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Forum: Aapki Shayri 1st December 2007, 07:45 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,588
Posted By nahta
Jo likha hai uskaA mazaa kyon nahi lete Ghajal...

Jo likha hai uskaA mazaa kyon nahi lete
Ghajal kis ki hai is bat pe ladte kyon hai
Forum: Ghazal Section 20th October 2007, 01:45 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,213
Posted By nahta
Mayank Ji, bahut bahut shukriyaa. mujhe ek...

Mayank Ji,

bahut bahut shukriyaa. mujhe ek achhii hindi se urdu dictionary kii talaash hai. agar aap guide kar sake.n to mehrbaani rahegii.

Praveen Nahta
Forum: Ghazal Section 19th October 2007, 07:41 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,213
Posted By nahta
Mausam ji, jyaadaa nahi.n jantaa hu.n bus...

Mausam ji,

jyaadaa nahi.n jantaa hu.n bus yu.n hii honsla badaate rahiye. urdu bhii siikh rahaa hu.n. radef, kaafiaa aur behar bhi seekh rahaa hu.n kush samay lagegaa. raah bataate rahiye....
Forum: Ghazal Section 15th October 2007, 04:35 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 2,313
Posted By nahta
Mausam ji, ummed kii lau jala rakhi hai aur...

Mausam ji,

ummed kii lau jala rakhi hai aur aap jaise honsla badane wale mil gaye tou jaroor kuch achha kar gujarenge. shukriya kubool kare.n

praveen nahta
Forum: Ghazal Section 14th October 2007, 08:19 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 3,958
Posted By nahta
razia ji, kyaa likhaa hai aapne. dil chhu...

razia ji,

kyaa likhaa hai aapne. dil chhu liyaa. aankhe num ho gayi. bus logo.N ko you.N hi aainaa dikhaate rahiye. isii tarah ki ek ghazal meri bhi hai ghazal section mei.N "Aman Ke Naam"
pad...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th October 2007, 08:14 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,465
Posted By nahta
Mayank Ji, HaaSil-e-zindagee naheeN kuch...

Mayank Ji,

HaaSil-e-zindagee naheeN kuch bhee,
KhwaahisheN par hazaar rakhte haiN.

yeh kwaahishe.n hi shaayad shaayar ko likhne ko majboor karti hai.N Naa ummedi mai.N koi kyaa khaak...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 14th October 2007, 08:01 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,469
Posted By nahta
Kamsin ji, Mayank ji ki sallah ke baad dene...

Kamsin ji,

Mayank ji ki sallah ke baad dene ke liye kuch bachtaa nahii.n hai. mai.n tou sirf honslaa de saktaa hoon. is raah pe badte rahiye.
humne bhi apni do ghazle.n ghazal section me.n...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 14th October 2007, 07:57 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,930
Posted By nahta
Ehsaas ji, Kuch thak sa gaya hoon ab mein,...

Ehsaas ji,

Kuch thak sa gaya hoon ab mein, Do khaamosh lamhe chahta hoon. Kyaa khoob ahsaas karaayaa hai aapne. khaamoshi ke in lamho.n me.n ko shayri me.n badal dijiyeega bus sukoon-e-dil mil...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 14th October 2007, 07:53 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 988
Posted By nahta
nidhi ji, kuch kuch sahii raah pakdi hai aapne....

nidhi ji,
kuch kuch sahii raah pakdi hai aapne. koshish theek hai. raah pe badte rahiyee manjil jaroor milegi. humne bhi apni do ghazale.n ghazal section me.n likhii hai.n pad kar bataaiyegaa ki...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 14th October 2007, 07:52 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 2,398
Posted By nahta
Sundrani ji, koshish theek hai. raah pe...

Sundrani ji,

koshish theek hai. raah pe badte rahiyee manjil jaroor milegi. humne bhi apni do ghazale.n ghazal section me.n likhii hai.n pad kar bataaiyegaa ki kaisee lagii.

nahta praveen
Forum: Aapki Shayri 14th October 2007, 07:47 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 4,529
Posted By nahta
Yeh watan-e-shayri aapnaa hai. yahii.n paidaa hue...

Yeh watan-e-shayri aapnaa hai. yahii.n paidaa hue yhaeen mit jayenge. mayank ji ne sahii hi kahha hai. karo to kuchh bhii karoo per sub yahi.n per karo mere bhai.

humne bhi apni do ghazle.n...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 14th October 2007, 07:43 PM
Replies: 401
Views: 140,288
Posted By nahta
wafa ali Ji, Likha tou khoob hai aapne per...

wafa ali Ji,

Likha tou khoob hai aapne per adhoora adhoora sa kyon chhod diyaa. pyaas bhi nahi.n bhuj paayee. humna bhi apni do ghazle.n ghazal section mei.n likhii hai.n. pad kar bataaiyegaa...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 14th October 2007, 07:37 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 3,624
Posted By nahta
Dear Dhawani, Koshish hi sahi, magar ek...

Dear Dhawani,

Koshish hi sahi, magar ek raah tou khuli. aaj nahi.n tou kal aap bhi apni shayri is site per likhengi. Mayank ji ne saafgoi dikhaayee hai, unhe huk hai. koi tou honaa chaahiye...
Forum: Ghazal Section 14th October 2007, 11:29 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,213
Posted By nahta
Mayank ji, achhaa lagaa is tarah umeed...

Mayank ji,

achhaa lagaa is tarah umeed jagaanaa. mujhe nahi.n maaloom ki yeh sub kaise hota hai. bus dil kartaa hai aur likhtaa chalaa jaataa hu.n. duaao.n ke liye shukria.

Praveen Nahta
Forum: Ghazal Section 14th October 2007, 11:22 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 2,313
Posted By nahta
Mayank ji, ek koshish ki hai. abhi ghazal...

Mayank ji,

ek koshish ki hai. abhi ghazal ke kaydo.n se waaqif nahi.n hoo.n. dheere dheere seekh jaungaa. bus aap you.n hi honsalaa badaate rahiye. yeh ghazal rajasthan patrika mei.n shayya ho...
Forum: Ghazal Section 8th October 2007, 11:25 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 2,313
Posted By nahta
meri pehli ghazal aapke naam

Gharonde ko imaarat me badal kar to dekh
Kwabon ko hakikat me badal kar to dekh


Pinjre ki salaakhon me hai udne ki rah bhi

Gulaami ko bagaawat me badal kar to dekh
Forum: Ghazal Section 8th October 2007, 11:18 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,213
Posted By nahta
aman ke naam

Hawaon me jahar bhar kar aman ki bat karte hai
Darinde bhi khuda ban kar aman ki bat karte hai

Dil milane ni koshishe hai hath me khanjar lekar
Nakab chehre par laga kar aman ki bat karte hai
...
Forum: Pyaar Bhari SMS Shayri 8th October 2007, 11:15 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,842
Posted By nahta
aman ke naam

Hawaon me jahar bhar kar aman ki bat karte hai

Darinde bhi khuda ban kar aman ki bat karte hai

Dil milane ni koshishe hai hath me khanjar lekar
Nakab chehre par laga kar aman ki bat karte hai...
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