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Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 27th June 2010, 11:11 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 3,557
Posted By komalparveen
Kambakhat ishq

Kambakht Ishq Hai Jo Sara Jahan Hai Woh
Kab Aata Hai Kab Jaata Hai
Par Rehta Hai Jab Tak Yeh Kambakht Jannat Dikhata Hai -PYAAR TUNE KYA KIA


Repected Bandhu,
Is Shayri ko apne shairon se...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th June 2010, 08:02 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,607
Posted By komalparveen
PATAKHO SE TU DARATA HAIN KISE RET KA TILA NAHI...

PATAKHO SE TU DARATA HAIN KISE
RET KA TILA NAHI FAULAD HAIN HUM
JIS DESH NE PAIDA KIYE TIPU AUR BOSE
USI DHARTI MA KI AULAD HAIN HUM

GHABRANA DAR JANA MAIDAN CHOD DENA
YEH FITRAT NAHI HAMARI...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th June 2010, 05:25 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,607
Posted By komalparveen
janu bai maine bandish ki baat ki thi . vaise...

janu bai
maine bandish ki baat ki thi . vaise to chhand mukat kavta bhi avaz ke utaar chadhav ko tarteeb de kar gaai jaa sakti ai.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th June 2010, 04:29 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,607
Posted By komalparveen
jaanu ji , jab shayri gaane ke lie bandish mei...

jaanu ji ,
jab shayri gaane ke lie bandish mei likhi jaati hai khaas taur se lite vocal music ke lie to kai dafa tol-tukant mei antar aa jata hai. Ye koi badi baat nahi . jab lyricist aur music...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 26th June 2010, 04:15 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 807
Posted By komalparveen
har raaz hai inke paas jo dabaaye baithe hai ...

har raaz hai inke paas
jo dabaaye baithe hai
apnaante hai kai hathkande
Nidaan ji , bilkul ye hamare log aise hi karte hain , aapne ahhca likha hai, good job.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th June 2010, 03:59 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,607
Posted By komalparveen
janu maanu bhai , Vaise to har daana (zaheen)...

janu maanu bhai ,
Vaise to har daana (zaheen) shayar ka apna apna nazria hota hai,lekin

kai log open verse mei likhna pasand karte hain , lekin agar aapne ye

kavita bandish mein banai hai to...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th June 2010, 01:50 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,607
Posted By komalparveen
[QUOTE=janumanu;398262]Note :- this poem is...

[QUOTE=janumanu;398262]Note :- this poem is based on imaginary and fictitious any resemblance to human being would be purely coincidental




तोडो सबकी लातें, और याद दिलाओ नानी
इन्हे ...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th June 2010, 10:51 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,014
Posted By komalparveen
gazal achhi hai. lekin agar aapke aate ki jagah...

gazal achhi hai. lekin agar aapke aate ki jagah aapke jaate hi sab yaad aya , aur shisha ki jagah aaina kar dia jae to aur bhi achha lagne ki sambhavna hai,
kosish achhi hai likhte rahie bhagwan...
Forum: Chit-Chat & General Discussion Forum 25th June 2010, 07:00 PM
Replies: 131
Views: 14,478
Posted By komalparveen
ishak bhai botal aapki hogi baraf meri hogi

ishak bhai botal aapki hogi baraf meri hogi
Forum: Chit-Chat & General Discussion Forum 25th June 2010, 06:56 PM
Replies: 131
Views: 14,478
Posted By komalparveen
ishak bhai asal mei mai shair likh raha tha "...

ishak bhai asal mei mai shair likh raha tha
" log sigrate pee kar apna ghar ujarhte hain,
murde jab bhi bolte hain kafan farhte hain"

lekin jab likh raha tha to janu ki kasam mere key board ka...
Forum: Chit-Chat & General Discussion Forum 25th June 2010, 06:25 PM
Replies: 131
Views: 14,478
Posted By komalparveen
GHAYAL BHAI BAHUT UMDA SUBJECT CHUNA HAI AAPNE. ...

GHAYAL BHAI BAHUT UMDA SUBJECT CHUNA HAI AAPNE.
Dhumar paan karne ke fayde not keejie janab

1. Ghar mei raat ko chor Nahi aate..................................................
TB ki Bimaari se...
Forum: Ghazal Section 25th June 2010, 02:07 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 3,874
Posted By komalparveen
Hadd hogayi tanz ki...ayse lagta hai jaise ek ek...

Hadd hogayi tanz ki...ayse lagta hai jaise ek ek lafz,nafrat aur zeher me dooba hai...
Maine Kisi ko Begger nahi likha , Na hi Mera Aisa koi Irada hai,
Is dunia mei sabhi Begger hain jo Mangte...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 25th June 2010, 01:24 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 11,371
Posted By komalparveen
ye shayri roohanni shayron ki yaad taza kar...

ye shayri roohanni shayron ki yaad taza kar gai,ajkal adhunikta ki chakachundh ne is tarah hume andha bana dia ke atma dikhti hi nahin
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th June 2010, 01:09 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,527
Posted By komalparveen
Jeest* me faila shab** ka andhera raha, Na main...

Jeest* me faila shab** ka andhera raha,
Na main tera raha,na tu mera raha.
Raat bhar,ek-duje ko yaad kar,
Tu bhi roti rahi,maiN bhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha...
Forum: Ghazal Section 25th June 2010, 12:55 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 3,874
Posted By komalparveen
Zainy ji mai apki baat se saumat hoon lekin janu...

Zainy ji mai apki baat se saumat hoon lekin janu maanu ji ne be bajah panga lete hue baat ka batanad bana dia is lie mazboori mein meri gaadi patri se utar gai jo kabi hua nahi.jara unko bi...
Forum: Ghazal Section 25th June 2010, 12:51 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 3,874
Posted By komalparveen
maanu ji , namaskar, Badtameeji aur behayai...

maanu ji ,
namaskar,
Badtameeji aur behayai ki seema se door hat ke aur shaleenta apnate hue apke balble ka jabaw de raha hun kyunki mere sanskaron ne mujhe nahi sikhaya ki dimagi tavzun kho ke...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 25th June 2010, 12:39 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,243
Posted By komalparveen
ghayal ji ne sahi kaha hai kavita achhi hai lekin...

ghayal ji ne sahi kaha hai kavita achhi hai lekin be taal hai.koshish achhi hai likhte rahie khush hote rahie
Forum: Ghazal Section 24th June 2010, 03:06 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 3,874
Posted By komalparveen
tour pe tha , vapis akar sdc me hajiri bhari to...

tour pe tha , vapis akar sdc me hajiri bhari to pata chala ki talibaano ki taraz par meri rachna ko zibah kar dia gya hai. Matm-E-Marsia padhte hue sdc ke water-lu mein joohj rahe mittro ! araz ...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 23rd June 2010, 04:59 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 981
Posted By komalparveen
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Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 23rd June 2010, 04:57 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 606
Posted By komalparveen
new ...........................and\

new ...........................and\
Forum: Humourous Shayri 23rd June 2010, 04:17 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 2,452
Posted By komalparveen
hazrat katil ji hum aur ap mil kar hal...

hazrat katil ji
hum aur ap mil kar hal (cultivator) chalaenge
bahar aegi,ujdi kheti fir hari ho jaegi,
to yakeenan ujde chaman mein bi gende ke fool muskuraene.
ameen
Forum: Humourous Shayri 20th June 2010, 08:49 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,634
Posted By komalparveen
thanks janu ji apka andaz-e-daad behtreen hai

thanks janu ji apka andaz-e-daad behtreen hai
Forum: Humourous Shayri 20th June 2010, 08:45 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,613
Posted By komalparveen
thanks janu ji, bhut mehrbaani

thanks janu ji, bhut mehrbaani
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 20th June 2010, 08:33 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 11,936
Posted By komalparveen
vaah rashmi ji , vaah, three cheers for this...

vaah rashmi ji , vaah, three cheers for this wonderful creation. kash ye baat humari hocky teem aur sansad membron ko bhi samajh ae,
koshish achhi hai , likhte rahie
Forum: Ghazal Section 20th June 2010, 08:23 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 3,874
Posted By komalparveen
Mantri-0-Santri bharasht hai.

Mantri-0-Santri bharasht hai.

Mantri se Santri tak sab bharasht hai,
Isi lie Janta bhog rahi kashat hai.

File ho ameer ki to note bane pahia,
Babuji ke dafatar mein greeb pasat hai,

Beiman...
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 19th June 2010, 06:24 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,253
Posted By komalparveen
Love bahoot khoob bhai rasmi zee apne to kamal kar...

bahoot khoob
bhai rasmi zee apne to kamal kar dia
ilaaj-e-hasptal kar dia
ameen.......
koshish achhi hai likhte rahie
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 19th June 2010, 05:00 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 606
Posted By komalparveen
Vadian aur bahelie

KASHMEERI NOU-JAWANO HOSH MEI AAO,
VADIAN AUR BAHELIE

Panchhio! hoshyaar!
Bahelie fir aa rahe hain.
Tumhe pinzre me fasane ke lie jaal faila rahe hain,
Panchhio! hoshyaar!
Bahelie fir aa rahe...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 18th June 2010, 12:31 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,086
Posted By komalparveen
thanks janu ji, ummeed hai isi tarah mera...

thanks janu ji,
ummeed hai isi tarah mera housla badhate rahenge.
nachheej ki cheej ki taraf dhyan dene ke lie shukria huzoor.
Forum: Humourous Shayri 18th June 2010, 11:45 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,613
Posted By komalparveen
pita ji

Zainy ji ki nazam maa se inspire ho ke "pita ji" nazam likhi hai,koshish achhi hai likhta rahunga.Apko bhi pakka pasand aegi, Guaranty hai bhaa ji,
Irshaad keejie.

DostoN bohat dinoN se soch...
Forum: Humourous Shayri 18th June 2010, 01:17 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,634
Posted By komalparveen
baal ki khaal

Dedicated to Mr. Ghayal
baal ki khaal

Kuchh log khabron ki khaal utarte hain,
Pahle ganja dhoondte hain
Fir baal utarte hain.
Kar lete hain sting operetion,
Fir maal utarte hain.
Phoolon...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 18th June 2010, 01:00 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,086
Posted By komalparveen
Ham khabron ki khaal utarte hain, Pahle ganja...

Ham khabron ki khaal utarte hain,
Pahle ganja dhoondte hain
fir baal utarte hain.
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 18th June 2010, 12:57 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,086
Posted By komalparveen
bura nahi koi na hi ham change hain media ke...

bura nahi koi na hi ham change hain
media ke hamam me sab nange hain
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 18th June 2010, 12:56 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,086
Posted By komalparveen
bura nahi koi na hi ham change hain media ke...

bura nahi koi na hi ham change hain
media ke hamam me sab nange hain
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 17th June 2010, 11:16 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 638
Posted By komalparveen
Ek hi malik

Ek baar ja
Sukun mile to fir ja,
Idhar mandir udhar girja idhar mandir udhar girja,
jidhar dil karta hai udhar gir ja.
-komal-
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 17th June 2010, 10:46 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,149
Posted By komalparveen
nacheej ka housla badhane ke lie shukria saheb

nacheej ka housla badhane ke lie shukria saheb
Forum: Doston Ki SMS Shayri 17th June 2010, 12:31 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,967
Posted By komalparveen
bhut shukria badi meharbani mere gareebkhane me...

bhut shukria badi meharbani mere gareebkhane me huzoor aap aye
Forum: Doston Ki SMS Shayri 17th June 2010, 12:30 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,967
Posted By komalparveen
bhut shukria badi meharbani mere gareebkhane me...

bhut shukria badi meharbani mere gareebkhane me huzoor aap aye
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 17th June 2010, 12:20 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,149
Posted By komalparveen
Pyale juda juda hain magar jaam ek hai.

Pyale juda juda hain magar jaam ek hai.

Alla kaho ya raam kaho naam ek hai,
Pyale juda juda hain magar jaam ek hai.

Hindu ne tere naam ka mandir saja dia,
Muslim ne tere naam pe masjid bana...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 16th June 2010, 08:58 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 981
Posted By komalparveen
Mom ka Pathar

Mom ka Pathar
Majboori-e-halat mei chahe ye dil paththar ban chuke hain sanam,
Lekin fir bhi gareeb ki sada sunke hamesha ruke hain sanam.
Log kahte hain ke hum mijaz-e-sakhat hain lekin,...
Forum: Ghazal Section 16th June 2010, 01:45 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,948
Posted By komalparveen
mujhe bhi parwaajj aur abhinav ji dono ka ek...

mujhe bhi parwaajj aur abhinav ji dono ka ek doosre ke lie likha bahot accha laga,khuda kasam bhot maza (swad,not cold drink) aya:
Choom loon main in likhne walon ke haath bazar sre,
magar chaar...
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