahii.. mulaahizaa ho

teraa dar ho
meraa sar ho

noor ho aisaa ...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 27th September 2002, 08:05 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 880
Posted By Feroz
mehak ji aap kaa is mehfil meiN sawaagat hai.. ...

mehak ji
aap kaa is mehfil meiN sawaagat hai..

aap kii ghazal paDhii.. aur maiN mubaarkabaad denaa chaahtaa huuN ke aap ne itnii achchii koshish kii.. zaahir hai ke aap ne duniya e sher o sukhaN...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 22nd September 2002, 04:48 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 902
Posted By Feroz
janaab maikash sahab aap kii ghazal padhii...

janaab maikash sahab

aap kii ghazal padhii aur aap kaa makhsus rang liye huey hai.. mubaarak ho.. haalaaNkey "overall" ghazal achchii hai lekin phir bhii kuchch baateiN...

>do ashq meri yaad...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 12th September 2002, 11:42 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,409
Posted By Feroz
sahir sahab aadaab aaj pahlii dafaa aap kii...

sahir sahab
aadaab
aaj pahlii dafaa aap kii ghazal padhney ko milii aur bahut pasand aayii.. chotii bahr meiN aur saadaa zabaan meiN khoob sher kaheiN haiN aapney... aap kii uar ghazaloN kaa bhiii...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 24th August 2002, 04:16 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,044
Posted By Feroz
maikash sahab aadaab... aap kii ghazal...

maikash sahab

aadaab...

aap kii ghazal paDhii aur koshish par mubaarakbaad bhi qubuul ho.. maiN is gahzal par apnii tafsiilii rai dene se qabl aap se puuchnaa chaahtaa huuN ki aap ne ye ghazal...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 23rd August 2002, 12:59 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,220
Posted By Feroz
patel sahab aap kii sabhii koshisheiN...

patel sahab

aap kii sabhii koshisheiN paDhii.... shayad aap se pahley kabhii mulaaqaat nahiiN huii.... aap ko mubaarakbaad ki aap ne itnii baDhiyeaa koshieiN kii... meraa andaazaa hai ki aap kuch...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 23rd August 2002, 12:50 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,284
Posted By Feroz
maikash sahab sab se pahley to maazrat...

maikash sahab

sab se pahley to maazrat chaahtaa huuN, ki aap ne rai dii aur mujh se shukria adaa karney mein der ho gayii.. behad sharmindaa huuN>> behad sharmindaa.. ummiid hai aap buraa nahiiN...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 22nd August 2002, 07:08 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,076
Posted By Feroz
shumaila ji ssa aap kaa ek baar phir se...

shumaila ji
ssa

aap kaa ek baar phir se shukria ki aap hameshaa hi waqt nikaal kar meriii ghazaloN ko apnii rai se nawaaztii rahtii haiN.. aaiNdaa bhii khyaal rakhiyegaa.

aap kii duaaoN kaa...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 13th August 2002, 09:26 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,076
Posted By Feroz
praveen sahab aadaab arz hai aap ka...

praveen sahab

aadaab arz hai

aap ka shukriyaa ki aap ne merii ghazal paDhii. aur ye jaan kar bhii khushii hui ki aap ko mere khyaal bhii pasaNd haiN.. mainey hameshaa haT kar sher kahney kii...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 10th August 2002, 09:37 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 919
Posted By Feroz
janab smah sahab aap kii ghazal paDhii aur...

janab smah sahab

aap kii ghazal paDhii aur pasaNd bhii aayii aap se pahlii dafaa mukhaatib ho rahaa huN.. aap ne kahaa hai ki aap ne aphlii baar bahr mein likhney kii koshish kii hai.. bahut...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 9th August 2002, 10:27 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,076
Posted By Feroz
sahir sahab aap se pahlii dafaa mukhatib ho...

sahir sahab

aap se pahlii dafaa mukhatib ho rahaa hun.. aap ne kahaa ke aap ne to meraa homepage bhii visit kiiya hai.. to aap ne kyaa guest book sign nahiiN kii? agar kii hai to zaahir hai ke...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 7th August 2002, 09:53 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 992
Posted By Feroz
maikash sahab aadaab der aayed durust...

maikash sahab

aadaab

der aayed durust aayed

chaliye aap aa to gaye.. bahut khushii huii aap kaa kalaam paDh kar har sher khoobsurat hai.. khyaal ke lihaaz se bhii aur bandish ke lihaaz se...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 6th August 2002, 08:38 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,076
Posted By Feroz
anamika ji aadaab aap ne ek baar phir...

anamika ji

aadaab

aap ne ek baar phir merii ghazal par apnii nigaah e karam daalii aur us par apnii rai ka izhaar kiiyaa ... maiN aap kaa ahsaan mand huuN.. aaiNdaa bhii apnii tanqeed/izzat...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 5th August 2002, 09:56 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 664
Posted By Feroz
chand (sahab/ya sahiba?) aap kii nazm padhii...

chand (sahab/ya sahiba?)

aap kii nazm padhii bahut pasaNd aayii.. bahut khoob

Feroz
Forum: Aapki Shayri 5th August 2002, 09:53 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,284
Posted By Feroz
sahir sahab aadaab aaj pahlii dafaa aap...

sahir sahab

aadaab

aaj pahlii dafaa aap se mukhaatib ho rahaa huN... aap se mil kar khushii huii... arey bhai, yahaaN aaney ke liiye himmat juTaaney waali kaun sii baat hai.. is mehfil kaa...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 30th July 2002, 10:39 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,284
Posted By Feroz
Hello dastak aap ko ghazal ke ashaar pasaNd...

Hello dastak

aap ko ghazal ke ashaar pasaNd aaye to mujhey lagaa ke merii mehnat ko phal lag gaye.. aap ne jo izzat afzaaii farmaayi hai us ke liiye maiN aap ka mamnuun huN.. shukria

Feroz
Forum: Aapki Shayri 29th July 2002, 08:47 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,076
Posted By Feroz
naye zaKhmoN se ---- ek nayii ghazal

dosto!

pichchley kuchh dinoN meiN teen chaar ghazaleiN huii haiN..ek to aap ke saamney abhii abhii pesh kar chukaa huuN taazaa tariin aap ki khidmat meiN haazir hai..

naye zaKhmoN se jaan o...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 25th July 2002, 09:51 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,667
Posted By Feroz
praveen sahab aap ki ghazal paDh to lii thii...

praveen sahab

aap ki ghazal paDh to lii thii lekin jawaab nahin de sakaa.
ghazal bahut pasand aayiil,, saadaa uar khubsurat


Aajkal aisa aadmii kyuuN hai
Uski baatoN meiN tangdilii kyuuN...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 25th July 2002, 09:33 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,544
Posted By Feroz
sagar sahab aadaab aap kii ghazal...

sagar sahab

aadaab

aap kii ghazal paDhii .. ek achchii koshish hai.. mainey apney bahut azziiz aur qaabil dost. maikash sahab ne bahut tafsiilii aur jaankaarii se bharpuur rai dii hai.. maiN...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 25th July 2002, 05:58 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,597
Posted By Feroz
anamika ji aap kii ghazal paDhii aur pasaNd...

anamika ji

aap kii ghazal paDhii aur pasaNd bhii aayii.. zaahir hai ke aap ney abhi abhii sher kahnaa shuru kiiyaa hai.. lkein phir bhii aap kee khyaalaat aur andaaz bahut achaa lagaa. baaqii baat...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 25th July 2002, 05:24 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,284
Posted By Feroz
Shukria shumaila

shumaila ji
aadaab

aap ne merii ghazal pasaNd kii us ke liiye shukria... pichchley kuchh arsey meIN sher kam kahey haiN, lkein jo kaheiN haiN wo aap dostoN kii nazr kar diiye haiN... aap isii...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 23rd July 2002, 11:14 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,857
Posted By Feroz
sagar sahab aap kii ghazal paDhii bahut...

sagar sahab

aap kii ghazal paDhii bahut pasaNd aayii, zaahir hai ke urdu zabaan pe aap kii pakaD mujh se kahiiN zyaadaa mazbuut hai.. is liiye maiN shayad aap kii ghazal par apnii rai dene se...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 23rd July 2002, 07:40 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,284
Posted By Feroz
anamika ji aap ke comments to paDh liye they...

anamika ji
aap ke comments to paDh liye they lekin jawaab dene meiN zaraa der ho gayii. aap kaa shukria ke aap ne meri ghazal paDhii aur usey apni rai se nawaazaa. aaindaa bhii aap se isii tarah se...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 20th July 2002, 04:17 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,284
Posted By Feroz
shukria

kashmiri sahab
aadaab

aap ka mashkuur huuN... aap ne jis andaaz meiN daad dii hai us ke qaabil merii ghazal kahaaN... aap ne jo hausla afzaai ke liiye waqt nikaalaa hai us ke liyee maiN aap kaa...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 11th July 2002, 10:55 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,284
Posted By Feroz
kisey maaluum hai manzil kahaaN hai

dosto

ek arsaa bejaan sii paDii rahney ke baad ek din qalam ne hauslaa kiyaa to ek ghazal kahii... aap kii nazr hai.. islaah, tanqeed se ghurez na kiijiyegaaa.


nashe meiN choor meer e...
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