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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th March 2011, 03:28 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,928
Posted By AtulSharma
Naresh ji namaskar bade dino baad sdc mai...

Naresh ji namaskar

bade dino baad sdc mai aaya aur aap ki itni achi peshkash padhne ko mili
bahut achha laga....
shukriya
apna khayal rakhen

Atul Sharma
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 11th April 2010, 12:14 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,164
Posted By AtulSharma
Naresh ji namaskaar, kya baat hai do premiyon...

Naresh ji namaskaar,
kya baat hai do premiyon ki mulakaat ko kitni khoobsurti se bayan kiya hai.
bhaut achi lagi aapki ye peshkash

Atul Sharma
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th April 2010, 12:06 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 3,210
Posted By AtulSharma
vikramjethi ji namaskaar aaj bhaut dino baad...

vikramjethi ji namaskaar
aaj bhaut dino baad aaya sdc mai aur aapki ye peshkash padhi
bhaut achi likhi hai
very nice
Atul sharma
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd February 2010, 03:32 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 2,042
Posted By AtulSharma
Hi parul ji bahut gussa bahut krodh hai har...

Hi parul ji
bahut gussa bahut krodh hai har lafz mai
lekin utna hi masoomiyat se byaan bhii kiya hai

main ise nafrat samjhu ya mohabbat yahi nahi samjh aa raha hai

Atul Sharma
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th February 2010, 12:12 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 909
Posted By AtulSharma
Thnx Naresh ji, Vakt Deke Padhne Ke liye..... ...

Thnx Naresh ji,
Vakt Deke Padhne Ke liye.....
pasand karne ke liye bhi
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th February 2010, 12:42 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 909
Posted By AtulSharma
Dil toda tha jisne

jaanu manu ji aap ke liya choti si koshish
umeed karta hun sabko pasand aaye............

Dil toda tha jisne
muh moda tha jisne
hum chate the jisko
hume choada tha usne

milega humko...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th February 2010, 11:29 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 2,161
Posted By AtulSharma
Hi Parul ji, bhaut hi khoobsurat rachna hai... ...

Hi Parul ji,
bhaut hi khoobsurat rachna hai...
Bhagvaan kare aapke toote sapne aur bache armaan jald hi poore hon.......
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th February 2010, 11:15 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,684
Posted By AtulSharma
Vikram ji bhaut hi umda lagi ye ghzal bhaut...

Vikram ji bhaut hi umda lagi ye ghzal
bhaut pasand aai......
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th February 2010, 11:03 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,716
Posted By AtulSharma
Jaanumanu ji nameste kya kahun..... Dil ko...

Jaanumanu ji nameste
kya kahun.....
Dil ko bhaut andar tak chu gai ye peshkash
likhte rahiyega

Atul
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 17th February 2010, 04:41 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,912
Posted By AtulSharma
Dhaval ji bhaut umda agar vo padhti hogi to...

Dhaval ji bhaut umda

agar vo padhti hogi to jarur milegi

hamari duaa aapke saath hai.........
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 17th February 2010, 04:32 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,787
Posted By AtulSharma
Radhika ji rishton ki sachai ko bhaut hi acha...

Radhika ji rishton ki sachai ko bhaut hi acha bayan kiya hai aapne

kaash riste naa badlen
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 17th February 2010, 04:27 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 4,270
Posted By AtulSharma
Naresh ji namaskaar bhaut hi khoob likha hai...

Naresh ji namaskaar

bhaut hi khoob likha hai
kya baat hai
shurvaati mohabat ko kya bayan kiya hai aapne
apna khyaal rakhna
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 17th February 2010, 04:17 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,114
Posted By AtulSharma
Sajid bhai namaaskaar bhaut hi khoobsurat...

Sajid bhai namaaskaar
bhaut hi khoobsurat likha hai aap ne
tc
Atul Sharma
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th February 2010, 11:49 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,565
Posted By AtulSharma
bhaut hi unda likha hai bhaiya marked lines ne...

bhaut hi unda likha hai bhaiya
marked lines ne hila ke rakh diya
yuhinhi likhte rehna
apna khyaal rakhna
aapka bhai
Atul Sharma
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th February 2010, 11:42 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 2,080
Posted By AtulSharma
Love Naresh ji namaskaar bhaut hi dil ko chune...

Naresh ji namaskaar

bhaut hi dil ko chune wali peshkash hai
padh kar bhaut acha laga
yuhi likhte rehana
apna khyaal rakhna

Atul Sharma
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 16th February 2010, 04:40 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,085
Posted By AtulSharma
bhaut narm o naajuk khayal hai. ye haya hai...

bhaut narm o naajuk khayal hai.

ye haya hai jo aankh churati hai
aur yahi ada hamko bhati hai.
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 15th February 2010, 08:36 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 3,279
Posted By AtulSharma
[quote=AtulSharma;384041]Radhika ji namaskaar ...

[quote=AtulSharma;384041]Radhika ji namaskaar

aapki hosala afjaai keliye bhaut bhaut dhanyavaad

Atul Sharma
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 15th February 2010, 08:35 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 3,279
Posted By AtulSharma
Radhika ji namaskaar aapki hosala afjaai...

Radhika ji namaskaar

aapki hosala afjaai keliye bhaut bhaut dhanyavaad

Atul Sharma
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 8th February 2010, 10:09 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 3,279
Posted By AtulSharma
Namaskaar Naresh ji aapki hausla afjaai ki...

Namaskaar Naresh ji

aapki hausla afjaai ki bhaut bhaut shukria
aur sachi iski bhaut jarurat bhi hai

apna khyal rakhna

Atul Sharma....................
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 8th February 2010, 10:05 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 3,279
Posted By AtulSharma
Thank u Sunita ji Aap ki hosla afjai ke liye ...

Thank u Sunita ji
Aap ki hosla afjai ke liye

Atul Sharma
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 6th February 2010, 02:41 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 3,279
Posted By AtulSharma
Sajid bhai namaskaar thankyou so much Sajid...

Sajid bhai namaskaar

thankyou so much Sajid bhai.............
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 2nd February 2010, 11:13 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 3,279
Posted By AtulSharma
thnx bro.......... thnx so much...

thnx bro..........
thnx so much...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 2nd February 2010, 08:14 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 3,279
Posted By AtulSharma
Radhe Radhe ishk ji dhanyavaad,hosla afzai...

Radhe Radhe ishk ji

dhanyavaad,hosla afzai ke liye shukriya

Atul Sharma
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 1st February 2010, 03:22 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,972
Posted By AtulSharma
Naresh ji namaskaar bahut undda bhaut...

Naresh ji namaskaar

bahut undda
bhaut kamaalLe ke sitaare Haathon mai
Tera daaman Sajaane aaya...
Shabnami aag sa Tera badan
Chandni raat me Nahaane aaya...
kamaal hai sir kamal hai.
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 1st February 2010, 03:09 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 3,279
Posted By AtulSharma
Kuch aisi thi vo mulakat

Wo leharati hawao ka anchal, teri julfo ko bikhera tha jinhone!
Madhoshi ke wo pal do pal, meri ashique ko chheda tha jinhone!
kho chuke the ek duje me hum dono ek aisi anjani rah me! Anamika
Un...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st February 2010, 10:47 AM
Replies: 56
Views: 7,622
Posted By AtulSharma
sunita ji nameste Wah sunita ji kya khoob...

sunita ji nameste

Wah sunita ji kya khoob likha hai
ye shabd 2008 mai aap ki kalam se nikle the par maine
aaj hi padhe hai
bahut hi unda likha hai aapne
marked lines bhaut hi aachi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th January 2010, 01:26 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,175
Posted By AtulSharma
nameste parul ji maine haalhi mai sdc join...

nameste parul ji

maine haalhi mai sdc join kiya hai aur aaj aapko pehli baar pada
bhaut hi aacha likhti hain aap
hameshaunhi likhte rehana
bye tc

Atul Sharma
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th January 2010, 12:47 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,534
Posted By AtulSharma
Naresh ji namaskaar aap ne likha tha ki abhi...

Naresh ji namaskaar

aap ne likha tha ki abhi aap seekh rahe hai
Agar aap seekhte huye hi itna kmaal likhte hai
to seekhne ke baad kya hoga

bahut khubsuurti se apne chane wale ka gam bataya...
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 30th January 2010, 11:41 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 38,481
Posted By AtulSharma
kya likha hai vikram ji aansu nahi ruk rahe...

kya likha hai vikram ji
aansu nahi ruk rahe hai kasam se
bahut achi
bahut achi........

dusri bhi bhaut aachi hai.....
bas yu hi likhte rehana
apna khyal rakna

aap ka dost
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th January 2010, 11:21 AM
Replies: 16
maa
Views: 1,163
Posted By AtulSharma
Vikram ji nameste aap ne sahi kaha maa shabd...

Vikram ji nameste

aap ne sahi kaha maa shabd aisa hai jis par likha sab aacha lagta hai
mai aap ka likha jarur padhu ga
thanks 4 giving me links

aap ka apna
Atul Sharma
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th January 2010, 11:15 AM
Replies: 16
maa
Views: 1,163
Posted By AtulSharma
mann ji aapne bahut sahi bola maa shabd hai hi...

mann ji aapne bahut sahi bola maa shabd hai hi aisa
aap ko mera likha aacha laga ye hi bhaut badi baat hai...
aap ka bhaut-2 shukria
you also tc

Atul Sharma
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th January 2010, 09:17 AM
Replies: 16
maa
Views: 1,163
Posted By AtulSharma
Ghayal ji ko atul ka namaskaar bahut bhaut...

Ghayal ji ko atul ka namaskaar

bahut bhaut shukria aap ka mere likhe ko itna maan dene ka
aap kitne kabil hai vo mai jaanta hunto plez aisa mat kahie
bhagvaan aap ko bhaut bhaut taraki de
aap...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th January 2010, 09:05 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,900
Posted By AtulSharma
han ji kya ho raha hai. online system theek...

han ji kya ho raha hai.
online
system theek ho gaya kya.......
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th January 2010, 05:01 PM
Replies: 16
maa
Views: 1,163
Posted By AtulSharma
Dhaval bhai namaskaar aapko meri koshis achi...

Dhaval bhai namaskaar

aapko meri koshis achi lagi ye jaan kar bahut accha laga
agar aap logon ka yuhin saath milta raha to aage bhi koshish jaari rahegi
aapka bahut bahut shukria aap ne kimti...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th January 2010, 04:15 PM
Replies: 16
maa
Views: 1,163
Posted By AtulSharma
bahut bahut shukria padhi bhai........

bahut bahut shukria padhi bhai........
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th January 2010, 04:12 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 18,627
Posted By AtulSharma
Naadan bhai socha jo lines jayda achi lagengi red...

Naadan bhai socha jo lines jayda achi lagengi red mark kar dunga
sab ko hi kar diya
bhaut khoob.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th January 2010, 02:14 PM
Replies: 16
maa
Views: 1,163
Posted By AtulSharma
Naresh ji nameste..... maine aap ki bahut si...

Naresh ji nameste.....

maine aap ki bahut si rachnayen padhi hai aur aapka kaayal ho gaya hun
agar aap ko mere khyal ache lage isse badi baat mere liye aur koi nahi ho sakti.

aap bhi apna...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th January 2010, 01:18 PM
Replies: 16
maa
Views: 1,163
Posted By AtulSharma
Your response is more touching then my poem. I...

Your response is more touching then my poem.
I can imagine ur feeling because I also love my mom.........
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th January 2010, 12:08 PM
Replies: 16
maa
Views: 1,163
Posted By AtulSharma
Bahut aacha laga aapne apna kimti waqt dekar ise...

Bahut aacha laga aapne apna kimti waqt dekar ise padha
aap ko mari sooch achi lagi bahut bahut shukria
mai aapki baat par amal karunga aur is rachna ko aur behater banane ki koshish karunga
abhi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th January 2010, 11:15 AM
Replies: 16
maa
Views: 1,163
Posted By AtulSharma
maa

9 mahine kok mai palti hai
baaki jindgi bhi sambhalti hai

pakad pakad chalna sikhati hai
lori suna ke hame sulati hai

dard saha na jaata hamara
mamta foot ke bahar aati hai

hamari...
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