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Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq

26th March 2003, 01:06 PM

Replies: 10

Poll: mein tera ishq na bhool saka

Views: 1,774

Posted By mumtaz_09

hi

hello nirav,thanks for appreciation.

Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq

19th March 2003, 11:50 PM

Replies: 10

Poll: mein tera ishq na bhool saka

Views: 1,774

Posted By mumtaz_09

thanks

shukriya ,romana ,abidhussain,aur zebaji.thank u for appreciation.

Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq

17th March 2003, 12:12 AM

Replies: 3

Poll: Lost

Views: 771

Posted By mumtaz_09

hello

hello mohammed,
your poem is very beautiful.what u have written is very different. It appears from your poem that u are quite talented.all the best, hope to hear more from u !!!!

the thuoght...

Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq

16th March 2003, 08:03 PM

Replies: 10

Rishtey

Views: 1,001

Posted By mumtaz_09

hello

hello,pyasa ji,
what u have written is very precise and penetrating .beautiful.!!!!

Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq

16th March 2003, 07:35 PM

Replies: 10

Poll: mein tera ishq na bhool saka

Views: 1,774

Posted By mumtaz_09

thanks

adaab riddi ji,
thank u for appreciating and encouraging my shayri.bohot bohot shukria.
achcha hi hai ke hum abhi mash'hoor,nahi hai,
hum khush hain yoon ki ,hum zamee'se door nahi hai...

Forum: Aapki Shayri

14th March 2003, 03:36 PM

Replies: 17

Hum bhi yaaro kamal ke nikley

Views: 2,620

Posted By mumtaz_09

adaab

adaab
praveen ji,gazal to aapne kaafi achchi likhi he,lekin aapki ye lines bohot achchi lageen-
raah me hi manzilon ka zikr mat chedo praveen,
manzilon ne sun liya to aur woh badh...

Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq

14th March 2003, 11:31 AM

Replies: 10

Poll: mein tera ishq na bhool saka

Views: 1,774

Posted By mumtaz_09

thanks

thank u luvpriya for appreciating my shayri.bohot bohot shukriya

chahe koi kitna bhi daawa kare ke use taareef ki chaahat nahi he ,par ye insaan ki fitrat he ke wo tarreef paana chahta he.aur sach...

Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq

13th March 2003, 10:42 PM

Replies: 10

Poll: mein tera ishq na bhool saka

Views: 1,774

Posted By mumtaz_09

mein tera ishq na bhool saka

mein tera ishq na bhool saka ,sab bhool gaya wo yaad raha
teri yaadon se ,dil ka ye veeraana to aabaad rahaa

har mausam tanha beet gaya ,par ki koi fariyaad nahi
...

Forum: Aapki Shayri

13th March 2003, 01:49 PM

Replies: 2

Chand sher

Views: 1,447

Posted By mumtaz_09

there is a sweetness. and softness in your shayri...

there is a sweetness. and softness in your shayri which should not be lost.well said .keep it up....:)

Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala

12th March 2003, 11:38 PM

Replies: 101

Sticky: The Technical Aspects,Terms And Rules of Ghazal Writing.....

Views: 139,683

Posted By mumtaz_09

thanks for providing such useful information...

thanks for providing such useful information about gazal writing.thank u once again.bye

Forum: Aapki Shayri

12th March 2003, 02:00 PM

Replies: 5

kadmoN meiN tere aakhiri dhadkan bicHaa chale

Views: 1,600

Posted By mumtaz_09

very well written.some of your shers are really...

very well written.some of your shers are really beautiful,and rythmic.hope to hear from u more .bye

Forum: Aapki Shayri

11th March 2003, 01:24 PM

Replies: 0

shaayari

Views: 816

Posted By mumtaz_09

mehfil

hoon hosh me nahi teri mehfil he ye ajab,
haazir to hoon ,magar abhi shaamil nahi hua.

guzra he waqt ishq ke darya me is tarah,
dooba nahi,haasil mujhe saahil nahi hua.

hairaan hoon ke,zakhm...

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