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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd March 2010, 04:37 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,477
Posted By jaf
Dost the par bann ke dushman saamne aane lage!!

Mere doston, 2004 ke baad aaj pahli baar main shayri.com pe login kar raha hoon..

ye ghazal maine 2004 main likhi thi or shayri.com pe post ki thi..

jo mere chahane wale the or mere dost the...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th February 2006, 03:58 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 594
Posted By jaf
Aap sab ka Shukria!!!

Doston Aap sab ka Bahot Bahot Shukriya Jo aap sab se mere liye itni duaye mangi.. Ab main bil kul thik ho gaya hoon.. Aap doston ke emails mile phone calls mili..

1 or khush Khabri hai doston.. ...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 21st April 2005, 02:18 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 3,283
Posted By jaf
waqt poora hua hamara doston alwida phir milenge

Doston
ab waqt aa gaya wapis jaane ka

to aap sab se alwida kahte hai
or agar zinda rahe to phir kabhi aayenge
agar yaad aaye to +009935487677 mera number hai
jaf@jafparadise.com
mail id...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th April 2005, 07:24 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,146
Posted By jaf
Manjil ko paane ki chaah ubhar aayi hai ...

Manjil ko paane ki chaah ubhar aayi hai
Mushkilo se na darane ki ehsaas laayi hai

Zindagi ne dikhaaye abhi tak rang sabhi
Khwaab ko bana loo haqiqat rut aayi hai

Raaste par mile...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th April 2005, 07:10 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,709
Posted By jaf
oh Naresh Ji walla Likte to aap bhi achha hai ...

oh Naresh Ji walla Likte to aap bhi achha hai

Na kisi tareef ki chahat mujhe na shikawaya-e-gila kisi se hai
Ye sher-o-shayri bhi e doston hai shaunk jo nikla usi se hai
Usi ne shikaya mujhko...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th April 2005, 07:05 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 887
Posted By jaf
aap ka padna kalaam ko mere paani par

Sab se alag hai ye wali
nature ke saath pyar ka dard chupa hai
sunne main achhi hai par padne main ye na to Ghazhal hai na Nazm hai
kuch kuch Kaseede se milti hai
ye bhi purani hai
par haan...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th April 2005, 04:36 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 949
Posted By jaf
doston aap sab ka dhannyawaad mere priye mitro...

doston aap sab ka dhannyawaad
mere priye mitro
waise aaj kal
Kshitij nahi raa raha hai kya ?
or Amrit Sharad sahab ka bhi pata nahi chall raha hai
dono pata nahi kaha hai

anyways
jo...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th April 2005, 04:30 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,025
Posted By jaf
wah wah main to khud ki bhi tareef kar leta...

wah wah
main to khud ki bhi tareef kar leta hoon
lol
Achha likha
kabhi mat likhna

hairat farog jawla badati chali gayi
aaina- aaine ko dikhati chali gayi

wohshat hazaar yaadain...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th April 2005, 04:26 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,526
Posted By jaf
Salam bajaa laya hoon aap sab ki mahfil main ...

Salam bajaa laya hoon aap sab ki mahfil main

meena ji ki tareef jo itna achha likha
meri tareef jo main isse gumnami se dhoond ke laya
aap sab ki tareef jo aap sab ne meena ji ki itni purani...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th April 2005, 04:17 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 2,168
Posted By jaf
Bhai bulaye or Bhai na aaye aaisa ho sakta hai...

Bhai bulaye or Bhai na aaye aaisa ho sakta hai kya?

aji sahab aap ke kalaam ki khusboo to saari shayri.com ko mahkaa rahi hai

Asl main dost 1 case bada hi typical aa gaya hai mere paas to bass...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th April 2005, 04:36 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 2,168
Posted By jaf
Musharrafhussain sahab Aadaab saal...

Musharrafhussain sahab

Aadaab

saal bhar ke baad aaya hoon
is dost ko aap to yaad hai par lagta hai ke aap hume bhool gaye hai ?

waise aap abhi bhi pahele ki hi tarhaa likhte hai
wahi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th April 2005, 04:16 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 978
Posted By jaf
wafa hoti to, meri raakh ko sindoor bana leti, ...

wafa hoti to, meri raakh ko sindoor bana leti,
pyar ki kadar hoti, mujhe zarur apna leti

mana mein bahut dur chala gaya hoon,
apne pyar ki chhap tere dil mein chhod gaya hoon

tujhe na jeete...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th April 2005, 02:08 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,526
Posted By jaf
Waah mere ko nahi pata tha ki maa beti dono itni...

Waah mere ko nahi pata tha ki maa beti dono itni achhi soch rakhti hai

Garima Ji
Aap bhi apni Maa pe padi hai likhne main
arre meena ji
shukriya bol ke aap ne or garima ji aap ne bhi hame...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th April 2005, 01:56 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,198
Posted By jaf
Laila ji salam sab se pahele or aap ka kalaam...

Laila ji salam sab se pahele
or aap ka kalaam pada
PUS bahot achha chuna aap ne likhne ke liye
agar ye hume mila hota topic likhne ko to hum nahi likh sakte the sach kah rahe hai
kyo ki aaisa...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th April 2005, 01:49 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 949
Posted By jaf
hairat farog jawla badati chali gayi aaina-...

hairat farog jawla badati chali gayi
aaina- aaine ko dikhati chali gayi

wohshat hazaar yaadain bhulati chali gayi
jalte hu-e- chiraag bujhati chali gayi

afsos us hayaat par jo saih ke 100...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th April 2005, 01:45 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,025
Posted By jaf
mujhe ko sambhale koan ki teri negaahe naaz

hairat farog jawla badati chali gayi
aaina- aaine ko dikhati chali gayi

wohshat hazaar yaadain bhulati chali gayi
jalte hu-e- chiraag bujhati chali gayi

afsos us hayaat par jo saih ke 100...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th April 2005, 01:42 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,057
Posted By jaf
Garima Ji shukriya ki aap ko hamari Ghazhal...

Garima Ji shukriya ki aap ko hamari Ghazhal pasand aai




hairat farog jawla badati chali gayi
aaina- aaine ko dikhati chali gayi

wohshat hazaar yaadain bhulati chali gayi
jalte hu-e-...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th April 2005, 05:32 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,173
Posted By jaf
Garima ji ye Nazm achhi hai aap ki Laga...

Garima ji
ye Nazm achhi hai aap ki

Laga ke agar main kabhi Nazm likhna phir se shuru karo to aap se islaah karwaoga

Likhti rahi hai
achha likhti hai aap
Hasan' Jaf the great' Jafri...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th April 2005, 05:28 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,057
Posted By jaf
Arre Bhai actually saal bhar se itni...

Arre Bhai
actually saal bhar se itni pareshaaniya aa gayi thi ke net pe to aana hi bhool gaya tha

uppar se kaam main itna busy tha ke poochiye mat
to likhne ka samay nahi mil raha tha
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th April 2005, 05:14 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,526
Posted By jaf
Salam Meena Ji well April 2003 main ye aap ne...

Salam Meena Ji
well April 2003 main ye aap ne likhi thi
socha purani shayari bhi padliya karon jisse ik baar phir se yaadaye taaza kar loon

shayad shayai.com pe paheli baar kisi ne itni...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th April 2005, 05:07 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,181
Posted By jaf
Oh Lagta hai Zeba Ji se hume kafi kadi takkar...

Oh Lagta hai Zeba Ji se hume kafi kadi takkar milne wali hai
wakai
soch bahot achhi hai aap ki
n alfaazo ka jaado bhi khoob achha kara hai aap

Ulfat nisaar kar di teri is ada ke baad ...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th April 2005, 05:02 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 949
Posted By jaf
Aman Rahi ji Bahot Bahot shukriya jo aap...

Aman Rahi ji

Bahot Bahot shukriya
jo aap ne is zarre ko is kabil samjha ki us ki bhi Ghazhal purani sahi padi jaa sake
Bhai
takreeban 1 saal ke baad lauta hoon sab to bhool chuke hai hume
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th April 2005, 04:51 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 2,751
Posted By jaf
Bade hi khulus se milte rahe ta-umar sabse Ab...

Bade hi khulus se milte rahe ta-umar sabse
Ab thodasa ajnabee hoke bhi raha jaye!


Khuda Ki Kasam bahot achhi hai pe pankti aap ki

waise to Tareef karna hamari aadato main sumaar nahi hai...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th April 2005, 04:43 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,057
Posted By jaf
Dost the par bann ke dushman saamne aane lage!!

JazBaye dil Jab simat ke zahen pe chane lage!
or LAb pe sher bann kar khud ba khud aane lage!!


Aa ke hum mahfil main baithe the unhi ke waste !
HAss ke deakha phir utthe or bazm se jaane...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th April 2005, 04:40 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 949
Posted By jaf
Well Parul Ji bahot bhaot shukriya well...

Well Parul Ji bahot bhaot shukriya

well aane ka waada nahi karta par koshish karta rahonga

anyways
thanks or lloving my ugly Ghazhal

chaliye aap ke liye ye

JazBaye dil Jab simat ke...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th April 2005, 05:35 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 949
Posted By jaf
rona padenge khoon ke aason hasi ke baad

Hello Doston
bahot din ke baad wapis aayaa hoon
to socha phir se 1 gada murda nikaala jaaye
isliye aap sab ke liye pesh -e-khidmat hai 1 purani hamari Ghazal

rona padenge khoon ke aason hasi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th October 2004, 02:15 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,075
Posted By jaf
Achha sama banaya hain aap ne alfaaz bahot...

Achha sama banaya hain aap ne

alfaaz bahot achhe istemaal kiye hain
waise na to isse Ghazal Kah sakte hain
n kuch
ye Ageet type ka kuch hain

par alfaaz bahot achhe hain ye sach hain
...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 30th July 2004, 06:06 PM
Replies: 101
Views: 138,869
Posted By jaf
Bhai maafi chahata hoo information aap ne jo...

Bhai maafi chahata hoo
information aap ne jo di hain wo elementry level ki hai

main koi shayar nahi hoon
bas urdu adab main thoda sa is bachhe ka bhi naam hain
kahene ko kai majue likhe hain...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th July 2004, 05:46 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 6,772
Posted By jaf
Salam aap ka dost sahab well well well ji...

Salam aap ka dost sahab

well well well ji aap ko rachana achhi lagi jaan ke achha laga

well agar koi doosron ki bhi rachana likta hain to aap likhne diye unhe
coz
atleast hume wo achhi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th July 2004, 03:56 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 6,772
Posted By jaf
Meena Ji well aap ka to main sab se bada fan...

Meena Ji well aap ka to main sab se bada fan hooon
or Chaand Sahab zarra nawazi ke liye shukriya

Bhai Uppar wale ne hum sab ko us cheez se nawaza hain jo sab main nahi di unhone

shayari 1...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th July 2004, 03:38 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 2,213
Posted By jaf
Meena Ji ye to aap ka badak pann hain jo aap...

Meena Ji ye to aap ka badak pann hain jo aap aaisa sochti hain

Meer Anis Ne sahi kaha tha
Ahsaas Jab hua unhe apni shikast ka
wo Dosti ka Haath Milane ko aa gaye

bhai sach to yahi hain...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th July 2004, 07:41 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 2,213
Posted By jaf
Salam Meena Ji aap kasam se 1 bahot achhi...

Salam Meena Ji
aap kasam se 1 bahot achhi shayara hain

bas waise to hum kya kahe kahne ko alfaaz bhi nahi hain hamare paas

aap ne Lucknow walon ki to bolti hi band kar di
main bade faqr...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th July 2004, 07:31 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 6,772
Posted By jaf
Salam well kabhi kabhi apni tareef sunna...

Salam
well kabhi kabhi apni tareef sunna achha lagta hain or wo bhi jab aap jaisa shaq kare to phir dil ko sukoon mil jaata hain

sab se pahele to main maafi chahonga itne din baad aane ke liye...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th July 2004, 01:00 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 6,772
Posted By jaf
khaab-e- ghaflat se zara chonko tera koi nahi!

JazBaye dil Jab simat ke zahen pe chane lage!
or LAb pe sher bann kar khud ba khud aane lage!!


Aa ke hum mahfil main baithe the unhi ke waste !
HAss ke deakha phir utthe or bazm se jaane...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th March 2004, 07:27 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 567
Posted By jaf
DAastaane KArbala

Daastaan hain ye Anokhi 1 taareekh ki
1 bahen, 1 bhatijii or 1 Bhai ki

Daastaan Ye Ghum ki Jab Bhi ye Hum ne Suni
Dil se AAwaaz BAs ye Hi Ubhri

Hai Abbas, Zainab, Sakeena
Tum Ko Rote...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th June 2003, 01:26 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,562
Posted By jaf
shukriya dost sahab well aap ne to kamaal...

shukriya dost sahab

well aap ne to kamaal kar diya maan gaye aap ko
jaante hain sahab jab aap ka reply pada to sochne laga ki ye koan hain
alwaaz to hamare istemaal karte hain aap
par...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th June 2003, 03:13 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,191
Posted By jaf
dost aap ka babbar sher ...... anyway koi...

dost aap ka babbar sher ......

anyway koi kaam mushkil nahi hota hai is duniya main
1 dancer se aap poocho ge to wo kahega dance bahot aasaan hota hai
1 writer se poochon ge to bole ga likhna...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd June 2003, 05:15 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 993
Posted By jaf
Waah Amrit Sharad ji ji karta hai aap de...

Waah Amrit Sharad ji

ji karta hai aap de dast ko choom loo
itni achhi urdu
waise aap ko ye bata deta hoon ye lines jo aap ne likhi hai wo hamare site ke i mean www.jafparadise.com ke 1 saathi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd June 2003, 05:05 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,306
Posted By jaf
kshitij ji aap kamaal ho maan gaye lucknow...

kshitij ji aap kamaal ho

maan gaye lucknow walon ko
sach main achhe sher likte hain

kabhi humse mil le aap aap ka ahsaan hoga
or aaise hi sher likte rahiye
aap ke sher main koi galti...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd June 2003, 04:53 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,191
Posted By jaf
jo apne aap ko achha shayar samjhe uske liye

maazrat chahata hoon is sher par actually bade din se deak raha hoon yahaa shayer bahot kam hai par critics zada hain maana sab achha likte hain
par sher likhna koi muskil kaam nahi hota hai
...
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