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Forum: Chit-Chat & General Discussion Forum 31st October 2005, 09:09 AM
Replies: 164
Views: 15,775
Posted By munnia
this is just a simple story-- why is it being...

this is just a simple story-- why is it being blown out of propotion?Life sure aint simple anymore.

Sarkar while i appreciate your need to give feedback BUT you dont have to politicize it. thats...
Forum: Chit-Chat & General Discussion Forum 31st October 2005, 08:45 AM
Replies: 164
Views: 15,775
Posted By munnia
hey all its been a while since i last visited...

hey all
its been a while since i last visited this site and boy have some things changed. but then life does change. first my remarks to Rohn about his story. the good thing about readig it late...
Forum: General Stories 31st October 2005, 07:58 AM
Replies: 95
Views: 11,934
Posted By munnia
gr8 work

hey warda

really nice story. of everything in this site, your story appealed to me the most. i liked your character development a lot. hhmm who was my fav ?????? it wold be rohit. he goes thru a...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th June 2005, 06:03 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 859
Posted By munnia
Hi its sometimes confusing whether to accept...

Hi
its sometimes confusing whether to accept such an invitation. sometimes its better to take a risk to get what you want--sometimes its better to go witht he tide.when do we know what to do?
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd June 2005, 11:29 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,027
Posted By munnia
Hi Karthik and Warda nice attempt to write...

Hi Karthik and Warda

nice attempt to write together. its always good to get both sides of the story or maybe thats just the journalist in me speaking. but your poem strikes a cord. very often we...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd June 2005, 11:24 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,396
Posted By munnia
Hi warda this poem is full of pain and grief...

Hi warda

this poem is full of pain and grief clamouring for a father;s love. those of us who get total love from oyr fathers may neva really understand the pain of one ignored by thier father. I...
Forum: English Poetry 23rd June 2005, 11:05 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,121
Posted By munnia
thanks

Hi Niral
thanks for the appreciative words you had for my poem. Im sorry for taking so long to reply. i have bbusy with stuff and havent visited this site for some time now.
yes life brings...
Forum: General Stories 17th June 2005, 04:32 AM
Replies: 95
Views: 11,934
Posted By munnia
Hey girl you sure know how to keep the suspense...

Hey girl
you sure know how to keep the suspense goign dontcha? im getting drawn deeper and deeper into the story but till your exams are over its ok to slack on this story coz exams are real...
Forum: Humourous Shayri 9th June 2005, 10:48 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 827
Posted By munnia
another teaser

Hi folks
this is pretty simple which i came across somewhere but nice

"How can I stand behind my father if he is standing behind me?

who wants to answer this?

Munnia
Forum: Humourous Shayri 9th June 2005, 10:46 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 875
Posted By munnia
what am I?

i am more powerful than god
i am more evil than the devil
poor people have me
and rich people don't need me
if u eat me u will eventually die
what am I?

any takers???????????
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th June 2005, 06:08 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,073
Posted By munnia
Hi Amanush this poem is so real. since i...

Hi Amanush

this poem is so real. since i read the replies of others and your to them i get the idea that u didnt write this coz u were down or something--but i wanted to tell you that i could...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th June 2005, 11:04 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,416
Posted By munnia
Hi I always seem to like ur last verse the...

Hi
I always seem to like ur last verse the most. thsi one too is a good poem

take care

Munnia
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th June 2005, 02:15 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,047
Posted By munnia
wow thats beautiful Amanush. how do you do it?...

wow thats beautiful Amanush.
how do you do it? im jus amazed.
if you have written thsi poem for a particular someone then will i see a reply to it soon?:D
you really know how to express ur...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd June 2005, 11:57 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 794
Posted By munnia
Hi Amanush i agree with u that a change is...

Hi Amanush

i agree with u that a change is always welcome and i wasnt in any way asking you to not write them. i had just been giving my opinion on this poem which i found to be tragic. but then...
Forum: English Lyrics 3rd June 2005, 02:30 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,817
Posted By munnia
hiya i love this song. i have the raghav...

hiya

i love this song. i have the raghav version and its amazing.thanks for the lyrics now i can sing along to the song

thanks
munnia
Forum: English Poetry 3rd June 2005, 02:26 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,032
Posted By munnia
yup i agree with you that our friends are...

yup i agree with you that our friends are priceless and can make the difference of life and death sometimes. we should really learn to appreciate friends more often. its better to have few good one...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd June 2005, 01:26 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 794
Posted By munnia
hi Amanush this poem is pretty tragic and...

hi Amanush

this poem is pretty tragic and you have ben able to bring out the pathos so well. had tears in my eyes when i read it. but life is not so bleak. hope is always there. Love can create...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd June 2005, 06:59 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 3,771
Posted By munnia
Hiya Amanush glad to be of service and if i can...

Hiya Amanush
glad to be of service and if i can help people write more, even better. i really do like the stuff u write tho i dont read the hindi stuff much. but i guess i could :D

take care...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd June 2005, 06:57 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,535
Posted By munnia
Hi Karthik i could only say why this poem is...

Hi Karthik
i could only say why this poem is incomplete-- its coz maybeyou shoudl have given this poem to the one it was written for--if there ios a someone.
nice one-keep it up

Munnia
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd June 2005, 06:52 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,851
Posted By munnia
Hey Warda nice poem and sure i would love to be...

Hey Warda
nice poem and sure i would love to be your fren

take care

Munnia
Forum: English Poetry 1st June 2005, 08:53 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,121
Posted By munnia
Hi rohin, Parul Shadow n Kevin thanks for...

Hi rohin, Parul Shadow n Kevin
thanks for reading n liking my poem and sorry to get back so late. it feels good to be appreciated by you all who write way better stuff than me. makes me feel part of...
Forum: General Stories 1st June 2005, 12:52 AM
Replies: 95
Views: 11,934
Posted By munnia
Hi warda I am really hooked to your story...

Hi warda

I am really hooked to your story and keep checking to see if you have written anything more. its amazing tho its kinda sad about her dying so soon in the story. hope you write more soon....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st May 2005, 10:08 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,667
Posted By munnia
gud

Hi Amanush

I dont normally read the hindi poems but i read this one and i liked it. Wow u do know how to be romantic dont you? im sure if u write this for a gal she would be floored. its always...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st May 2005, 10:05 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 3,771
Posted By munnia
hiya Amanush This poem has such potential to...

hiya Amanush

This poem has such potential to evoke tears. Its so great that you are able to write poems and xpress thots we would want to ourselves. i especially liked the last verse where u make...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th May 2005, 10:29 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,380
Posted By munnia
Hi Amanush hhm i like this poem coz it...

Hi Amanush
hhm i like this poem coz it reminds me a lot of what i have felt-- the pain, etc--dont wanna get into it. what touched me the most was ur last lines i think “Only at night I have the...
Forum: Chit-Chat & General Discussion Forum 30th May 2005, 10:08 AM
Replies: 77
Views: 6,926
Posted By munnia
Hey Rohin 2000th post!!!!!!!!!!! Man im...

Hey Rohin

2000th post!!!!!!!!!!! Man im impressed with you. thats a lot of work. is this a record of any sort in shayri.com--just curious!!!!!!! it has been lovely reading ur poems n stories ands...
Forum: English Poetry 30th May 2005, 02:22 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,121
Posted By munnia
Hi Amanush hey thanks so much for the...

Hi Amanush
hey thanks so much for the compliment and for liking my poem. i kinda liked that poem too. but like i told priya it was written to help someone get thru a bad phase in his life. i dont...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd May 2005, 09:46 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 825
Posted By munnia
Hi yeah this poem is different and not in...

Hi
yeah this poem is different and not in keeping with your other work but that doesnt make it less meaningful. i kinda liked this one actually--i could feel pain in the lines.

take care
Munnia
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd May 2005, 09:44 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,718
Posted By munnia
Hi Amanush hhm this poem is different form...

Hi Amanush

hhm this poem is different form some of what u wrote before. what i lkiked best was this verse

" You exist because you already know
the script of this sad performance.
You exist...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd May 2005, 02:33 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,071
Posted By munnia
good stuff

Hey Amanush
Im really very easy to please and somehow I have a fascination with words--the play of words to give birth to feelings and emotions always thrills me. i find a good use of lang in your...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd May 2005, 02:30 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 6,625
Posted By munnia
Hey rohin this peom reminds me of a song...

Hey rohin

this peom reminds me of a song that is kinda my current fav. it goes like this
"lonely--Im am so lonely, i have nobody ,all on my own"

Yes lonliness is a bitter pill to swallow and...
Forum: English Poetry 21st May 2005, 01:50 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,582
Posted By munnia
hats off to you

Hi Rohin

I read this poem a few times and let its meaning sink in--and you know what happened-- i realized how true it is--life is reallya train -with so many stops-- meeting so many people some...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th May 2005, 02:21 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,071
Posted By munnia
Hi amanush This poem is really lovely and I...

Hi amanush

This poem is really lovely and I can actually feel the emotions running through it, the depth of one's love which would make one wanna be aything to be with the person you love.
I...
Forum: English Poetry 16th May 2005, 06:24 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,099
Posted By munnia
Hi Amanush Thanks a lot for replying and...

Hi Amanush

Thanks a lot for replying and reading my poem. i appreciate the feedback.


Munnia
Forum: English Poetry 15th May 2005, 09:36 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,099
Posted By munnia
thanks

hi rohin

thanks a lot for appreciating my poem. means a lot to me. I knwo its nothing great just some random thots that flit in my mind. its always nice to get feedback i guess.
see ya

Munnia
Forum: English Poetry 13th May 2005, 10:01 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,099
Posted By munnia
In the arms of Nature

hi people
I just wrote this poem when i saw the sunlight shining in through my window yesterday. It aint great and it sure ain't wonderful--just a simple expression of my thoughts.


munnia


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Forum: English Poetry 12th May 2005, 10:35 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,127
Posted By munnia
Hi jeet I agree with you that we must show...

Hi jeet

I agree with you that we must show our feelings. Its never enough for us to assume that others know we love them unless we are able to show them from time to time. That could make all the...
Forum: English Poetry 11th May 2005, 06:45 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,127
Posted By munnia
hey Jeet it never too late to show to your mom...

hey Jeet
it never too late to show to your mom . Im sure se would still love it
try karke dekh lo

See ya
munnia
Forum: English Poetry 9th May 2005, 11:23 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,127
Posted By munnia
Hi Jeet its a good way or expressing your love...

Hi Jeet
its a good way or expressing your love for ur Mom. did u show thsi peom to her? Im sure she would have been happy with it. I had written a peom to my Mom a few years back for Mother's Day. I...
Forum: English Poetry 5th May 2005, 05:13 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 712
Posted By munnia
hey Ayaan You seem to be quite the romantic...

hey Ayaan
You seem to be quite the romantic --thats good. this poem expresses your sentiments very well. great going buddy


Munnia
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