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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd January 2013, 11:16 PM
Replies: 11
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Posted By janumanu
thanks for your comment ........................ ...

thanks for your comment ........................

:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd January 2013, 11:11 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,246
Posted By janumanu
yaha kuch likha tha ya udaa......

yaha kuch likha tha ya udaa... diyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa


:)
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 23rd January 2013, 05:34 AM
Replies: 60
Views: 9,421
Posted By janumanu
[QUOTE=Mujeeb;447305]deewaan e Ghalib , nuSkhaa e...

[QUOTE=Mujeeb;447305]deewaan e Ghalib , nuSkhaa e nizaamee .

jab maanana hee naheeN hai to taSdeeq kiyoN ?

Are... bhayee maine kab aapko kaha aap meri baat maano ?
na aap meri maano na main...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 22nd January 2013, 11:32 PM
Replies: 60
Views: 9,421
Posted By janumanu
bhayee ye jo aapne GHALIB ka sher diyaa hai.. ...

bhayee ye jo aapne GHALIB ka sher diyaa hai..
batayange unke kis diwaan se hai.. aur ye diwaan kisne publish kiyaa hai?


hay qalam meree abr e gohar e baar
zulm hai gar nah doo suKhan ki daad...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 22nd January 2013, 10:49 PM
Replies: 60
Views: 9,421
Posted By janumanu
bahyee maiN kisi micaal ko nahi maan raha...

bahyee maiN kisi micaal ko nahi maan raha ............ mere sabse pahle reply main padhna...

main micaal nahi grammar ki baat kar raha huN...........

urdu grammar mai... Qalam kya hai?

thats...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 22nd January 2013, 10:20 PM
Replies: 60
Views: 9,421
Posted By janumanu
[QUOTE=Mujeeb;447294]appko pehly a'rZ ker chukaa...

[QUOTE=Mujeeb;447294]appko pehly a'rZ ker chukaa hoN ke roz maraH ke zubaan ke iste'maal mai hum muzakar or muanic dono iste'maal kerty haiN , or mai ne yeh bhi kaha hai keh mujhy is per pukhtaa...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 22nd January 2013, 10:01 PM
Replies: 60
Views: 9,421
Posted By janumanu
[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';447284]hahahaha... maine...

[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';447284]hahahaha... maine sochaa tha naqaab ke saath lage haathoN apne puraane hisaab kitaab chuktaa kar loon aapse... qalam ke saath saath...



magar lagtaa hai apne guru ki...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 22nd January 2013, 09:51 PM
Replies: 60
Views: 9,421
Posted By janumanu
bhayee......... ab har noun ka alag rule to nahi...

bhayee......... ab har noun ka alag rule to nahi padha... magar 30 saal hindi bolte ho gaye ... uske hisaab hi se baat ki hai..

waise yahaN baat urdu ki ho rahi hai..

so sirf mere liye no use...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 22nd January 2013, 09:49 PM
Replies: 60
Views: 9,421
Posted By janumanu
bas itna hi ............. agar aap micaal hi maan...

bas itna hi ............. agar aap micaal hi maan rahe hai..
to naqaab ki misaal kyun nahi maan rahe :)



sirf urdu grammar ke hawale se baat karo...

mujhe is bat ki hairat hai ki... aapne...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 22nd January 2013, 08:47 PM
Replies: 60
Views: 9,421
Posted By janumanu
acha to Bindi utha aur chal yaha se ...

acha to

Bindi utha aur chal yaha se
Chdiya utha aur chala yaha se
bakri utha aur chal yaha se

Ab kya ye sab beech k ho gaye..
:)

daleel khariz... Shad sahab mai apke sath hun dont...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 22nd January 2013, 08:42 PM
Replies: 60
Views: 9,421
Posted By janumanu
Bhayee aukaat wali koe baat nahi... ...

Bhayee aukaat wali koe baat nahi...
shaturgurba ka kayda daag sahab se shuru hua tha... Meri jaankaari k hisaab se...
So is par to ni kah sakta.

Haan ek aur baat hai... Ghalib ne apni ghazal...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 22nd January 2013, 08:36 PM
Replies: 60
Views: 9,421
Posted By janumanu
Bilkul chahiyee ..... :) Meri baat bhi kaun...

Bilkul chahiyee ..... :)

Meri baat bhi kaun maantaa hai
Khair ..

Bhayee tasalli chahiye umr bhar isi main thodi uljha rahunga..
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 22nd January 2013, 08:14 PM
Replies: 60
Views: 9,421
Posted By janumanu
Mujeeb sahab .. Urdu mein qalam .. Ka gender...

Mujeeb sahab ..
Urdu mein qalam .. Ka gender kya hai ho sake to .. Proof k sath batayen . ..
Kynki firk aur qalam dono alag taraf k lafz hai
ek ko choo sakte hai ek ko nahin..
Apke pas urdu ki...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 22nd January 2013, 07:52 PM
Replies: 60
Views: 9,421
Posted By janumanu
mujeeb sahab adaab .... Kya aap batayenge ki...

mujeeb sahab adaab ....
Kya aap batayenge ki aapne jo usatadon k naam liye unki kaha kaha ghaltiyan hai.... Ya shaq hai aapko .. Main aapki baat jyun ki tyun rakh raha hun..

Regards
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 22nd January 2013, 04:10 PM
Replies: 60
Views: 9,421
Posted By janumanu
Thoda sa main bhi kahna chahta hun.... Shayari ka...

Thoda sa main bhi kahna chahta hun.... Shayari ka jo bhi grammar hai.. Aur zubaan ka jo bhi hai... Follow karna hi hoga... Aur agar koe nuks agar arooz mai hai to wo nuks hai hi... Chahe ghalib main...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 21st January 2013, 07:55 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,838
Posted By janumanu
haan mujhe yaad hai :) Ik kahani raaja bali...

haan mujhe yaad hai :)

Ik kahani raaja bali ki hau... Wo rakshash danavo k raja thy... Unki ik khaas baat thi .. Unke ghar se koe khali nahi jata tha...
Ek baar wo pooja karne baithy.... Taaki...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 21st January 2013, 07:24 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 807
Posted By janumanu
KahaaN gayab hi miyaaN.. ik shukeiyaa lete jao

KahaaN gayab hi miyaaN..
ik shukeiyaa lete jao
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 20th January 2013, 04:53 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,838
Posted By janumanu
Bhayee... Ek takhta kam hai.. Accepted but .......

Bhayee... Ek takhta kam hai.. Accepted but .... Actualy wo typo hai....

Jise ki jagah jisko hai .... main padh jisko hi raha hun... Tabse soch raha tha kaha takhta kam huaa ik..

Khaali hath...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 20th January 2013, 10:35 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,838
Posted By janumanu
are bhayee wo sab theek ... Magar main unka b...

are bhayee wo sab theek ... Magar main unka b point of view sunnta chahta hun.. Aur kuch nahi

Khair .. Aur mai to apni ghazal k sath hun ..... Baaki ka kaam aap sabka hai
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 20th January 2013, 10:00 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,838
Posted By janumanu
Bhayee suno padho .... Fir jo dil kahe so maano...

Bhayee suno padho
.... Fir jo dil kahe so maano
Mujhe lagta hai shayri sha,oor se aati hai... Aur wo aise hi paida hota hai.. Ulajhne se
:)
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 19th January 2013, 07:45 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,838
Posted By janumanu
bhayee maine ye kaho nahi kaha sach much bhool...

bhayee maine ye kaho nahi kaha sach much bhool gaya hai
Bas ye kaha aisa bhi ho sakta hai ..


Acha ab aap apni tarah se matla kahe to clear ho ..

Agar aap ye kah rahe hai ki.. Bol jab bol...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 19th January 2013, 06:58 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,810
Posted By janumanu
14 year old gal... Ufff What to say.. ...

14 year old gal... Ufff
What to say..

Shiv ka sher yaad aayaa

Ye kaun hai jo mout nu badnaam kar reha
insaan nu insan de janm ne mareya..

Wo ab tak bapis b aa chuki hogi
Dunia aise hi...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 19th January 2013, 06:49 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,838
Posted By janumanu
jaise marzi le ye to padhne wale par hai Sare...

jaise marzi le ye to padhne wale par hai
Sare haq uske hai
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 19th January 2013, 06:40 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,838
Posted By janumanu
Ji sahi .... Kaha thoda sa different hai par ...

Ji sahi ....
Kaha thoda sa different hai par
Ye padhne wale ki marzi

ki wo dil rakhne ko kah raha hai ya dil jalane ko ki bhool gaya hai
Ye kafiyat sabki apni ho sakti hai

And yes very...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 19th January 2013, 06:28 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,838
Posted By janumanu
bhayee radeef hata diyaa to baat kaha rahi Aur...

bhayee radeef hata diyaa to baat kaha rahi
Aur yahi to baat hai

dono misron main doni baat ki possibility hai
Radeef hi iski aisi hai
Aisa BHI ho sakta hai
Dono baten possible hain
Main...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 19th January 2013, 06:13 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,838
Posted By janumanu
Bhayee aapka sawaal hi jawaab hai.. Wo sach...

Bhayee aapka sawaal hi jawaab hai..

Wo sach much hi bhool gaya ho
Ya yun hi bol raha ho..
Yaha bolne se mata bhula dene ki baat se hai..

matlab ya usne sach mai bhula diya ya
Ya jhooth kah...
Forum: Humourous Shayri 19th January 2013, 05:25 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 2,598
Posted By janumanu
bhayeee. Bahut badhiyaaaa ...

bhayeee.

Bahut badhiyaaaa
...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 19th January 2013, 05:00 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,838
Posted By janumanu
dono sire padhiye bhayee aakhir poora sher hoke...

dono sire padhiye bhayee aakhir poora sher hoke hi baat banti hai ... Chaliye main koshish karta hun

simple ..

wo sach mai bhula baitha ho... Aisa bhi ho sakta hai.. Ya phir yun hi bol raha...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th January 2013, 12:49 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,660
Posted By janumanu
koe woqt hun bhi aise hi thy sahab.. Ab jane...

koe woqt hun bhi aise hi thy sahab..
Ab jane kaise hain

Apni hi yaad aake rah gayee

Very nice
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 19th January 2013, 11:36 AM
Replies: 39
Views: 6,950
Posted By janumanu
waiting for reply .... :) ...............

waiting for reply .... :)

...............
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 19th January 2013, 10:32 AM
Replies: 39
Views: 6,950
Posted By janumanu
asl lafz .. Diwaana hai Ya Deeeewaana

asl lafz ..
Diwaana hai
Ya

Deeeewaana
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 19th January 2013, 10:18 AM
Replies: 39
Views: 6,950
Posted By janumanu
bhayee mera sawaal aur kuch tha khair.... ...

bhayee mera sawaal aur kuch tha khair....

Meri ghazal pe bhi to baat karo..
Yaha hum aise hi lage hain... Koe poochne wala hi nahi
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th January 2013, 10:27 PM
Replies: 40
Views: 2,305
Posted By janumanu
bhayee bahut khoob ghazal hai............. ...

bhayee bahut khoob ghazal hai.............
bahut rawaa aur mouj wala meter hai

HaaN meiN mila di haaN to bahut khush hue huzoor

ye misraa to bas ufffffffffffffffffff

bahut hi khooob....
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 18th January 2013, 06:46 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 6,950
Posted By janumanu
accepted .. par kya kya deewana main di ki...

accepted ..
par kya kya deewana main di ki awaaz girayee gayee hai ?
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 18th January 2013, 06:40 AM
Replies: 39
Views: 6,950
Posted By janumanu
shaad sahab ... chaliye aapko aapke prashno ka...

shaad sahab ... chaliye aapko aapke prashno ka uttar de deta huN :)

--


bana kar wo pagal khud hi poochtaa hai
huaa chaak tera girebaan kyuN hai


ab mere hisaab se ye lagtaa hai ke kisi...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 17th January 2013, 10:29 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,838
Posted By janumanu
Islaah ke liye

Sabhi yaar dostoN ko salaam... bhaye maine bhi socha ... bahti Ganga maiN naha dho luN.... itni gyaaN ki dharayeN foot padi haiN phir se... isliye maiN bhi ghazal islaaH ke liye chipkaa raha huN......
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 17th January 2013, 10:11 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 6,950
Posted By janumanu
Mujeeb bhayee aapka khat padhaa... acha bhi laga...

Mujeeb bhayee aapka khat padhaa... acha bhi laga ...
ek sawaal hai.. aap chahe to ignore kar sate hai.. aapko bura lage to bhi bata deN.. maiN muaafi maang lungaa ...

aapne jo khat likha ......
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th January 2013, 05:40 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,272
Posted By janumanu
bhayee khaaq vatanparsti hai apni Jo vatan...

bhayee khaaq vatanparsti hai apni
Jo vatan parast hue .. Wo dunia hi chhod gaye..
Bas bhayee.
Bahut apne khoye hain is sarhad pe..
aisa hi mere bahut apne k sath kiya tha... U must hav heard...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 17th January 2013, 04:55 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 3,470
Posted By janumanu
bahut khoob likhaa hai aru sahab . yahi to...

bahut khoob likhaa hai aru sahab .
yahi to zazbaa chahiye ... desh ke liye

well written
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 17th January 2013, 04:40 AM
Replies: 39
Views: 6,950
Posted By janumanu
[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';446865]ab chalte hain aapki...

[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';446865]ab chalte hain aapki ghazal ki taraf...

bata de k itna pasheman kyun hai
mitakar mujhe ab pashemaan kyuN hai

1) agar radeef hai "pashemaan kyuN hai" to kya "itna"...
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