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Forum: Celebrations 28th November 2007, 04:11 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,155
Posted By ghayalparwana
Musharraf Hussain sahib, Meri aur saare...

Musharraf Hussain sahib,

Meri aur saare shayri.com parivar ki taraf se aapko saalgirah ki bahut mubaraqbaad.

Aap hamesha hi ik timtimate hue taare ki tarah is shayri parivar ki roshni bane...
Forum: Celebrations 19th November 2007, 03:56 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,104
Posted By ghayalparwana
Kin lafzon mein kahoon ki aap sabka mujhe yaad...

Kin lafzon mein kahoon ki aap sabka mujhe yaad rakhna mere liye kya maayne rakhta hai?!

Shukrguzaar huun main aap sab ki dua.on ke liye. Aap sab ki duaon ke sadke hi ye dil aabad hain.

Shukriya...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th October 2007, 09:55 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,319
Posted By ghayalparwana
Shukriya hamen yaad dilaane kaa ke hum 'insaan'...

Shukriya hamen yaad dilaane kaa ke hum 'insaan' hain aur hamare kuchh farz hain..

Varinder
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th October 2007, 09:42 PM
Replies: 14
Maa
Views: 907
Posted By ghayalparwana
Maa

Manna....

Bhai main agar aaj wahan hota tau tumhe kass ke gale se laga leta.. Maa-Baap hamen dunya mein laate hain, Maa hame apni kokh se lekar saari-umr dukh-taqleef se bacha kar rakhti hai,...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 23rd August 2007, 09:22 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 3,156
Posted By ghayalparwana
Its a shame that this competition has been...

Its a shame that this competition has been abandoned!!

No doubt Maikash ji had put in a lot of effort going through every ghazal meticulously and criticise and applaud the poets as they deserved....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th May 2007, 10:17 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,899
Posted By ghayalparwana
Bhaaji.... Dil khush kitta ji tussi.. ...

Bhaaji....

Dil khush kitta ji tussi..

Shiv ji.. ohh taan har punjabi de dil di dhadkan ne.. Apne ghama.n nuu unha ne shabdaan 'ch piro ke amar banaa ditta. Us fankaar nuu mera vii bahut bahut...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th May 2007, 10:06 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,115
Posted By ghayalparwana
hmm.. achha hai!!

hmm.. achha hai!!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd April 2007, 06:15 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,342
Posted By ghayalparwana
meri sanso ke chalne ka sabab teri yaadon ka...

meri sanso ke chalne ka sabab
teri yaadon ka silsila hoga...

jo duaa mange mere jeene ki
usko mujhse koii gila hoga.....

In sheyron ko padkar meri hontho par yak-b-yak hansi aa gayi..
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd April 2007, 06:09 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 3,429
Posted By ghayalparwana
Mian Nahin jaanta ye nazm maine kitni baar pad...

Mian Nahin jaanta ye nazm maine kitni baar pad daali... Aur kuchh is tarah isme doob gaya ke daad dena hi bhool gaya!!

Kya kahoon Maikash!! Nazm pad ke shahir ji ki nazmein yaad aa gayi... Har...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd April 2007, 06:01 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 903
Posted By ghayalparwana
Kamaal ka likha hai mere dost!! Bahut hi...

Kamaal ka likha hai mere dost!!

Bahut hi khushi hui ye ghazal pad kar... dil se wah nikli sach!

Likhte rahiye

Ghayalparwana
Forum: Chit-Chat & General Discussion Forum 22nd April 2007, 04:11 PM
Replies: 79
Views: 4,528
Posted By ghayalparwana
Meena ji aur Bedil sahib... Muaffi is baat...

Meena ji aur Bedil sahib...

Muaffi is baat ki maangi thi ke badi aasani se main yahaan se duur hota gaya..bhool gaya ke kis tarah dil ki taaren juddi hui hai aap sabse aur kho gaya apni basai hui...
Forum: Chit-Chat & General Discussion Forum 22nd April 2007, 12:56 AM
Replies: 79
Views: 4,528
Posted By ghayalparwana
Bedil.... Meena ji.... :( ... Bas...

Bedil....

Meena ji....

:(
... Bas itna hi kahooonga, aap hi samajh sakte hain ke is dil me aapki aur doosre khaas doston ki kya jagah hai... Shayad muafi ka haqdaar nahin huun main..
Forum: Celebrations 21st December 2006, 06:07 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 3,088
Posted By ghayalparwana
Der se aane ke liye maaufi.. janam din ki...

Der se aane ke liye maaufi..

janam din ki bahut badhai ho.. Aane waala naya saal aapke liye hazaraon khusiyan le kar aaye yehi dua rahegi

Varinder
Forum: Celebrations 15th November 2006, 02:56 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 3,485
Posted By ghayalparwana
Hairaan huun main.... Maine socha tha ke ab...

Hairaan huun main....

Maine socha tha ke ab tak mujhe sab bhool chuke hinge.. Duniya mein bas thoda duur hone ki zaroorat hoti hai aur aadmi anjaana ho jaata hai.. Mera yahan par bahut waqt se...
Forum: Celebrations 11th October 2006, 11:57 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 4,921
Posted By ghayalparwana
Kaan pakad kar Maafi chahta huun, itni der ke...

Kaan pakad kar Maafi chahta huun, itni der ke baad aapko wish karr raha huun..

Yahi prarthna hai ke bhagwaan hameshaa aap pe kripa ki nazar rakhe aur aapka usme vishwaas tal rahe. Har khushi ki...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th September 2006, 07:08 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 597
Posted By ghayalparwana
Be-hadd haseen ghazal pesh kee hai aapne, ik leh...

Be-hadd haseen ghazal pesh kee hai aapne, ik leh mein isse padne mein bahut mazza aaya.. beher aur wazn dono hi behtreen rahe.. kahi dhilapan nahin dikhayi diya.. Rabat ka tau kya kehna..

Aise...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 24th August 2006, 10:49 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 524
Posted By ghayalparwana
wah wah!! Khoob likha hai aapne.. Ghazal ki...

wah wah!!

Khoob likha hai aapne.. Ghazal ki baareekion ka khyaal rakhte hue bahut hi umda tareeke se yeh emotions saamne rakhe hain..

Bahut pasand aayi ye ghazal, aapka takkhallus bhi achha...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 24th August 2006, 10:46 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 753
Posted By ghayalparwana
umda khyaal hai.. wazan bhi khoob raha, magar...

umda khyaal hai.. wazan bhi khoob raha, magar beher mein dheel reh gai kayi sheron mein..

Pehli baar pada aapko aur achha laga

Likhte Rahiye

Varinder
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 24th August 2006, 06:51 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,083
Posted By ghayalparwana
Ajj bahut dina baad kuchh padiya... Enjj lagaya...

Ajj bahut dina baad kuchh padiya... Enjj lagaya ke kissi ne Phul dikhaya howe te khusboo len taun pehla hi waapas khich leya howe.

Je e nazm poori suna do taa phul vi saade kol aa jaayega te...
Forum: Ghazal Section 26th June 2006, 07:03 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,773
Posted By ghayalparwana
Achhi nazm hai, puraani yaadein taaza kar di...

Achhi nazm hai, puraani yaadein taaza kar di aapne..

Thodi si correction karr duun agar aap burra na maane tau:

kitiyan kabool assa jitiyan ghulamiyan
dil le ke de gaya saanu...
Forum: Ghazal Section 24th June 2006, 03:04 AM
Replies: 42
Views: 2,648
Posted By ghayalparwana
Abhi Taalib sahib ki ghazal parhi..issi mauzoo...

Abhi Taalib sahib ki ghazal parhi..issi mauzoo par!!

Kehna padega ke aap ne bhi kuchh kamm nahin likha

bahut khoob

varinder
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 24th June 2006, 03:02 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,335
Posted By ghayalparwana
aaj bahut dino baad ik ghazal pad kar khushi...

aaj bahut dino baad ik ghazal pad kar khushi hui..

fann ka jadoo yunhi bikharte rahiye

Varinder
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th May 2006, 04:39 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,136
Posted By ghayalparwana
Yeah, we all will read it and appreciate it. ...

Yeah, we all will read it and appreciate it.

But the big question is whether it will change us???

If we go out today and demonstrate that we love our country , not by boasting aloud about it,...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th May 2006, 12:48 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,042
Posted By ghayalparwana
Manoj sahab... Aapka Bahut Shukriya ke ik...

Manoj sahab...

Aapka Bahut Shukriya ke ik be-misaal mausiki ke diggaj ko yahan shardanjili pesh ki aur saath hi saath unke jeewan pe bhi roshni daali..

Sach woh hameshaa apni dhunon mein amar...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th May 2006, 12:34 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,427
Posted By ghayalparwana
Aaaaaahhhhhh..... Dil se ye aawaaz nikli...

Aaaaaahhhhhh.....

Dil se ye aawaaz nikli jaise hi nazm ka aakhri misra pada janab....

Har sheyr ke har misre mein rabt aur wazn ka bahut sahi namoona yahan pesh kiya aur fir in lafzon mein kya...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd May 2006, 06:08 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,852
Posted By ghayalparwana
khoob kahi ye Ghazal bhi Maikash sahab.. ...

khoob kahi ye Ghazal bhi Maikash sahab..

kabhi waqt mile to aapse iski beher ke mu'tallik baat hogi

khyaal rakhiyega

Varinder
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th March 2006, 04:36 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,214
Posted By ghayalparwana
Dear Kanchan ji, Manoj sahab, Farhana, Saakib ji...

Dear Kanchan ji, Manoj sahab, Farhana, Saakib ji aur Parul..

Zarra-nawazi hai aap sab ki jo is nacheez ki ik purani likhi hui ghazal ko aap ne saraha..

Kuchh halaat aise ho chuke hain ke...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th March 2006, 05:46 PM
Replies: 53
Views: 1,601
Posted By ghayalparwana
Hey.. This is so well written.. I'm proud...

Hey.. This is so well written..

I'm proud of u..

Love

Varinder
Forum: Inspiring Stories 10th February 2006, 04:55 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,944
Posted By ghayalparwana
Meena ji... Kitna dard hai duniya mein,...

Meena ji...

Kitna dard hai duniya mein, magar kahin na kahin uska marham bhi hota hai.. Sab ko dukh hai..jo dukh mein bhi khush rahe woh hi bhagwaan ko paata hai kyonki dukh aur sukh dena uske hi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th February 2006, 02:19 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,543
Posted By ghayalparwana
MaikasH ji se baat hui to unhone kaha ke Pars kya...

MaikasH ji se baat hui to unhone kaha ke Pars kya khoob likh rahi hai aaj kal!! Unki baat sunkar yahan aaya aur ye Ghazal padi.. aur sach dil khush ho gaya...

Jahan main shayri ki duniya se duur...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th February 2006, 01:20 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,183
Posted By ghayalparwana
Same with me.. Would be able to meet this...

Same with me..

Would be able to meet this sunday, hopefully!

Varinder
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th February 2006, 12:42 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,183
Posted By ghayalparwana
This is sad.. There was a glimmer of hope...

This is sad..

There was a glimmer of hope that while we r away from idea, the core of family, we still would be able to meet some and learn a bit more about shayri.. Anyways was a good initiative...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st January 2006, 10:17 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,183
Posted By ghayalparwana
I strongly urge the members of this family to...

I strongly urge the members of this family to make this meet successful.

Apparently the response has been lousy till now. We could learn a lot from one another so why not give it a try.
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th January 2006, 02:54 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,197
Posted By ghayalparwana
uff.. one of the easiest flowing ghazal I have...

uff.. one of the easiest flowing ghazal I have ever read!!

kamaal...

varinder
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th January 2006, 02:21 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 483
Posted By ghayalparwana
yun hi bas...

yeh jo dil ki dhadkhan hai
tere naam ki sargam hai..

janam janam ka saath hai ye
atoot ab apna bandhan hai

Hawas ki isme bhookh nahin
aatmaon ka ye sangam hai

patjhar si thi ram-kahani
Forum: Aapki Shayri 9th January 2006, 08:43 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 796
Posted By ghayalparwana
badi nawazish beher ko gaur se samjhane ke liye.....

badi nawazish beher ko gaur se samjhane ke liye..

main usse yakeenan shama- e- hasti hi padta.. magar ab gaur se dekha tau samjha ke beher ko theek bethanne ke liye sham-e hi pada jaana chahiye,...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 9th January 2006, 12:35 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 997
Posted By ghayalparwana
Gulbadan is ghar ki zeenat nahin Banatvi phool...

Gulbadan is ghar ki zeenat nahin
Banatvi phool main sajaun kab tak...

Daanish sahib mere khyaal mein agar aap shayri-e-dard mein apni shayri post kare tau zyaada log aapko pad sakenge, for the...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 9th January 2006, 12:25 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 963
Posted By ghayalparwana
Bahut behtreen... Urdu adab ki itni...

Bahut behtreen...

Urdu adab ki itni jaankaari nahin hai abhi ke aapki ghazal ki deserved tareef karr saku, bas itna hi kahoonga ke ik ik lafz ko gaur se para aur kai baar para aur har baar har...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 9th January 2006, 12:13 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 796
Posted By ghayalparwana
afsos hua ye dekh kar ke itne unche darze ki...

afsos hua ye dekh kar ke itne unche darze ki ghazal ko pesh kar aapko khud replies ke liye kehna parr raha hai...

Behadd umda ghazal likhi hai aapne, rabt aur beher dono ke hi baare mein kuchh...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th January 2006, 08:15 AM
Replies: 45
Views: 2,154
Posted By ghayalparwana
Chotti beher ki ghazlein khaas pasandida hai...

Chotti beher ki ghazlein khaas pasandida hai meri, shayad isliye ke main unhe likh nahin paata!!

Banno (Afshan) ko aaj miss karr raha huun, choti beher main likhne ki ustaaadi ho gayi thi usse..
...
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