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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th April 2005, 11:18 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 4,427
Posted By Sharaabi
haaye, shabdoN mein itnii bebasii ko qeh'd...

haaye, shabdoN mein itnii bebasii ko qeh'd rakhnaa achii baat nahiN hai mere bhai! ..jinke liye dil tadapta hai, kaash woh bhii paD sakte apne aashiqoN ke jazbaat.

bahot zordaar ghazal hai...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd April 2005, 08:50 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 542
Posted By Sharaabi
since you're open to suggestions, and i happen to...

since you're open to suggestions, and i happen to have time, i'll leave you a short note. it's not compulsary, but it's eye-candy when the words of your literature rhyme (mostly).. hindi mein usse...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd April 2005, 08:40 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 629
Posted By Sharaabi
agar aadmiiyon kaa rona theek hotaa, to kasam...

agar aadmiiyon kaa rona theek hotaa, to kasam khudaa kii aankheN bheegii hotii = p

bahot hi behtareen ghazal pesh kii hai aapne..

"yeh tamanna bhi "zeba"dil me lekay maray
maut aane tak to...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 21st April 2005, 11:20 AM
Replies: 36
Views: 1,928
Posted By Sharaabi
lagta hai kuch din ho gaye is ghazal ko yahaan...

lagta hai kuch din ho gaye is ghazal ko yahaan par sajte hue, par khair koi baat nahin = x

shaanti bhai, shaanti..

jo guzar chukaa hai us atiit ke liye ashq kyoon bahaane? merii salaa ko chhoR...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 21st April 2005, 11:16 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,155
Posted By Sharaabi
ABHEY! itne dinon se kahaan the yaar? ...

ABHEY!

itne dinon se kahaan the yaar?

rahii ghazal kii baat, uskii to aar-paar sab ne kar dii par yeh zaroor kahuun gaa kii aapke shabdon mein ab bhii wahii dard hai jo kuch saal pehle huaa...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 21st April 2005, 11:10 AM
Replies: 50
Views: 2,706
Posted By Sharaabi
anu bhai, maafii chahta hoon aapse. ...

anu bhai,

maafii chahta hoon aapse.

kitne khoob kalaam aapke humne nazaron se jaane diye, bahot hi afsos hota hai mere bhai ; X

khair, yeh lehk aapka dil ko chuu gaya..

"Chaandni raat ki...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 21st April 2005, 11:05 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,080
Posted By Sharaabi
ab bhi bahot acha likhte hain aap ..mehfil...

ab bhi bahot acha likhte hain aap

..mehfil mein kadam rakh kar hii dil halka ho gaya..

yuun hi sajaate rahiiye madam

aman
Forum: Feedback and Suggestions 11th November 2004, 02:04 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,486
Posted By Sharaabi
Khayaal to acha hai bhai :)

Khayaal to acha hai bhai :)
Forum: Feedback and Suggestions 11th November 2004, 02:02 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,954
Posted By Sharaabi
perhaps your images are too big in size?

perhaps your images are too big in size?
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th November 2004, 01:15 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 795
Posted By Sharaabi
Rakesh bhai, Aapke khayaal waaqaye `chaand`...

Rakesh bhai,

Aapke khayaal waaqaye `chaand` ko chuu kar dimaagh tak paauNchte haiN, kalam meiN utarne se pehle! Is mehfil meiN do logoN kii kaviitaayeN dil ko behad pasand aatii haiN, ek aap haiN...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th November 2004, 01:06 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,014
Posted By Sharaabi
KHuDa Ko NaHi, KhuDa Se Bhi BaDhKaR UnHe YaaD...

KHuDa Ko NaHi, KhuDa Se Bhi BaDhKaR UnHe YaaD KaRTe Hain
-- upar jaa ke kya jawaab deN ge madam? :p

mazaak mazaak.. not tryinna lecture you, but just a lil advice, whether or not you implement...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th November 2004, 12:55 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,245
Posted By Sharaabi
sochta hooN kii jo aise lafz beyaan kar sake, us...

sochta hooN kii jo aise lafz beyaan kar sake, us dil pe kyaa guzrii hogii? khair.. bahot pasand aaye aapke jazbaat, par aapke dard mehsoos karne kii jurrat nahiiN karooN gaa..

mehfil sajaate...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th November 2004, 12:52 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,409
Posted By Sharaabi
aapke laa-javaab shabdoN kaa maiN kyaa jawaab...

aapke laa-javaab shabdoN kaa maiN kyaa jawaab dooN?

bas, likhte rahiiye madam = )
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th November 2004, 01:37 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 2,040
Posted By Sharaabi
anu saahab, agar dosti dushmanon se karen...

anu saahab,

agar dosti dushmanon se karen ge, to unke hissoN kii dushmani kiske naam hogii?

khair, bahot khoob likha hai yaar..

chiirag-e-dil aab bhi hai kahi roshan
ghar koi aur, 'mast'...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 5th November 2004, 11:58 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 956
Posted By Sharaabi
dono taraf se laa-javaab hai manoj bhai.. ek...

dono taraf se laa-javaab hai manoj bhai..

ek to is mein khoobiiyat itnii hai kii iska koii javaab nahin..
..aur doosra yeh hai kii aapke in sawaaloN kaa mere paas koii jawaab nahiN! very nice.....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 5th November 2004, 11:51 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 632
Posted By Sharaabi
janamdin mubaarak ho.. but mind you, you are very...

janamdin mubaarak ho.. but mind you, you are very near the age of marriage now, so taiiyaar rehna madam. saas-bahuu ke jhagaDe, khaana-pakaana, jhaaDu-pocha.. but before all that, just cut your cake...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th November 2004, 08:34 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 5,660
Posted By Sharaabi
ab bhi aakhir dikhaa hii diya...

ab bhi aakhir dikhaa hii diya karishmaat-e-tasavuur = )

milte hain
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th November 2004, 08:31 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 667
Posted By Sharaabi
yun na jao muh pher ke humse aap... lagega...

yun na jao muh pher ke humse aap...
lagega humare hi pyar main koi kami hogi...
-- laa-javaab..

dost, maiN taqreer ke qaabil to nahiN par itna zaroor kahuuN gaa.. yeh jo duniya hai, humaare...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th March 2004, 02:59 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 698
Posted By Sharaabi
Janaab arnab saahab, pehle to aap daad aur...

Janaab arnab saahab,

pehle to aap daad aur mubaarak-baad dono qabuul farmaaiiye ik dilkash ghazal ke upar.

"Rokiyee na in kaafiroen ko jo mehmaan thi meri
Chu kar nikal jaye palkoen se woh...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th March 2004, 01:56 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 877
Posted By Sharaabi
Yeh jeena bhi kya jeena hai Ghum khaana aansoo...

Yeh jeena bhi kya jeena hai
Ghum khaana aansoo peena hai
«-- waah paras jii.. kya farmaayaa hai aapne

gar aisaa hotaa, to koii bhii insaan bhuukaa nahiiN martaa, kisii bhii bhuuke insaan ko ik...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th March 2004, 01:53 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 702
Posted By Sharaabi
kisii kii zindagii ban'ne kii jagah, kabhii kisii...

kisii kii zindagii ban'ne kii jagah, kabhii kisii maut ban kar dekhiiye gaa. aapke lafzoN se gar kisii kaa khoon ho bhii gayaa, to doshii aap nahiiN, par aapkii kalam kehlaaye gii.

achchaa likhaa...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th March 2004, 01:52 AM
Replies: 3
dil
Views: 447
Posted By Sharaabi
khoob.. bahot khoob ;) aman

khoob.. bahot khoob ;)

aman
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th March 2004, 01:51 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,198
Posted By Sharaabi
Begum Aktar kii yeh gayii ghazal waaqaye bahot...

Begum Aktar kii yeh gayii ghazal waaqaye bahot achii hai. yaadeiN taazaa ho gayii..

shukriyaa
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th March 2004, 11:16 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 997
Posted By Sharaabi
sanjoo bhai, maafii chahtaa hooN yaar, aaj kal...

sanjoo bhai,
maafii chahtaa hooN yaar, aaj kal saalii fursat hii nahiiN miltii.

bahot achaa likhaa hai aapne, magar aapko ab bataane kii zaroorat nahiiN hai ;)

"Maujo ka safaR kab ruka sahil k...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 3rd March 2004, 01:34 AM
Replies: 1,391
Views: 98,962
Posted By Sharaabi
Exclamation pesh hai aap sabkii likhii ik ghazal;...

pesh hai aap sabkii likhii ik ghazal; mubaarak-baad aur daad dono qubuul kii jiiye gaa!


AJNABI SAYA BANA AUR PHIR JUDA BHI HO GAYA
EK ZARA SI BAAT PER ITNA KHAFA BHI HO GAYA
musharraf saahab
...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 2nd March 2004, 05:08 PM
Replies: 1,391
Views: 98,962
Posted By Sharaabi
shuuruu shuuruu meiN kuch galtiiyaaN huii, par...

shuuruu shuuruu meiN kuch galtiiyaaN huii, par koii baat nahiiN, aisaa aksar hotaa rahe gaa. manoj saahab ne ik sher kii jagah do sher pesh kiye, aur salman bhai ghazal kaa khatmaa karnaa bhool gaye...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd March 2004, 03:27 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 645
Posted By Sharaabi
"dulhaan koh eik doli kah haq hain, laash koh...

"dulhaan koh eik doli kah haq hain,
laash koh eik arthee kaah haq hain"
«-- allaat! kya baat farmaayii hai!!

waah, jisne bhii likhaa hai, bahot khoob likhaa hai dost.
ik laash ko erthii kaa...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd March 2004, 02:18 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,366
Posted By Sharaabi
paras ji, kyaa baat hai! merii aaNkheN...

paras ji,

kyaa baat hai! merii aaNkheN waise hii itnii badnaam haiN, aap to kabhii rukte hii nahiiN!

khair, likhaa to aapne acha hai, is liye maiN shikaayat bhii nahiiN kar saktaa!


Bhula...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd March 2004, 01:36 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 331
Posted By Sharaabi
gham de kar muskuraane waalii aadaa-aadaa...

gham de kar muskuraane waalii
aadaa-aadaa miTaane waalii
kab banne gii 'ahsan' bataao
tum jaisii chaahane waalii?

bahot khoob likhaa hai aapne..

daad qabuul farmaaiiye,
aman
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd March 2004, 01:30 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,682
Posted By Sharaabi
Meena ji, aapne bahot khoob likhaa hai! ...

Meena ji,

aapne bahot khoob likhaa hai! chhothe-mothe jaghaDe to hote rehte haiN, khud ko dard pauNchaane se kyaa mile gaa?

ab jitnii chaahuuN taareef kartaa rahooN aapke lafzoN kii, magar yeh...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th February 2004, 01:47 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 665
Posted By Sharaabi
Janaab, aapne madat maangii thii, so hum aa...

Janaab,

aapne madat maangii thii, so hum aa gaye. sabse pehle to keh detaa hooN kii aapne bahot hii khoob lafzoN kaa ishtemaal kiyaa hai,
jis se aapkii ghazal kii hesiiyat aur bhii bhaD gayii...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th February 2004, 10:50 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,020
Posted By Sharaabi
mayank bhai, "Jaantaa hai tu mere dil ka...

mayank bhai,

"Jaantaa hai tu mere dil ka haal khuda
Jee na paunga agar kuch hogaya abb usae."
«-- laa-jawaab mere dost, laa-jawaab!

aye khuda, agar tuu kahiiN hai.. tu zaroor sun le is...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th February 2004, 10:08 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 799
Posted By Sharaabi
Sanjoo bhai, WAAH! maiN kyaa kahooN yaar aapke...

Sanjoo bhai,
WAAH! maiN kyaa kahooN yaar aapke in lafzoN ke baare meiN.. bas paDte hii ghaayal kar daala!


"Merii kalpana hai woh
mere armano ki udaaN hai woh
Mere MANDIR ki muRat hai woh"...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th February 2004, 03:28 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 814
Posted By Sharaabi
mohtaram janaab musharraf saahab, salaam.....

mohtaram janaab musharraf saahab,

salaam.. gazab kaa likhaa hai aapne!

"zindagi meri pur aafaat ho gaee hai
jaise beemaar hoon aur raat ho gaee hai"
-- uff! kyaa sher pesh kiyaa hai aapne! ...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th February 2004, 03:11 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,965
Posted By Sharaabi
anu bhai aapko beyaan kiye hue jazbaatoN kaa...

anu bhai
aapko beyaan kiye hue jazbaatoN kaa ehsaas huaa, to likhne kii koshish azeez rahii!
dam-ba-dam hauslaa afzaaii kaa shukriyaa qabuul kii jiye!


tulsika ji
aapke jawaab, aur waqt dono...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th February 2004, 08:00 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,965
Posted By Sharaabi
priya ji ..bahot khoob sher farmaayaa hai...

priya ji
..bahot khoob sher farmaayaa hai aapne!
aur aapkii har baat se sehmat hooN, par waise -- 'gar aapko mujh-sa koii aapko chaahne waala mil jaataa, to woh bhii shyad aap jitnaa hii khush...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th February 2004, 12:16 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 722
Posted By Sharaabi
saNgdil duniyaa meiN insaanoN ko kaun samjhe? ...

saNgdil duniyaa meiN insaanoN ko kaun samjhe?
manzil naa raasta, in armaanoN ko kaun samjhe?

rakesh saahab,
aapne gazab kaa likhaa hai.
aur kisne kaaha kii aap 'loser' ho? woh shyad khud sach...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 24th February 2004, 11:46 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 15,814
Posted By Sharaabi
Shalu, ya 'nanu', yaa madam? jo bhi pasand...

Shalu, ya 'nanu', yaa madam?

jo bhi pasand hai, woh abhii bataa dii jiye.. par waise, aapkii rachnaa humme bahot pasand aayii.
magar kabhii-naa-kabhii koii-naa-koii shaKHs aaye gaa aapke raaste...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 24th February 2004, 11:37 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 556
Posted By Sharaabi
sach kaha hai aapne.. par kya kareN? haqeeqat...

sach kaha hai aapne..
par kya kareN? haqeeqat se kaRvii to merii sharaab bhii nahiiN hotii, magar isse bhii peena paDtaa hai. hai naa?

khair, daad qabuul farmaaiiye gaa..

aman
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 24th February 2004, 11:35 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,965
Posted By Sharaabi
mohtarma shimul saahiba bahot bahot...

mohtarma shimul saahiba

bahot bahot shukriyaa jo merii ghazal pe kuch alfaaz baaNTe.
nazar-e-karam kaa mamnuuN rahooN gaa.
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