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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th December 2005, 01:26 PM
Replies: 7
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Posted By ---SwTu-->
aap ka bahut bahut shukriya Lucky jee...for...

aap ka bahut bahut shukriya Lucky jee...for correcting me

aap ko pasand ...tah-e-dil se shukriya karti hu

aur shayad mein dubara likhti hu mistake pe gaur farma ke
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th December 2005, 05:05 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,275
Posted By ---SwTu-->
Monaj jee aap ke diye huve link pe maine gaur...

Monaj jee aap ke diye huve link pe maine gaur farmaya aur

aapne iss opar diye alfaz ko Modify kiya aur dubara likhne ki

khosis kiya ..aur wo modify kar ke dubara post kar rahi hu

aur dubara...
Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala 16th December 2005, 04:56 PM
Replies: 101
Views: 75,421
Posted By ---SwTu-->
As Salaam o alaikum n Adaab...Maikash Jee....!!! ...

As Salaam o alaikum n Adaab...Maikash Jee....!!!

mujhe to alfaz ki kami padh gai aapki tarif karne ke liye...
juz superb,wow,gr8..etc etc...

mein to shayri ke field mein ZERO hoon...aapka...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th December 2005, 01:42 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,275
Posted By ---SwTu-->
Thanks a lot...Manoj jee...sure i will try my...

Thanks a lot...Manoj jee...sure i will try my best to write in a gazal format....i m in a learning processes...!!! n once again thanks for ur compliment....!!!

take care...!!!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th December 2005, 01:30 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,275
Posted By ---SwTu-->
Teh dil se shukriya karti hu apka Manoj jee.. ...

Teh dil se shukriya karti hu apka Manoj jee..

i juz want to ask u one thing..apke kuch alfaz mein samhi nahin...jo aapne likha huva hai ...

"radeef-kaafiya ki buniyaat hoti to imaatat-e-gazal...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 16th December 2005, 01:16 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,910
Posted By ---SwTu-->
WAH sandhaya jee..ur gr888

WAH sandhaya jee..ur gr888
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 16th December 2005, 01:15 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 626
Posted By ---SwTu-->
Thanks mehul jee....!!! bas kuch alfaz likh...

Thanks mehul jee....!!! bas kuch alfaz likh diya..n i dont know ki ye shayari jaise hai ya nahin...i m not a shayar...!!!:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th December 2005, 01:09 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,275
Posted By ---SwTu-->
Khud Ke Liye Maatam Mana Rahi Hu..!!!

Apno Ne Nahi,Humein Gairon Ne Zakhm Diya Karte Hain,
Phir Bhi Chere pe Tabassum Liye,Une hasane Ki Khosis Karte Hain.

Mana Ke Humein Shabdon Se Khelna nahin Aata hai,ise Aiteraz kyun Hain.
Yun...
Forum: Humourous Shayri 15th December 2005, 12:39 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 554
Posted By ---SwTu-->
Talking Surprise mei woh :p

Dil ko pata tha woh jaroor aayegi,
Dil ko pata tha woh jaroor aayegi,
par kabhi socha na tha ki...
Surprise mei woh aapna husband saath laayegi..!!<:::
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 15th December 2005, 12:08 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 626
Posted By ---SwTu-->
Pyaar Ka Ehsaas..!!!

Bina Baath Pe Pal-Pal Muskurati Hu,
Har Waqt Khoyi Khoyi Si Rehti Hu,
Bechaani Se Uska Intezar Karti Hu,
Kya Pyaar ke Ehsaas Mein Doobi Hu..!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th December 2005, 11:40 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 414
Posted By ---SwTu-->
Khud Ko Sambhalon Kaise

Jazbat Dil Ke Chupaye Baithe Hain,
Intezar Mein Neend Kho Kar Baithe Hain,
Kabhi To Hoga Humare Pyaar Ka Ehsaas,
Ye Aaas Hum Khud Se Lage Baithe Hain.
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