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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th February 2015, 11:21 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,736
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kya haseen woh mod tha woh guzar gayi mein...

kya haseen woh mod tha
woh guzar gayi mein thehar gaya

very nice likhiya aa,
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 20th February 2015, 10:59 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,321
Posted By LOVEDEEP
bahut khoob likha aa aap ki soch nirali aa iss me...

bahut khoob likha aa aap ki soch nirali aa iss me to
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th February 2015, 10:56 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 867
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Very Nice, bahuut khoobsurat likhiya aa g

Very Nice, bahuut khoobsurat likhiya aa g
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 20th February 2015, 10:52 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 4,076
Posted By LOVEDEEP
very Sweeet g,bahuuut vadi gall kar diti aa g...

very Sweeet g,bahuuut vadi gall kar diti aa g ehna chhotiya lines ch
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 20th February 2015, 10:28 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,089
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Maikash g Very Nice, bahuuuut vadiya likhiya aa

Maikash g Very Nice, bahuuuut vadiya likhiya aa
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 19th February 2015, 11:15 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,558
Posted By LOVEDEEP
jad likhya vaakya shagana da, lekhak ne...

jad likhya vaakya shagana da,
lekhak ne ruswaayi sehni c,
akh tan bharni laajmi c,
jazbaatan ne vidayi laini c...!!!

Very Nice Very Good, kamaaaaal kar diti
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 19th February 2015, 10:41 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 2,339
Posted By LOVEDEEP
ਜਿਊਂਦਾ ਹੈ ਜਾਂ ਮਰ ਗਿਆ ਦਰਦ ਮੇਰੇ ਦਿਲ ਦਾ, ...

ਜਿਊਂਦਾ ਹੈ ਜਾਂ ਮਰ ਗਿਆ ਦਰਦ ਮੇਰੇ ਦਿਲ ਦਾ,
......................................
ਮੁਹੱਬਤ ਦਾ ਕਰਜ਼ਾ ਅਦਾ ਕਰਦੇ ਰਹਿਣਾ,

Nice Sharing
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 19th February 2015, 12:00 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,419
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Koi pal de wich dil tod jaaNda Te koi saaNjh...

Koi pal de wich dil tod jaaNda
Te koi saaNjh umraa di paa jaaNda !!


very Nice, last line very good
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 18th February 2015, 11:53 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,726
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Lajawab g, do lines hi kamaaal diya ne Very...

Lajawab g, do lines hi kamaaal diya ne

Very Nice
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 18th February 2015, 11:51 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,571
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Ik karan ho gya kise di haw da ...

Ik karan ho gya kise di haw da
.........................................
Sat vaji maitho kise te garoor di

Very Very Nice written Babbu ji
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 29th April 2008, 10:03 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,302
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Hello babbu ji, bahut hi sohna likhiya hai,dil nu...

Hello babbu ji, bahut hi sohna likhiya hai,dil nu chhun wala, vese Dr. preet theeek kehnde han ke tuhadiya sab diya poems read kita bina nahi raha janda
Forum: Feedback and Suggestions 16th April 2008, 09:21 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,485
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Ha Deep Mai vi tere naal sehmit hai ke member's...

Ha Deep Mai vi tere naal sehmit hai ke member's di profile ch eh function hone chahide han, ta ke member nu janan ch hor asani ho jave,
Gender:
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Forum: Punjabi Poetry 29th March 2008, 04:14 AM
Replies: 47
Views: 3,098
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Heer ji tuhadi kini k tareef kara, je ek ek word...

Heer ji tuhadi kini k tareef kara, je ek ek word di tareef vi kara ta bahut thorri hai, bahut hi shandaar ate kamaal da likhiya hai,

ranjhan dekha ta saah mere chalde
mere jion liye ranjhan...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 29th March 2008, 04:07 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 723
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Hello jass ji,4 k lines wich hi bahut vadi gal...

Hello jass ji,4 k lines wich hi bahut vadi gal kar diti, bahut hi pyara likhiya hai
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 29th March 2008, 04:05 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,009
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Deep ji, bahut hi pyara likhiya hai, read karke...

Deep ji, bahut hi pyara likhiya hai, read karke changa lagiya,


te usnu kahabr v nahi,main kina ohnu chaah reha haan
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 29th March 2008, 04:03 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 727
Posted By LOVEDEEP
wah ji wah, bahut hi khoooob, sachi gal kahi hai

wah ji wah, bahut hi khoooob, sachi gal kahi hai
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 29th March 2008, 03:59 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 905
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Bahut hi pyari poem hai,pata nahi ena sohna kive...

Bahut hi pyari poem hai,pata nahi ena sohna kive likh lainde ho, jine sohne tarike naal tusi likhde ho, ohne sohne tarike naal ta mainu ta read karana vi nahi aaonda, eh poet vi ta kamaal de hunde...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 29th March 2008, 03:41 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 965
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Thank u Talik ji read karan liye, vese mai koi...

Thank u Talik ji read karan liye,
vese mai koi shayar to nahi, poetry likhna mere vash ch kithe,
Loka nu hi parrana aaonda hai, bas wah wah karna aaonda hai
Mera kam ta loka nu hi parrna hai...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 29th March 2008, 03:29 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 965
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Thx jas ji

Thx jas ji
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 27th March 2008, 03:32 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 965
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Yaar kade na kise da alag hove

Ohda Rabb Nahi Rusda Sau Rabb Di,
Jinhu Yaar Manaun Da Chazz Hove,
Oh Ta Vaat Makke Di Khuo Pave,
Jine Yaar Ch Takkeya Hajj Hove,
Roop Rabb Da Hunde Ne Sohne Yaar Sache,
Yaar Kade Na Kise Da...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 19th September 2007, 10:13 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 849
Posted By LOVEDEEP
HELLO HEER JI bahut hi pyara likhiya hai,...

HELLO HEER JI

bahut hi pyara likhiya hai, sachi ek ek line ch dam hai, tuhadi chahat bahut hi sohni hai, rabb kare tuhadi chahat puri ho jave
Forum: Celebrations 19th September 2007, 10:09 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,480
Posted By LOVEDEEP
HAPPY BIRTHDAY BABBU JI Aakho mei chamak,...

HAPPY BIRTHDAY BABBU JI

Aakho mei chamak, hoton pe hasi,
Gam ka kahin namonishan na ho.
Tumhe jahan ki saari khushiyan mile,
In khushiyo ki kabhi shaam na ho

...
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 17th September 2007, 12:18 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 676
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Thx BABBU ji ene pyare ans den liye, tuhadi...

Thx BABBU ji ene pyare ans den liye,
tuhadi reply ne iss shayar ch jaan pa diti
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 17th September 2007, 12:15 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 768
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Hello BABBU JI tusi taa jo do lines hi...

Hello BABBU JI
tusi taa jo do lines hi likhiya han ehna do lines wich kamaal kar gaye, really very good

unhe kabh bhulya hai hum ne woh jikar to kare,
kis roz un ka gam nahi uthaya woh jikar...
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 14th September 2007, 11:57 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 676
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Chahane se

CHAHANE SE KOI CHIZ APANI NAHI HOTI
HAR MUSKAN KHUSHI NAHI HOTI,
KEHNA TO CHHAHTE HAIN BAHOT KUCH, MAGAR
KABHI ALFAZ TO KABHI ZUBAN SATH NAHI HOTI
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 14th September 2007, 11:53 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 768
Posted By LOVEDEEP
unhe yeh shikwa hai

unhe yeh shikwa hai ki
hum unhe yaad karte hi nahi,
par unhe yeh kaun samjhayae
ki hum unhe yaad kaisae karen
jinhe bhula sakthe hi nahi.!!
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 5th September 2007, 10:47 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,479
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Hello HEER ji, eh poem taa bahut hi sohni hai, ...

Hello HEER ji, eh poem taa bahut hi sohni hai,

qyrI dosqI Axjwny ivc SurU hoeI
ibn dsy jw phuMcI gihrweIAW ivc
qyry kol rih ky byprvwhI kIqI
qyrI kdr jwxI qyrIAw judweIAW ivc

eh lines taa...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 23rd August 2007, 08:26 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,351
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Hello HEER ji ha ji bahut hi pyara likhiya...

Hello HEER ji

ha ji bahut hi pyara likhiya hai, bahut hi sohni tamana hai, eh lines taa lajawab han ke...............

ki hunda e pyar mehboob wala
bas ek pal liye mehsus karna chaha mai
...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 15th August 2007, 08:44 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,582
Posted By LOVEDEEP
SAT SHRI AKAL HEER JI wow, kiya baat hai?...

SAT SHRI AKAL HEER JI

wow, kiya baat hai? ena sohna likhiya hai ke dil karda hai ke mai os nu bar bar read kara,
http://www.shayri.com/forums/customavatars/avatar14685_7.gif...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 15th August 2007, 10:59 AM
Replies: 38
Views: 7,000
Posted By LOVEDEEP
HELLO DOST HEER Ki haal hai? tuahdi bahut...

HELLO DOST HEER

Ki haal hai? tuahdi bahut yaad aa rahi si,
kyon ene din iss mehfil jo nahi aaye

par ene dina baad jo vi tusi likhiya hai,
Jive tu mera kade na ho sakiya,
ove hi mai vi...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 14th August 2007, 11:05 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 951
Posted By LOVEDEEP
HEY A-BABBU JI, kiya baat hai, bahut hi...

HEY A-BABBU JI,
kiya baat hai,
bahut hi good likhiya hai
sachi hi bahut hi changa lagiya jad os nu read kita,
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 10th August 2007, 09:25 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 759
Posted By LOVEDEEP
wow "A-BABBU " JI kya baat hai, tusi ena...

wow "A-BABBU " JI
kya baat hai, tusi ena pyara kive likh lende ho?

eh poem sab to vakhri hai kyon ke iss wich ghat to ghat tusi kise naal skayat taa kiti,
ki kariye eniya pyariya poem di...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 10th August 2007, 09:15 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,017
Posted By LOVEDEEP
HA JI "A-BABBU" JI Tuhanu kiha si ke...

HA JI "A-BABBU" JI


Tuhanu kiha si ke asi reply dite bina nahi reh sakde,

TERI POETRY READ KITE BINA NA REH SAKA, TAA MAI KI KARA
AGAR REPLY DITE BINA NA REH SAKA , TAA MAI KI KARA
AGAR...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 9th August 2007, 08:29 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 543
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Sat shri akal smilly ji Bahut hi pyara...

Sat shri akal smilly ji

Bahut hi pyara likhiya hai, kai vaar kise nu bhalaona kina mushkil hunda hai,

eh line bahut hi sohniya han ke......................

sisha vekhaan te tun nazar...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 9th August 2007, 11:14 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 621
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Hello A-BABBU JI, KYA BAAT HAI, ...

Hello A-BABBU JI,

KYA BAAT HAI,

Bahut hi pyara likhiya hai,

tusi mainu das chuke ho ke tusi sirf aapne liye hi likhde ho, iss karke eh poem tuhade aapne liye hi hovegi, sachmuch tusi...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 6th August 2007, 09:24 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 601
Posted By LOVEDEEP
wah ji wah, kina vidhiya likhiya hai, tuhadi ek...

wah ji wah, kina vidhiya likhiya hai,
tuhadi ek ek gal sach hai, ethe koi kise nu nahi samjhda
GOOD JOB
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 4th August 2007, 09:20 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 972
Posted By LOVEDEEP
THANK GOD thank u, A-BABBU JI ke tusi meri...

THANK GOD
thank u, A-BABBU JI ke tusi meri reply da ans de dita, mai taa sochiya si ke shayd tusi mere naal gusse ho, jo mainu vapis ans vi nahi karde, hun tusi ans karo ja na karo, par tuhadi...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 4th August 2007, 09:11 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,101
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Wow, "A-BABBU" ji, kya baat hai, tusi kise di...

Wow, "A-BABBU" ji, kya baat hai,
tusi kise di pyas ate kise di tarrph nu bahut hi khub likhiya hai,
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st August 2007, 09:03 PM
Replies: 55
Views: 3,502
Posted By LOVEDEEP
bahut hi khoob and bahut hi aacha likha hai aapne...

bahut hi khoob and bahut hi aacha likha hai aapne
ek ek line bahut hi pyari hai, ese hi likhte rahiye and iss mehfil ko aise hi sajate rahiye
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 1st August 2007, 08:27 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 758
Posted By LOVEDEEP
Bahut hi khoob smilly ji ajj kal sachmuch...

Bahut hi khoob smilly ji

ajj kal sachmuch eda hi hunda hai
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