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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 21st February 2003, 09:54 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,305
Posted By geetanjali
Mahima ji Kya baat kahi hai aapne. Bohat accha...

Mahima ji
Kya baat kahi hai aapne. Bohat accha lika hai aapne. liktey rahiye

Geetanjali
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 21st February 2003, 09:52 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 412
Posted By geetanjali
wah sahab , kya khoob kaha hai aapne Ek bijli...

wah sahab , kya khoob kaha hai aapne
Ek bijli kaundh ker itna hassin
ek baadal raat bhar rota raha.

bohat accha vipin ji

Geetanjali
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd February 2003, 10:58 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 759
Posted By geetanjali
Smile Vipin saab Kya aap muje batange ki aap ke...

Vipin saab

Kya aap muje batange ki aap ke pas kon sa Pen hai? Sach me behut ascha liktey hai aap.

apki dost

Geetanjali
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th January 2003, 01:39 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 941
Posted By geetanjali
Post Vipinjee Execellent rachna. Apki soch ka...

Vipinjee

Execellent rachna. Apki soch ka deepak kabhi na bujne ki kamna karti hoon.

Geetanjali
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 21st January 2003, 11:09 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 2,519
Posted By geetanjali
Exclamation Bohat acha vipin jee

Bohat acha vipin jee
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th January 2003, 05:03 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 5,182
Posted By geetanjali
Thumbs up Vipinjee Aapki yeh rachna jane kyon bar bar...

Vipinjee

Aapki yeh rachna jane kyon bar bar padne ka mann karta hai. Bahut hi behtareen baat kahi hai aapne. Sach mein pyar ko mehsoos karne ko dil karta hai. Vipin jee bahut samay se aapne kuch...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th December 2002, 10:02 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 358
Posted By geetanjali
Thumbs up Good ISHIQKAji, keep it up

Good ISHIQKAji,

keep it up
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th December 2002, 09:53 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 415
Posted By geetanjali
Thumbs up Wah

Namaste vipinji

Bohat hi accha likhtey hai aap. Kuch alag hi soch hai apke paas jo logon ko akarsit karti hai padne ke liye. Dua hai aap aisa hi likhtey rahen.

apki dost
Geetanjali
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th November 2002, 11:28 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,059
Posted By geetanjali
Thumbs up keep it up

Hello vipin

Hum sab her pal apke saath hain.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th November 2002, 01:46 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,612
Posted By geetanjali
Smile nice

Hello Vipinji

Apki baat hi alag hai vipin. Apki hindi bahut achi hai aur aap liktey bhi bahut acha hain. Apki lines ko mehsoos karne ka man karta hai. Chalo is bahane hum apse bahut kuch sik sakte...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th November 2002, 03:16 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,405
Posted By geetanjali
Thumbs up Chota hai magar umda sher hai. Keep writing ...

Chota hai magar umda sher hai. Keep writing

Geetanjali
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th November 2002, 03:10 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,084
Posted By geetanjali
Smile okay

Vipinji
aap sachaee ka intejar karte hain to sachaee mein bhi dum hoga.

Geetanjali
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th November 2002, 03:04 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 436
Posted By geetanjali
Smile Shukriya AMAN ji

Shukriya AMAN ji
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th November 2002, 03:03 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 436
Posted By geetanjali
Smile Vipinji Hume kusi hui ki apko hamari line...

Vipinji

Hume kusi hui ki apko hamari line pasand ayi. hume visvaas nahin ho raha hai.

Geetanjali
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th November 2002, 02:56 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,059
Posted By geetanjali
Arrow Hello vipinji apki baat padi,padkar dukh hua...

Hello vipinji

apki baat padi,padkar dukh hua ki yahan aise horaha hai. Agar aise hua hai to shayad koi bhi yahan likhna pasand nahin karega. Hum yahan abhi naye hain lekin mujhe bhi umeed hai ki...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th November 2002, 10:04 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 436
Posted By geetanjali
Arrow Mera mann

Aashaaon ki zubaan se,
Mann hee mann ke khayal se.
Armaano ki kahaniyan
Mera mann na jane kyon khil gaya hai.

Suraj ki jab kiran pari
shabnam pe tab likhi gayi
Baadal ki yeh kahaniyan
Mera...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th November 2002, 10:02 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 2,062
Posted By geetanjali
Exclamation Hello Vipinji Bohat accha laga apki kavita...

Hello Vipinji

Bohat accha laga apki kavita padkar. bilkul alag soch hai apki. Rating mein No. 1 hai apki kavita jo ki is ki hakdaar hai.

keep writing

Geetanjali
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th November 2002, 02:15 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,084
Posted By geetanjali
Smile Wah.

Vipinji-
aap bohat kam lafzo mein bahot kuch ke dete hain. aur wo bi itne khubsurti se. baat rahi Janam ki to vipin ji wo kahin na kahin janam lechuki hongi bas intejar men rahiye.

geetanjali
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th October 2002, 10:51 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,624
Posted By geetanjali
Sad Please Vipin

Hello Vippi (Soonya nahi),

Maine aapki sab shayri pari, achi nahin liki hai aapne. Acha nahin likte ho aap kyn ki aap bahooooooooooooot hi acha likte ho jiski koi misal nahi hai. Or main nahi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th October 2002, 03:39 AM
Replies: 62
Views: 5,182
Posted By geetanjali
Thumbs up Hi Vipin Maine aapki sari shayri padi, accha...

Hi Vipin

Maine aapki sari shayri padi, accha likhy ho aap.

Geetanjali
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th October 2002, 10:49 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,624
Posted By geetanjali
Question why?

Hi Vipin,

What happen?, actually today is 1st day aur maine aapki shayri mein click kiya to samne apki kahani thi. aap sab se khafa kyu hai? parkar afsos huva apki baat. vaise abhi maine apki baki...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th October 2002, 10:43 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,518
Posted By geetanjali
Thumbs up Cool

Coooool, keep it up

Geetanjali
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