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Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 9th February 2009, 04:16 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 2,171
Posted By dilshadnazmi
shukriya maynak ji, bas aap ki hosla afzai...

shukriya maynak ji, bas aap ki hosla afzai chahiye , yo;n hi ,

dilshad
Forum: Aapki Shayri 31st January 2009, 08:23 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,787
Posted By dilshadnazmi
acha hai

aap khob likhte hain , koshish jari rakhiye , kuch jagho'n par correction ki zaroorat mahsoos ho rahi hai , dubara dekh lein ,
Forum: Aapki Shayri 31st January 2009, 08:18 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 2,108
Posted By dilshadnazmi
muskurahat

dil ki baat labo'n par laaei , acha kiya [/COLOR]
honto'n par muskaan sajai , acha kiya [/COLOR][/B]

lafzo'n me shamil ki peyaar ki ik jyoti[/COLOR][/B]
aap ki rachna...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 31st January 2009, 08:10 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 6,417
Posted By dilshadnazmi
keya baat hai

aap likhiye tou sahi , ham bhi pad>hein keya hai woh?

intezaar hai aap ki ghazal ka .
Forum: Aapki Shayri 31st January 2009, 08:08 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 6,417
Posted By dilshadnazmi
kuch lafz mahobat ke

aap ki rachan , nazar nawaz huwi . khushi huwi ke ghazal ke liye aap ke jazbaat janoon ki had se bhi ziyadah paar hote mahsoos ho rahe hain , aor dar asal ghzal apne mahboob se guftagu karne ka hi...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 25th January 2009, 01:11 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,546
Posted By dilshadnazmi
chaar misre

pahli baar hazir hoon , apne chaar misro'n ke saath , aap ki tawajah chahta hoon ,



mukhlis
dilshadnazmi


wahshat_e_dil ki shanasai nahi jati hai
bhed>h me rah ke bhi tanhai nahi...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 25th January 2009, 02:17 AM
Replies: 35
Views: 5,795
Posted By dilshadnazmi
wafa ali ji,aadaab

bhai wafa

aadaab,

aap ki shairi mulaheza farmai. khayal bahot ache hain magar sheri loa_azmaat se aari hain , qawafi ki pabandi majrooh hoti nazar aati hai, aor wazn se qasir barha ...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 25th January 2009, 02:02 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,723
Posted By dilshadnazmi
bahot achi koshish hai ,jari rakhiye ...

bahot achi koshish hai ,jari rakhiye

dilshadnazmi
Forum: Aapki Shayri 25th January 2009, 01:46 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,832
Posted By dilshadnazmi
waah

bhai .( naam nahi likhon ga ) kiyo'n ke zani ka matab urdu loughat me bahot ghalat hai ,


aadaab

nazm bahot achi aor kam lafzo'n me poori baat kahti nazar aaei , yehi saleeqa nzm ko...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 24th January 2009, 02:55 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 4,283
Posted By dilshadnazmi
ta_aruf

main bhi kuch nahi samjha , us ne kuch nahi jana

keya ajeeb rishat tha , faslo'n ke pahloo me


dilshadnazmi
Forum: Aapki Shayri 24th January 2009, 02:51 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 4,283
Posted By dilshadnazmi
jawab

eak pal me jaan lena thaa mahobat ko tujhe
main hi bas barso'n ki koshish me raha diwana sa
Forum: Aapki Shayri 9th November 2007, 08:14 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,461
Posted By dilshadnazmi
partap ji

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aap ki gazal dekhi , bahot pasand aaeei , aap ke khayalat bahot manjhe huey hain aur

mazameen bahot...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 7th November 2007, 11:50 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,236
Posted By dilshadnazmi
nazm

khud kalami


tum se mil kar aesa main ne socha hai

jheel si ghahri aankho'n ke asraar

kitabi chahre par cha jate hain

kis ki yaad dilate hain
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 7th November 2007, 08:10 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 2,171
Posted By dilshadnazmi
nazm

khudkalami
....................

tum se mil kar akcer main ne socha hai

jheel si gahri , aankho'n ke asraar

kitabi chahre par chaa jate hain

kis ki yaad dilate hain ?
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