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Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 24th December 2016, 07:52 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 2,458
Posted By Hamdam
Bahut pyare ehsaas ......dil ko choo gaye ...

Bahut pyare ehsaas ......dil ko choo gaye

Sanjay Sehgal
Forum: Informative Stories 24th December 2016, 07:44 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 3,834
Posted By Hamdam
Thanks Sunita ji and Madhvi Ji . ..I logged...

Thanks Sunita ji and Madhvi Ji .

..I logged in at the sdc after long time and saw your comment

regds
Sanjay Sehgal
Forum: English Poetry 3rd May 2016, 10:10 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,623
Posted By Hamdam
Beautiful indeed Anubhav and it took somebody 13...

Beautiful indeed Anubhav and it took somebody 13 years to say Nice ..

Very pure feelings from the depth of the heart ...Keep writing and sharing your beautiful thoughts .

regds

Sanjay Sehgal
Forum: Aapki Shayri 3rd May 2016, 10:05 PM
Replies: 4
Maa
Views: 485
Posted By Hamdam
Bhai kaafi achche ehsaas piroye aapne maa ki...

Bhai kaafi achche ehsaas piroye aapne maa ki shaan meiN.

Bahut Khoob

Hamdam
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 3rd May 2016, 10:00 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 964
Posted By Hamdam
Bahut achcha khayal pesh kiya Pooja aapne .. ...

Bahut achcha khayal pesh kiya Pooja aapne ..
Aage bhi bazm ki raunak badate rahiye.

hamdam:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd May 2016, 09:39 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 536
Posted By Hamdam
tera akhri salaam aa jaye

Bahut arse ke baad kuch toota foota likhme ki koshish ki hai....


Na janey kis gali meiN shaam aa jaye,
Meri zindagee ka akhree muqaam aa jaye.

Dekhe thhe maine bhi kayee baar sapne,
Waqt...
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 22nd November 2015, 03:18 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,240
Posted By Hamdam
jazbatoN ka mol na laga paya

mere dil meiN kal ek sawal aya,
waqt kaisa ye ab kamaal aya ,

Kya sab uljhe hue haiN apno meiN,
ya faansala dilon ke darmiyaN aya.

mana dooriyaN bar gayi haiN bahut,
tabhi rishtoN meiN itna...
Forum: Introduction Forum 29th October 2015, 09:51 AM
Replies: 118
Views: 7,862
Posted By Hamdam
Kunal Bhai, Aap ki interview ke dauran...

Kunal Bhai,

Aap ki interview ke dauran maine kuch baateiN dekhi jo kehna chahunga ,
aap inhe positively lena pls .

1. Aap ek soft hearted insaan ho jo her kisi pe bharosa ker lete ho jaldi
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 25th October 2015, 06:48 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 738
Posted By Hamdam
teri yaad deewana bana deti hai

jane kyuN phir teri yaad deewana bana deti hai,
vo her bar na milne ka bahana bana deti hai.

jikr hota jab bhi teri ulfat ka mehfil meiN kabhi,
thora muskura ke mahaul katilana bana deti hai.
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 13th October 2015, 10:50 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,502
Posted By Hamdam
Bhushan ji...kaise haiN aap ..aaj kel kum...

Bhushan ji...kaise haiN aap ..aaj kel kum dikhayee per rahe haiN SDC pe.

Aap ka shukriya kerne meiN der ho gayi ..isliye maufi chahta hun.

Sanjay Sehgal
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th October 2015, 10:43 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 967
Posted By Hamdam
Madhu ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya jo.aap ne...

Madhu ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya jo.aap ne samay nikal
ke mere kalam ko.pera.

Sanjay Sehgal
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th October 2015, 10:35 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,377
Posted By Hamdam
Aap ki ghazal per ke itna hi.kahunha ki lucky...

Aap ki ghazal per ke itna hi.kahunha ki lucky bhai tusi great ho..

Aur naukri aur chokri mili aapko abhi.tak ya abhi shayri se hi yaari
chal rahi hai.bus.

Sanjay Sehga
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th October 2015, 10:33 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 796
Posted By Hamdam
Wah Anil ji ...sade shabdoN meiN gehri baateiN...

Wah Anil ji ...sade shabdoN meiN gehri baateiN likhns koi.aap.se
seekhe ..bahut achche janab

sanjay sehgal
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th October 2015, 10:27 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,083
Posted By Hamdam
Naresh ji ....kafi arse ke baad apko.perne ka...

Naresh ji ....kafi arse ke baad apko.perne ka mauka mila..

Bahut khoobsoorat nazm.rahi.aapki...

Khamosh ankhoN se baateiN kiya karo...waah ..

Abhi ek ghzal sun raha tha ki..

Mohabaat ki...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th October 2015, 10:22 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,714
Posted By Hamdam
Waah janab ..bahut kamal ka likha aapne ..per ke...

Waah janab ..bahut kamal ka likha aapne ..per ke dil khush ho.gaya.

Sanjay Sehgal
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th October 2015, 10:20 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 967
Posted By Hamdam
tum bare mashoor ho gaye ho

Log kehte tum bare mash.hoor ho gaye ho,
tum jaante ho apno se kitna door ho gaye ho.

Kal tak jin logoN ke sang rehte te tum sada,
unki jhalak pane pane ko majboor ho gaye ho

Kabhi tum...
Forum: Introduction Forum 4th October 2015, 09:27 PM
Replies: 118
Views: 7,862
Posted By Hamdam
Quote: 3. Shayri ki baarikiyon ko aapne kis...

Quote:

3. Shayri ki baarikiyon ko aapne kis hadd tak jaana hai aur isse jude agar aapke paas koi kisse ho to humse share kijiye...
Dekha jaaye to ye sawaal mere hisaab se sahi nahi hai .. shayrii...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 4th October 2015, 10:33 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 738
Posted By Hamdam
Mast bhai .... Pehle tau is baat ka shukriya ki...

Mast bhai ....
Pehle tau is baat ka shukriya ki aap ne meri koshish ko as a examiner evaluate
kiya aur jo jo kamiyan lagee, unhe step by step pinpoint kiya.

Reg point 2 ...sher 3 and 4 th kafiya...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 2nd October 2015, 08:04 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 738
Posted By Hamdam
log kehte haiN

Vo kehte haiN tumheiN pyar kerna nahi aata,
Ahle mohabbat ka izhaar karna nahi aata

Hum hote tau kab ke Ishq ki suli char gaye hote,
tumheiN tau mera haath bhi pakarna nahi aata

Kaise...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 2nd October 2015, 07:56 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,394
Posted By Hamdam
Wah Zainy ji Wah Ishq se labalab bhara hua...

Wah Zainy ji Wah

Ishq se labalab bhara hua aap ka ye kalam humara dil chura ke le gaya .

Bahut achchi peshkesh ..her sher apne aap meiN ishq ki hadd bayan ker raha hai , per makte tau sanam...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st October 2015, 10:36 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,123
Posted By Hamdam
Jagdish bhai , bahut achchi ghazal likhi...

Jagdish bhai ,

bahut achchi ghazal likhi hai aapne .. AAp se guzarish hai ki difficult urdu words ke mayne neeche astrik se likh diya kareiN jisse hum jaise log jo urdu meiN thora kamzor haiN aap...
Forum: Celebrations 1st October 2015, 10:29 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 844
Posted By Hamdam
Naresh ji Namaskar .. Aap ko Janamdin ki...

Naresh ji Namaskar ..

Aap ko Janamdin ki dher saari shubkamnayeiN .. May God bless you with health , wealth and happiness .

We hope to have a long association with you at SDC too:):):)

With...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th September 2015, 10:01 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 621
Posted By Hamdam
Shoaib bhai ...hamesha ki tarah aap phir haunsala...

Shoaib bhai ...hamesha ki tarah aap phir haunsala badate rahe ..

Sanjay Sehgal
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th September 2015, 10:00 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 621
Posted By Hamdam
Madhu ji bahut bahut shukriya , jo aap ne meri...

Madhu ji bahut bahut shukriya , jo aap ne meri ghazal ko pasand kiya

Sanjay Sehgal
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th September 2015, 11:51 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 3,468
Posted By Hamdam
Bahut achche ehsaas Madhu ji ...mazaaa aa gaya...

Bahut achche ehsaas Madhu ji ...mazaaa aa gaya aap ko per ke .

Per ye kalam aap ke style se hat ke tha..Aap bada napa tula likhti haiN,
aur ye kalam meri nazar meiN thora overstretched tha..pls...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th September 2015, 01:09 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 621
Posted By Hamdam
armano ko machalne do

Mere armano ko thora machalne do ,
Dil ke jazbaatoN ko thora phislne do.

Mat bandho inko behr ki zanzeer se ,
in ehsason ko bus yuN hi nikelne do.

thori der meiN ye sab theher jayenge,
in...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th September 2015, 12:45 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,089
Posted By Hamdam
NazroN ki thi kalam aur kagaz tha dil mera Fir...

NazroN ki thi kalam aur kagaz tha dil mera
Fir jo ghazal huyi vo zubaan bolti rahi.

Madhu ji kamaal ker diya aapne is sher meiN kya khayal.pesh kiya hai.

Bahut khoob
Forum: Aapki Shayri 25th September 2015, 09:48 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 627
Posted By Hamdam
Aye ghazal ...............

aye ghazal tu meri humnawa bhi meri humraz bhi ,
her roz tujh se hoti nayi soch ki aghaz bhi.

tujh meiN dhoondta huN apni khushiyaN aur gamee,
tujh se roobaru rehte mere sab andaz bhi

teri...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th September 2015, 12:06 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 639
Posted By Hamdam
Imtehan abhi baaki hai

Ai khuda aur kitne imtehan abhi bakee hai,
Jeena padega humeiN jab tak jaan bakee hai.

Chah ker bhi ker nahi sakte kinara tujhse ,
Poore kerne haiN kafi armaan abhi baaki hai.

Kaise kerdeiN...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd September 2015, 11:13 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 677
Posted By Hamdam
Sarika ji ...aapko humari peshkesh pasand ayee...

Sarika ji ...aapko humari peshkesh pasand ayee shukriya..Derasal humare ek mitr
2012 meiN heart gail se expire ho gaye . Inki wife ke whatsapp pe status ..likha tha ..
TIRED of fighting alone in...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 23rd September 2015, 11:03 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,247
Posted By Hamdam
Wah Gyan ji ..kamal ker diya aapne ..ek ek sher...

Wah Gyan ji ..kamal ker diya aapne ..ek ek sher apne meiN ek alag
ras bikher raha tha ..

Sharab ..aur maikhnae pe ek bahut achcha kalam pesh kiya aapne . Per
ke man jhoom utha ...likhte rahye...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd September 2015, 03:05 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,744
Posted By Hamdam
*yu to sab saath hain, phir bhi akeli zindgi. ...

*yu to sab saath hain,
phir bhi akeli zindgi.
*
Wah ji wah ...aap ki ye lines tau kamaal ki lagi...ek karvi sachchayee batan ker di aapne .

Sunita ji bahut achcha laga aap ko padh ke.

Sanjay...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd September 2015, 01:45 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 677
Posted By Hamdam
Acha lagta hai

ghumoN ke saye meiN ab tau jeena acha lagta hai,
teri yaad meiN rat bhar takiya bhigona acha lagta hai.

Chala gaya chor tanha mujhe duniya ki bheer meiN,
tere sang beete lamhoN ko dohrana acha...
Forum: Ghazal Section 20th September 2015, 05:23 PM
Replies: 70
Views: 3,195
Posted By Hamdam
Dosto is baar competetion bahut zabardast hai...

Dosto is baar competetion bahut zabardast hai yahan ...ek ek vote
ki ahmiyat mehsoos hogi ...so kripya vote zaroor kareiN,
tanki hissa lene walon ke hounsle aur buland hoN.

Sanjay Sehgal
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 20th September 2015, 05:18 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,006
Posted By Hamdam
Shad bhai ....bayane mohabaat meiN aap ki apne...

Shad bhai ....bayane mohabaat meiN aap ki apne mehboob
se shikve shikayat ka andaz bahut achcha laga ..

Sanjay Sehgal
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th September 2015, 05:13 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,439
Posted By Hamdam
Maikash Sahib...Adaab. Wah janab bahut...

Maikash Sahib...Adaab.

Wah janab bahut achchi peshkash rahi aapki.
Her ek sher apne meiN mukammal tha ...Aur rawangi
tau itni ghazab ki lagi mujhe ki dil kerta tha bus perta
jaaooN...DheroN...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th September 2015, 12:51 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 683
Posted By Hamdam
Madhu ji bahut shukriya jo aapne mera kalam...

Madhu ji bahut shukriya jo aapne mera kalam pasand kiya.
Aur edit kerne ke liye bhi dhanyawad.

Sanjay Sehgal
Forum: Celebrations 17th September 2015, 09:24 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 461
Posted By Hamdam
Rajender ji.. Aap ko janamdin ke uplaksh meiN...

Rajender ji..
Aap ko janamdin ke uplaksh meiN dher sari shubhkamnayeiN..

Parmatma aapko bhakti , shakti , tandrustti aur deerg ayu de taaki
hum logon ko aap jaise mahanubhavon ka saath milta...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 16th September 2015, 09:20 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,443
Posted By Hamdam
Masoom ji , Sunita ji , Hasan bhai aur Jagdish ji...

Masoom ji , Sunita ji , Hasan bhai aur Jagdish ji ....

Maufi chahta huN ki aap logoN ke comliments acknowlege ker meiN deri ho
gayi ..Per aap sab ko meri koshosh pasand ayee , bahut bahut...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th September 2015, 09:15 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 683
Posted By Hamdam
Shukriya Shoaib bhai ...dheere2 ...matlab dheere...

Shukriya Shoaib bhai ...dheere2 ...matlab dheere dheere...mujhe laga ki
2lagane se word repeat mana jayega ??!

Sanjay Sehgal
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