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Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 14th August 2008, 10:41 AM
Replies: 1,391
Views: 96,868
Posted By gumnam
4th Sher

Hogi Kisi ko Aarzu phoolon se milne ki
humko to un phoolon ke kaanto se pyaar hai....
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 18th September 2007, 04:49 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,278
Posted By gumnam
Hello Nonu Ji, Bahut Khoob-soorti se aapne...

Hello Nonu Ji,

Bahut Khoob-soorti se aapne apne jazbo ka izhaar kiya hai! Really its touching and shows how much you love HER.

All the best!!
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 17th September 2007, 03:24 PM
Replies: 1,391
Views: 96,868
Posted By gumnam
Ek nayi Ghazal ke aghaaz ke saath mehfil mein...

Ek nayi Ghazal ke aghaaz ke saath mehfil mein waapsi kar raha hoon.....
Kripya Kafiye aur Beher ka dhyan rakhiyega...........

1st Sher.....
Aankhon mein gham, zubaan pe dua baar baar hai
aata ...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th September 2007, 03:17 PM
Replies: 14
Maa
Views: 891
Posted By gumnam
Bahut Dino baad is Shayri ki duniya main aana...

Bahut Dino baad is Shayri ki duniya main aana hua.
Bahut dukh hua ye khabar parhkar!
Ishwar aapko ye apaar dukh sehne ki shakti aur sambal pradaan karein!!
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 4th September 2007, 04:50 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,519
Posted By gumnam
Wah kya baat hai

Hello Chahat,

Aapki chahat wakai is Nazm mein nazar aati hai.
Bahut hi umda likha hai aapne.

Dil se daad kubul kijiye.
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 28th December 2005, 02:59 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,510
Posted By gumnam
THIS IS NOT RIGHT!

Hi Deep!

I was just surprised to see that you have posted someone other's creation by your name.

And you are taking all the credit.

I think aapne Shayri.com ke rules nahi padhe hain. Iske...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd December 2005, 09:44 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 479
Posted By gumnam
HI Anil Ji!

Anil Ji!

All Shers are very sensual and fabulous.


Please keep posting.
Forum: Shayri-e-Mashahoor Shayar 22nd August 2005, 03:48 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,221
Posted By gumnam
HI asgher! I am surprized that you have...

HI asgher!


I am surprized that you have written these yourself. Please write down the POET's name, while you post someone else's Ghazal.


I hope you will understand.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th July 2005, 09:22 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,200
Posted By gumnam
HI

Janab talib Sahab,

Ek Sher aapki Khidmat mein pesh hai...


" 'Naam-e- Talib' jo hamne kahin se suna,
'Naam-e-Ghalib' hamein yaad aane laga,
'bazm-e-Talib' mein aa ke jo baithe zara,
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 21st July 2005, 09:25 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 599
Posted By gumnam
hi

HI luvPriya Ji!


this is indeed a very well composed , the Rhyming, the selection of words and moreover the Feelings are really superb.

this can be written by only those who have some feelings...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 21st July 2005, 09:19 AM
Replies: 1,391
Views: 96,868
Posted By gumnam
4th Sher

Lijiye Ghazal ka 4th Sher pesh kar raha hoon..


4th Sher
=======
Yun to koshish hazaar- lakh kari na aaye,
par teri yaad mujhe Sham-o-seher aayi hai


To ghazal is tarah se ban gayi ab...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 21st July 2005, 09:14 AM
Replies: 1,391
Views: 96,868
Posted By gumnam
HI Doston!

2nd Sher
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bhool gaya tha tera masoom, dilkash sa chehra?..
aaj kyon mere hothon pe vo hansi nikhar aayi hai???
Aman Rahi....


Aman Rahi Ji!

Aapne to mera naam hi badal diya...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 19th July 2005, 09:49 AM
Replies: 1,391
Views: 96,868
Posted By gumnam
HI All!

To Lijiye ek naye sher se Ek nayi Ghazal ka Aghaz karte hain.....

1st Sher
======

"Aaj kyon aankhon mein khamoshi utar aayi hai?
Aaj kyon phir teri tasweer ubhar aayi hai?"
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th July 2005, 09:12 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 478
Posted By gumnam
hi

HI tausif sahab!


I am wondered if this Ghazal is written by you.

Bahut hi Zabardast ghazal likhi hai aapne aur Zazbaat , dard poora uatar aya hai isme!

Daad kubul kijiye...........
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th July 2005, 09:01 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 941
Posted By gumnam
hi

os ghum me bhi ek mazaa sa mile
gar tu mere ghum ka bahana rahe


HI Zeba ji!

Bahut hi lajawab aur pursoch ghazal likhi hai aapne.

aapne likhne ka aur bayan karne ka andaaz bahut achcha...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th July 2005, 08:56 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 575
Posted By gumnam
HI

HI Zebaji!

Aapko pehli baar parh raha hoon.

aapki rachna mein bahut dard nazar aata hai. behtreen ghazal hai jo apne likhi hai.....

Daad kubool kijiye......
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th July 2005, 08:51 AM
Replies: 51
Views: 3,511
Posted By gumnam
HI

Dhanyawad Dhanyawad

Lekin bande ko shikshak ka darja mat dijiye, main to abhi khud hi shayari ka student hoon.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th July 2005, 12:49 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 426
Posted By gumnam
HI If i am not wrong, this is a poem written...

HI

If i am not wrong, this is a poem written by some hindi poet ( i don't remember the name , but i read it in my school times)

Please write NOT MINE while posting others creations...

Thanks
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th July 2005, 12:00 PM
Replies: 51
Views: 3,511
Posted By gumnam
Hi

:eek: :eek: MERE LIYE KUCHH NAHI LIKHA :eek: :eek:
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th July 2005, 09:32 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,114
Posted By gumnam
hi

HI Paras Ji!


Areeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Mera ye matlab nahi tha, aapne to meri baat ka matlab hi galat nikal liya!

Aap jaisi likhne wali aur Shabdon ki jadugar par agar koi aisi tohmat bhi lagaye...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th July 2005, 04:06 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 3,969
Posted By gumnam
HI!

Pyare Manoj Bhai!


Tumhare liye hum paighaam likhte hain,
saath beeti baatien tamaam likhte hain,
deewani ho jaati hain woh kalam,
jis kalam se tumhara naam likhte hain


Aur kya kahoon??...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th July 2005, 04:01 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 584
Posted By gumnam
Hi Dost!

HI Dost!

Is Zazbaaton ke saagar mein aapka Swagat hai..

Apka Login Name 'tutadil' Dekh kar hi lagta hai ki aapke dil mein bahut dard hai. Lekin yakin maniye yahan shayri ki duniya mein is dard...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th July 2005, 12:10 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 410
Posted By gumnam
HI!

HI!

Thanks for sharing this nice and touching one.

But.........

Always write NOT MINE when posting others creations.........
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th July 2005, 12:05 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 362
Posted By gumnam
HI!

HI Saras!

Dil ko chhoo gaya aapka yeh Sher..........

Thanks for sharing..........
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th July 2005, 12:02 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 365
Posted By gumnam
HI!

HI!


Thanks for sharing this nice one..........
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th July 2005, 11:59 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 687
Posted By gumnam
HI!

Pyari Paras Ji!


Bahut achchi feelings aur Sachchai bayan kar rahi hai aapki yeh ghazal,

Lekin.........

Muafi chaunga, Behar ki nazar se ye ek mukammal Ghazal nahi hai, Kya khoob hota ki ye...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th July 2005, 11:54 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,114
Posted By gumnam
Hi Paras!

Hi Paras!

Hamesha ki tarah aapki is ghazal mein gehra dard aur soch chhipi hui hai...

Aapki Ghazal parh kar ek sher yaad aa gaya...........



Chahat mein teri marne ka iraada bhi nahi hai,...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th July 2005, 02:53 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,797
Posted By gumnam
Hi Chaand and Naina!

HI Naina JI and Chand ji!

Ek nayi tarah ki pehel, ek naya style aap dono ki 'posts' mein dekhne ko mila.

Aap dono ne hi, apne apne Jazbaaton ko bahut achchi tarah se bayan kiya hai.


sply i...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th July 2005, 02:29 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 2,606
Posted By gumnam
HI Paras

Hi paras ji!

Appki ghazal dil ko Chhoo gayi, Zindagi ki Sachchai ko badi khubsoorti se bayan kiya hai aapne.....


Lekin ek baat samajh mein nahi aayi wok ye ki...

current topic hai ---...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 6th July 2005, 02:16 PM
Replies: 1,391
Views: 96,868
Posted By gumnam
5th Sher

HI all!

Very happy to see you all here! I will not comment on any sher but i am posting one from mine to continue the Ghazal....

======================================
1st sher

suna tha ke...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd July 2005, 08:45 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 475
Posted By gumnam
HI!

HI Friends!

I am very sad to see that no comment has been posted on this.

i think all of you have decided not to comment on my threads, as i always...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st July 2005, 03:41 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 713
Posted By gumnam
hi

HI Chand ji!

Janab dubara apki mehfil main aa gaye hain,, aur aate hi aapke Sher ne dil ko chho sa liya.

I hope you remember me .


Appka dard parhkar apna dard mehsoos hone laga..
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st July 2005, 03:35 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 378
Posted By gumnam
HI

HI Karan ( i hope i know ur name)

Bahut Achcha aur satik sher hai bhai....

Dil ko chho gaya..........


Again a request, plz Shayar ka naam ya NOT MINE likh diya karo, if it is not...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 1st July 2005, 02:59 PM
Replies: 1,391
Views: 96,868
Posted By gumnam
Hi All!

HI Paras, Safiya, Manoj, Banno, Sanju, Shimul, Chand and all subscribers.


Aap shayad jaante hi honge ki meri 'Shayri.com' mein Shuruat isi thread yani ki 'KUCHA-E KALAM' se hui thi.


Aaj...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st July 2005, 02:20 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 475
Posted By gumnam
Chhoti si mulakaat ki daulat

HI Doston!

ek baar phir ek Chhoti si ghazal pesh kar raha hoon, hope aapko pasand aayegi.. Comment Zaroor dijiyega......



CHHOTI SI MULAKAAT KI DAULAT HI BAHUT HAI
IS DAUR MEIN MUH-DEKHI...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 1st July 2005, 02:02 PM
Replies: 80
Views: 3,567
Posted By gumnam
HI!

Hi rohin!

Where are the New rules??
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th June 2005, 05:20 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 306
Posted By gumnam
Kahan hain Manoj Bhai!!

HI All!


Yahan par waapsi kiye kai roz ho gaye lekin mere purane aur hum sabke pyare dost MANOJ KUREEL sahab nahi dikhayi diye..

unhi ke liye kuchh likh raha hoon


"
Nazar aate nahi tum,...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th June 2005, 05:07 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,015
Posted By gumnam
HI !

HI rupali ji!


Appki Rachna Bahut khoobsurat Aur PurWaqar hai. Badi khoobsoorti se apne Zazbon ko utara hai Kagaz par.


Kuchh yaad aa gaya.........


" Nahi aati to teri yaad mahino nahi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th June 2005, 05:03 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 986
Posted By gumnam
HI Kureel Sahab!

Manoj Bhai!


Aadaab!

ummid hai bande ko taarruf ki zaroorat to nahi paregi.

aapki is khoobsoorat mehfil mein ek arse ke baad shamil hue hain, Par aap ki shirkat kuch kam hoti ja rahi hai....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th June 2005, 04:43 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 503
Posted By gumnam
Hi!

Majnu Bhai,


"MUNSAFI CHAHTE HAIN AB KAATILON SE HUM,
RANG-E-HUNAR SEEKHTE HAIN AB JAHILON SE HUM.
KABHI SHAAN-E-TOOFAAN HUA KARTE THEY,
MAUJON KO DEKHTE HAIN AB SAAHILON SE HUM"


Agar...
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