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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd July 2008, 05:58 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 3,247
Posted By vikram8373
Very nice ramjna ji Kafi dino bad aapki post...

Very nice ramjna ji

Kafi dino bad aapki post dekhi hai.
aap ki gazala men koi jaddu jaruru hai

thanks
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th October 2006, 12:23 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 3,247
Posted By vikram8373
Super

apni haato ki lakreero mein hamne na paaya thaa naam unka
unko paane ke liye mera vajood apni taqdeer tak se lad gaya

wah ranjana ji aapki es ghajal (Gazal) men koi bat hai.
very nice
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 10th October 2006, 11:57 AM
Replies: 1
hi
Views: 697
Posted By vikram8373
Hi

wah kalpna ji aapki kalpna ka jawab nahi
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 12th May 2006, 01:11 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,439
Posted By vikram8373
Lightbulb Wah Ranju Super Kiya solid Likha hai. pure dil...

Wah Ranju Super
Kiya solid Likha hai. pure dil se likha hai lagta hai. maza aa gaya pad kar aise laga jaise mene hi likha ho.

veri nice
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 22nd April 2006, 11:06 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 912
Posted By vikram8373
Cool Thanks Ranjana Ji Appka Assirwaad Se...

Thanks Ranjana Ji

Appka Assirwaad Se Pripuran Hath Hamare sar pe Rahe Bas Yehi Gujarish hai aapse

dhanyawad
:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 21st April 2006, 05:17 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 912
Posted By vikram8373
Lightbulb ** AApki Yaaden **

** AApki Yaaden **

Ham Wafa se Taluq Rakhte hain
Dusmani to Bas Jafa se hai

En Tanhaayino Ke Andhere Me
Ek baar , Koi Hame Awaaz To de

Ye digar hai Ki Waqt Ne Bhula Diya Sab Kuch
Magar ...
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 21st April 2006, 04:50 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 4,752
Posted By vikram8373
very good ranju ji old is gold

very good ranju ji
old is gold
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 21st April 2006, 01:10 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 6,024
Posted By vikram8373
Lightbulb Shaam ( Evening)

** SHAAM ( Evening)

Ajj Kal Katt'ti Nahi Ye Shaam

Chubh'ti Hai See'ne Men
Kisi Nafrat Si
Chale Aawo Agar Ho Kuch Palon
Ki Fursat Si

Yun Tanha Kab Tak Tanhaaiyon
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 20th April 2006, 05:47 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,177
Posted By vikram8373
THANKS ALL OF U

THANKS ALL OF U
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 20th April 2006, 10:03 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,177
Posted By vikram8373
Ranju Ji Bas yun Samjh lijiye aapke aasirwad...

Ranju Ji

Bas yun Samjh lijiye aapke aasirwad se likh raha hun. Warna Hamari etni himmat kahan ki kuch likh saken. ye sab to aapke aasirwad ka nateeja hai .

aapne tarif ki to samjho mehnat safal...
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 19th April 2006, 03:30 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,177
Posted By vikram8373
Red face Band ho Chuki aankhe

Band ho Chuki aankhe
Ajj Bhi Nihaarti Hain...


Tab Se Khule Drawaze Ko,
Suni Padi Es Pagdandi Ko, aur
Khamos Kade darkhaton Ko, ...Magar,

Sab Khamos Hain...Un aankho Ki Taraha jo
Band...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 18th April 2006, 03:50 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 856
Posted By vikram8373
Apne kafi achca likha hai dost lekin kuch word ka...

Apne kafi achca likha hai dost lekin kuch word ka meaning pata nahi chala. please batane ka kast kare.


aab us dikash ki baatoo se dar lagta hai,

1.dikash

jhalakta to paimana bhi hai peete...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 18th April 2006, 03:42 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,152
Posted By vikram8373
wah wah kiya sher mara hai kasam se dil pe...

wah wah
kiya sher mara hai
kasam se dil pe chot lagi hai
bahut khuuuuub

Agar Talash karu to koi bhi mil jayega,
Magar Tumahri tarha humhe kaun chahega
Humhe jarrur koi chahato se dekhega,...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 18th April 2006, 03:40 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,279
Posted By vikram8373
wah

wah dil se kalmtak
kiya bat kahin hai maza aa gaya
bahut khub
thanks
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 18th April 2006, 03:36 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 845
Posted By vikram8373
Hi

Ye Appki Zarra-e-Nawzi ia Ranjana Ji warna Ham kis Kabil hai.
Bas Appke assirwad se likh dete hain kabhi kabhi.
apne pasand kiya bahut khusi hui
thanks
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 18th April 2006, 01:03 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 845
Posted By vikram8373
Lightbulb Kuch Man Bahal Jayega

** Kuch Man Bahal Jayega **


Hata do Dar-o-Diwar Ko,
Khol do wo Darwaza

Aane do Kuch KahKahe..
Aur Kuch Aa'haton Ki Aawaze
Es mahnge Maahol Men ,Tumhara
Kuch Man Bahal Jayega...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th April 2006, 10:12 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 762
Posted By vikram8373
Wah

Wah Ranju Ji
Kiya Haseen Dard Piroya hai Apne. men to
bas yehi kah sakta hun ki

Aap ko bhul jaun namumkin si baat hai,
aap ko na ho yakin ye aur baat hai,
jab tak rahegi saans tab tak rahoge...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th April 2006, 06:11 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,191
Posted By vikram8373
Wah Ustaad Kiya Likha Hai ! super vasant...

Wah Ustaad
Kiya Likha Hai ! super

vasant main charon taraf dard ke phool khilenge
gamalon main kisee en zakhmon kee kalam laga dee thee
to gulab kahan se milenge

bahut achcha hai. lekin logo...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th April 2006, 06:07 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 714
Posted By vikram8373
Wah

Wah Guru !
Kiya Zazbaat Hai.

jab koi bhi na raha kaandha mere rone ko
ghar ki deewaaron ne seene se lagaaya mujh ko

maza aa gaya
next kab post kar rahe ho ?
wating........
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 17th April 2006, 06:03 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,332
Posted By vikram8373
good aap na tanha rahe na khamos rahe bas khus...

good
aap na tanha rahe na khamos rahe bas khus rahen
yehi duwa hai hamari
achcha likha hai
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 17th April 2006, 06:01 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,993
Posted By vikram8373
good keep it up best of luck

good
keep it up
best of luck
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 13th April 2006, 12:24 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,194
Posted By vikram8373
Wah

Wah ! Akant Miyan Kiya Khoob Likha hai. Men to Bas Yehi Kah Sakta Haun

Akant Men Kiyon Baithe Ho Akant
Rang-e-Mehfeel Men aao to Baat Bane..

Very Nice
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 13th April 2006, 12:21 PM
Replies: 50
Views: 50,903
Posted By vikram8373
Good

Aapne Bahut Achcha Farmaya Pareev Saheb. mera bhi yehi kahna hai ki


Intzamaat Naye Seere Se Sambhaale Jayen...
Jitne Kamjarf Hai Mehfeel Se Nikale Jayen......
Forum: Shayri-e-Mashahoor Shayar 12th April 2006, 02:48 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,416
Posted By vikram8373
Wah

Kiya Khoob Likha hai. pata nahi logo ki nazar aapki es bajam pe kiyon nahi padi. wakai aapne bahut achcha lkha hai.
i like it
keep it up
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 11th April 2006, 11:35 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 717
Posted By vikram8373
Angry :-: Zindagi :-:

:confused: Z I N D A G I :confused:


Jahan... Dekho..
Jise Dekho...
Pad Raha...Hai...
ZINDAGI....Ki...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 8th April 2006, 10:13 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,141
Posted By vikram8373
Hi

Hi Chand

Choo jaati hai meri seemaeN
wo aksar mere kareeb aakar,


Tum etna achcha kiyon likhte ho ?

thanks
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 8th April 2006, 10:02 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 945
Posted By vikram8373
Wah

Wah Dost

Kiya Mast Likha hai. Lekin Dikhai nahi deta. Men apna chasma ghar bhool aaya.

fir bhi achcha hi likha hoga. lekin dubaaarrrraaaa mmmaaatt
lllliiiikkkhhhnaaaa :mad:
thanks
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 8th April 2006, 09:57 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 3,061
Posted By vikram8373
Hi

Hi Vipin

Kiya Likha Hai Dost ? :o

Gazab. Maja aa gaya . ab tak kaha the aap ?
bahuuuuut achcha likhte ho. next poem ka wait karunga.

Tum se milkar zindagi ko
maayna mil gaya hai.
Khud ko...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 8th April 2006, 09:53 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,118
Posted By vikram8373
Hi

Wah ! Chaaaaaaand

Kiya likhte ho ? Maza aa gaya. aap jaise likhne walo ke sahare hi ye mehfil jawan hai.

Ek kaam karo, YooN nazroN se na behlaao tum
FaasloN si baat kehkhar…itni nazdeek bhi na...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 8th April 2006, 09:45 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,306
Posted By vikram8373
Wah Anil

Wah Anil !
Super !
Kiya Khayal hai. maza aa gaya. Likhne ka andaaz nirala hai.i like it
thanks
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 6th April 2006, 12:10 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,276
Posted By vikram8373
Wah

Wah !!!
bahut achcha farmaya aapne.
Lekin "Wo" ye padegi ...jaroori to nahi..
kah dal dost jo dil men hai dil khol kar kah dal... ham hai na ...

don;t worry
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 5th April 2006, 11:57 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,089
Posted By vikram8373
Wah

mere adharo per rakh apne adhar.....
mere jivan ka poorn vish peena hoga..........

Wah ranjana ji ! kamal hai
keetna duuuuuur ka soch leti hai aap. uppar wale ne gazab ki sakti di hai. aise hi...
Forum: Gujarati Poetry 1st April 2006, 01:01 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 2,176
Posted By vikram8373
Good

Bahut achcha likha hai aapne. lekin samjh men nahi aaya.
please esko hindi men convert kar dena
. thanks
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 1st April 2006, 12:59 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,384
Posted By vikram8373
Wah

Wah Wah
Kiya Kalam hai
Super
Bhut achcha likha hai aapne
thanks
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 31st March 2006, 10:16 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 5,490
Posted By vikram8373
Bahut Achcha

Wah !

us kohinoor ko hi chamkaane yaaron,
har shab wo chaandni nikharti hain.

Super
Bahut achcha likha hai aapne. maja aa gaya
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 31st March 2006, 10:12 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 903
Posted By vikram8373
WOW !

Wah ! Wah !

Hawle hawle raath dhal gayi,
ek aag me jal gaye
kuch vo kuch hum
subha ho gayi.

Appka Likhne ka Anndaz-e-baya alag hai. bahut duuuuuuuuur tak jayenge.
kosisi jari rakhiye. next...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 31st March 2006, 10:09 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 878
Posted By vikram8373
Veri Nice Baza Farmaya aapne.

Veri Nice

Baza Farmaya aapne.
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 30th March 2006, 05:48 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,047
Posted By vikram8373
Wah !

Prem-Rass To aapne kuut-kuut ke bhar diya esmen. prem ras etna jayada udel diya ki kavita usmen chhupkar rah gai.

good
koshis karte rahiye
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 30th March 2006, 05:46 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 3,621
Posted By vikram8373
Good

Achcha Likha Hai. kuch negitive marks hain. wo chat men dunga.
good
keep it up
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th March 2006, 01:27 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 743
Posted By vikram8373
Thanks

Thanks
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