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Forum: Ghazal Section 25th February 2016, 06:06 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,331
Posted By zidd
Aapki shayri me ek imandari aur maasomiyat...

Aapki shayri me ek imandari aur maasomiyat hai....meri taraf se aapko golden daad.
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 25th February 2016, 05:01 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 990
Posted By zidd
Nice effort khwar sahab..... Likhte rahiye ...

Nice effort khwar sahab.....
Likhte rahiye

Regards
Forum: Site Announcements 21st October 2014, 03:05 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 4,191
Posted By zidd
Freinds and Brothers, I am deeply touched by...

Freinds and Brothers,

I am deeply touched by your concern.

I am Ok now and was not as sick as it seems here.
its just that i ran into quite a few problems at the same time, and was not in the...
Forum: Site Announcements 21st October 2014, 03:03 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 4,191
Posted By zidd
Freinds and Brothers, I am deeply touched by...

Freinds and Brothers,

I am deeply touched by your concern.

I am Ok now and was not as sick as it seems here.
its just that i ran into quite a few problems at the same time, and was not in the...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd August 2014, 01:47 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 899
Posted By zidd
kya baat hai... i declare myself to be your...

kya baat hai...
i declare myself to be your fan.

kis zamane me le gaye bhai...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd August 2014, 12:26 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 975
Posted By zidd
what a beautiful step. i whole heartedly agree...

what a beautiful step.
i whole heartedly agree with parineetaji.

and also my thanks to all who have forgiven and forgotten( whatever the incident was:confused:)
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 23rd July 2014, 11:25 AM
Replies: 1,350
Views: 96,480
Posted By zidd
kitni taareef ki jaaye iski... zarra sahab aap...

kitni taareef ki jaaye iski...
zarra sahab aap to seriously ab shayri ko hobby chodkar , ek semi professional way me len.

aapse bahut hi kamtar log mashoor ho gaye tv par.

aap to hilaa denge...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 18th July 2014, 06:39 PM
Replies: 1,350
Views: 96,480
Posted By zidd
vo piyale ka brand name kya hai...jo peena chahte...

vo piyale ka brand name kya hai...jo peena chahte ho?
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 18th July 2014, 02:49 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 4,048
Posted By zidd
shergoyi ke fatique (lol) ki wajah se ye activity...

shergoyi ke fatique (lol) ki wajah se ye activity pause mode par rakh raha hu...
august 1 ko final sdc ghazal no1 aur ghazal no 2 post karunga.
plus mai thoda busy bhi rahunga agle 10 din.
but u...
Forum: General Stories 17th July 2014, 02:14 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,657
Posted By zidd
Kal raat kisine FB par dhalti umr ki yaad dila...

Kal raat kisine FB par dhalti umr ki yaad dila di....tab ye purana article usko dikhaya aur mera bhi ek baar aur padne ka dil kiya...
jisme itna padne ka hausla hai vo bhi pade:D
Forum: Ghazal Section 14th July 2014, 10:26 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 3,758
Posted By zidd
dosto, jaise ufaq sahab ne points diye hai usi...

dosto,
jaise ufaq sahab ne points diye hai usi tarah mai bhi points de raha hu.
mere kuch criterias hain, jispar maine marking ki hai.

ek breif uske baare me yaha chaspa raha hu.
...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 14th July 2014, 07:13 PM
Replies: 123
Sticky: Sawaal Jawaab!
Views: 17,134
Posted By zidd
aapka hukm sar ankho par..aapko to pata hi hai ke...

aapka hukm sar ankho par..aapko to pata hi hai ke mai kuch yu hi nahi kah dunga..jaise definition de diya etc.

i will come out with a complete history and the nuances and acecdotes regarding that
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 14th July 2014, 07:07 PM
Replies: 123
Sticky: Sawaal Jawaab!
Views: 17,134
Posted By zidd
Today, 05:02 PM mai 'milestones in a poets...

Today, 05:02 PM
mai 'milestones in a poets journey' -ek article likhna chahta tha, magar mere saare thoughts jumbled up hain, isliye nahi likha.

ye waise sa topic hai , jo adeil sahab aur naaz...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 14th July 2014, 03:46 PM
Replies: 101
Views: 16,204
Posted By zidd
aap dil se gaye hi kab the janaab. hum kabhi...

aap dil se gaye hi kab the janaab.
hum kabhi mile nahi magar na jaane kyu , aapki sabse zyada aati hai ,jinse mila hu unki bhi itni nahi aati

welome mujeeb sahab...ab is mahfil ko 4 chand lagte...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th July 2014, 08:45 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 541
Posted By zidd
Ye muhabbat bhi chaaNd jaisi hai, Jo mukammal...

Ye muhabbat bhi chaaNd jaisi hai,
Jo mukammal hui to ghatne lagi...


lucky bhai , ye sher mujhe bhai ,nahayiti aalaa darje ka laga...mere hisaab se...
meri taraf se bahut saari daad.
baqi...
Forum: General Stories 13th July 2014, 03:17 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 8,349
Posted By zidd
i think now ,that the intent of the story was...

i think now ,that the intent of the story was real, as zainyji has guessed.
i withdraw my light hearted banter. agar bura laga ho to my sincere apologies .
i will request the relevant mods to...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 13th July 2014, 02:37 PM
Replies: 1,350
Views: 96,480
Posted By zidd
mai deh raha tha kab ispar nigah jaati hai...

mai deh raha tha kab ispar nigah jaati hai saahibaano ki...pahle bold kiya tha , phir hata diya...socha dehte hai kaun point out karta hai.:D
Forum: General Stories 13th July 2014, 01:45 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 8,349
Posted By zidd
wahi to maine kaha:D ladko ka zyada height ki...

wahi to maine kaha:D
ladko ka zyada height ki wajah se thoda body weight zyada hota hai..isliye ladke ko thoda extra khana chaiye tha:D

ab usne jaan kar extra nahi khaya ya nadaani me nahi khaya...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 13th July 2014, 11:10 AM
Replies: 1,350
Views: 96,480
Posted By zidd
kuch sher mere taraf se bhi Lagta garma garm...

kuch sher mere taraf se bhi

Lagta garma garm hi accha
Ab ho bosa ya ho samosa

---------------------------------

SaikhDo laana.te hai bose par
Apni to kat gayi samose par
Forum: General Stories 13th July 2014, 11:00 AM
Replies: 37
Views: 8,349
Posted By zidd
iska faisla karne se pahle kuch investigation...

iska faisla karne se pahle kuch investigation karna hoga..

ladko ka height and body weight ladkiyo se zyada hota hai...to jab zeher khaya to ye baat par dhyaaan rakha gaya?...ki ladka zyada zeher...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 11th July 2014, 11:05 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 4,048
Posted By zidd
bahut accha sher kaha hai furqann bhai....bilkul...

bahut accha sher kaha hai furqann bhai....bilkul beherband.

ek aur koshish ho jaaye kisi dusre qafiye me?...ye qafiya ho gaya hai

once more furqann bhai.

regards
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 11th July 2014, 06:16 PM
Replies: 123
Sticky: Sawaal Jawaab!
Views: 17,134
Posted By zidd
amaa yaar kuch asli kaam ka item nikalo..ye sab...

amaa yaar kuch asli kaam ka item nikalo..ye sab baccho ki churan goli nahi...
u can do better than this:mad:
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 11th July 2014, 03:53 PM
Replies: 123
Sticky: Sawaal Jawaab!
Views: 17,134
Posted By zidd
i wonder what he would have done in todays times...

i wonder what he would have done in todays times if he was around ,if some one had given him a ballpen and asked the same question.
it only shows that languages are not constant:D, but dynamic
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 11th July 2014, 01:07 PM
Replies: 123
Sticky: Sawaal Jawaab!
Views: 17,134
Posted By zidd
adeil sahab maine aapka post dekha nahi tha ,...

adeil sahab maine aapka post dekha nahi tha , varna r&d wali bat nahi karta.

aap agee badiye...the topic has become very interesting now.

jaisa pahle kaha ki is thread ka maqsad baal ki khaal...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 11th July 2014, 12:53 PM
Replies: 123
Sticky: Sawaal Jawaab!
Views: 17,134
Posted By zidd
adeil sahab aapne bahut accha addition kiya hai. ...

adeil sahab aapne bahut accha addition kiya hai.
mere khayaal se aur R&D , filhaal karna fizuul hai.
ye sabit ho gaya ki qalam , dono tarah se chalan me hai , murawwij hai.

ye kaha jaa saakta...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 10th July 2014, 10:53 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,613
Posted By zidd
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=7745...

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=77450

is lin ko check kijiye furqan sahab..aap samjh jayenge
Forum: Introduction Forum 10th July 2014, 10:47 PM
Replies: 503
Views: 27,586
Posted By zidd
jawaab to sahi hai...but is it posible? can...

jawaab to sahi hai...but is it posible? can infinity take place of a real number?
or though right , is infinity is an illusion? whats ur opinion?

as far as ur second observation- i guess u are...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 10th July 2014, 10:30 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,613
Posted By zidd
accha kaha aapne furqan bhai.. is sher ko bhi...

accha kaha aapne furqan bhai..
is sher ko bhi is ghazal me incorporate kar denge.

aap dusri ghazal jo current hai uspar sher kahiye.

mai ye ghazal jab final 15th july ko publish hogi to aapka...
Forum: Introduction Forum 10th July 2014, 09:43 PM
Replies: 503
Views: 27,586
Posted By zidd
+1 and -1 are not the same numbers..:D aur i...

+1 and -1 are not the same numbers..:D

aur i am getting into father mode...bacho ko kuch nahi kahna chiaye.
chahe jo ho jaaye...sab nadani hai...hahahaah...

(baccho ki nahi , apni..i meant:)
Forum: Introduction Forum 10th July 2014, 09:25 PM
Replies: 503
Views: 27,586
Posted By zidd
baccho ke liye ye discipline jaise lafz istemaal...

baccho ke liye ye discipline jaise lafz istemaal karna ek paradox sa hai.
pranetaji after some time u will come to know that , that is just impossible.
how can a person discipline himself?
...
Forum: English Poetry 10th July 2014, 08:35 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 880
Posted By zidd
tribal Africa or medeival hawaii? hahaah a...

tribal Africa or medeival hawaii?
hahaah
a jaunty one....u tried a nother style....i can say u caught the nuance
regards
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 10th July 2014, 06:58 PM
Replies: 101
Views: 16,204
Posted By zidd
lagta hai kisi tarah se MASOOD AUR MUJEEB sahab...

lagta hai kisi tarah se MASOOD AUR MUJEEB sahab ko kaise bhi bahla -phuslakar ,pataakar,ghumaakar dhamki dilwakar, patak uthakar ,ladkhadakar hi sahi magar yaha lana hi hoga.
jo unko lekar ayega...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 10th July 2014, 05:56 PM
Replies: 123
Sticky: Sawaal Jawaab!
Views: 17,134
Posted By zidd
wah , adeil sahab wah claps -claps-claps ...

wah , adeil sahab wah

claps -claps-claps

aapne sawaal ko bahut acchi tarah se frame kar diya.
waise to mostly jawaab bhi de diya.

ab mai mera yaha primary input dena hu..tafseel se baad me...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 10th July 2014, 12:47 PM
Replies: 123
Sticky: Sawaal Jawaab!
Views: 17,134
Posted By zidd
bhai , maine mera point of view clearly kaha hai ...

bhai , maine mera point of view clearly kaha hai ki classical ghazal ki history me aisa koi usool mujhe nahi mila.
aur maine hundreds og crossreference kiye hai ..ye bhi nahi ke kisi ek author ya...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 10th July 2014, 10:51 AM
Replies: 123
Sticky: Sawaal Jawaab!
Views: 17,134
Posted By zidd
bhai maine ghazal ki history ke hisaab se...

bhai maine ghazal ki history ke hisaab se ,interpreet kiya hai.

ab mujhe kahi koi thos usool nazar nahi aaya is sawaal ka...

jo purana chalan hai , jo naya chalan hai aur kin suraton me aur kyo...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 10th July 2014, 09:50 AM
Replies: 123
Sticky: Sawaal Jawaab!
Views: 17,134
Posted By zidd
iska koi usoolan jawaab nahi hai..matlab koi...

iska koi usoolan jawaab nahi hai..matlab koi prescription nahi hai.
hum precedents par hi chal sakte hai, misalo par ,aur ustado ke kahne par.

to nichor ye ke publication ke liye ghazal 5 sher ki...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 9th July 2014, 11:07 AM
Replies: 123
Sticky: Sawaal Jawaab!
Views: 17,134
Posted By zidd
is tarah se kisi rachna /tehreer/kalaam ka...

is tarah se kisi rachna /tehreer/kalaam ka classification nahi ho sakta...
kuch bhi ho sakti hai...kavita , ghazal etc...


magar usually it will be a free verse (nasr) a prose poem.like a nasri...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th July 2014, 08:32 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,883
Posted By zidd
kafi din inactive tha...so purani yaade taza kar...

kafi din inactive tha...so purani yaade taza kar raha tha..
is thread ko phir pad kar bahut lutf mila.isliye aapko phir suna raha hu( zabardasti hi sahi..:p)

ek chota sa , very elimentary...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 8th July 2014, 04:18 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,613
Posted By zidd
I repeat once again freinds..any member can...

I repeat once again freinds..any member can suggest correction on any sher above.
it is not necessary to be a participant to suggest.
Forum: Aapki Shayri 7th July 2014, 11:38 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 3,294
Posted By zidd
rajindreji..kya baat kah gaye bhai... itni...

rajindreji..kya baat kah gaye bhai...
itni bariki se ye line likhi hai aapne....itni bariki parkhi....

dheero daad.

regards
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