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Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 20th August 2009, 12:04 PM
Replies: 1
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Posted By komal5
Akhbaar

Ek khabar aayi hai k mai khabar ban gya hun,
ab ye sawaal hai ke kya mai jee rha hun?

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Aaj kal man bada bimaar sa...
Forum: Gujarati Poetry 14th January 2009, 04:25 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,352
Posted By komal5
yaad

safed tadko ankho par andharu bani ne ramya kare
ankho mari ughdi ne michay jaye..
ane eva ma taro haath adkay jay..
uthu k sui jau,
tane malu, k tara ma khovai jau,
sapna no aa jadu nathi.....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th October 2008, 06:07 PM
Replies: 48
Views: 15,439
Posted By komal5
Hey..pulkit..:) kya kahu muskurahat hai...

Hey..pulkit..:)

kya kahu muskurahat hai hotho pe,
aur dil mai dua..

nayi duniya mubarak ho! :)
Forum: Gujarati Poetry 9th November 2007, 07:14 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 5,539
Posted By komal5
Hi..raj, felt gud 2 read ur comments..thanks...

Hi..raj,

felt gud 2 read ur comments..thanks for liking it...apdi guj chej sweet language. :) ane ..ok wil try n find ur post.

tc
Komal
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 12th October 2007, 08:26 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 735
Posted By komal5
:) Tooo gud rehnuma ji. bahot umda likha hai...

:) Tooo gud rehnuma ji.

bahot umda likha hai apne.
Forum: Celebrations 5th March 2007, 09:41 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,037
Posted By komal5
Hi...Dhaval Thanks so muchh!! :) shukriya!

Hi...Dhaval

Thanks so muchh!! :) shukriya!
Forum: Celebrations 5th March 2007, 09:37 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,037
Posted By komal5
Hi AArya.. Thanks so much for ur wishes!! :)

Hi AArya..

Thanks so much for ur wishes!! :)
Forum: Celebrations 5th March 2007, 09:35 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,037
Posted By komal5
HI Pulkit... So sweet of u ...to post a post...

HI Pulkit...

So sweet of u ...to post a post here..for me!

though it was least expected as...its been long time..and i dont get to come on shayri very often...i thought of checking onz...and i...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 26th February 2007, 02:53 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 578
Posted By komal5
Hmm...shayad sach hai!

Hmm...shayad sach hai!
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 9th November 2006, 08:29 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 79,275
Posted By komal5
ग़ौरव जी क्या टूल बनाया है...दिल खुश हो गया!...

ग़ौरव जी क्या टूल बनाया है...दिल खुश हो गया! धन्यवाद!! :)

Its excellent!
thanks..n regards
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 3rd November 2006, 04:37 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 468
Posted By komal5
Kuch bhid mai kuch akele mai..

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Khaab mai bhi gar tumhe kho dete hain,
judaai ke khayaal hi se ro dete hain,
ye ab jaa kar hai jana humne..
log muhobatt mai jaan kyo dete hain...!...
Forum: Pyaar Bhari SMS Shayri 3rd November 2006, 04:17 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 2,380
Posted By komal5
Ro dete hain!

Khaab mai bhi gar tumhe kho dete hain,
judaai ke khayaal hi se ro dete hain,
ye ab jaa kar jana humne..
log muhobatt mai jaan kyo dete hain...!

-komal
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 11th October 2006, 11:56 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,587
Posted By komal5
HI....Pallavi I am very glad u liked it.. ...

HI....Pallavi

I am very glad u liked it..
Thank you so much...formally nahi dil se!:)

tc
Komal
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 8th October 2006, 01:03 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,587
Posted By komal5
Thankss a lott dhaval! tc komal

Thankss a lott dhaval!

tc
komal
Forum: Celebrations 3rd October 2006, 12:18 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 4,495
Posted By komal5
Didi!

Didi.......:)

Wish u a very happy birthday!! (belated)

I just wish each day of ur life brings freshness to you...hapiness to u in sum or the other package!

luv u! :)
komal
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 11th September 2006, 11:06 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,587
Posted By komal5
Helllo...sumonly ji....THank U so much....for...

Helllo...sumonly ji....THank U so much....for liking it!!...:)

tc
komal
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 8th September 2006, 05:29 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,587
Posted By komal5
MuhobatteN di tune!

Bata nahi sakti, agar puchhoge!
shayad kahungi kuch.. agar sataane pe aa gaye..!

jatana mumqin nahi k kya mila hai tumse..
likhungi kagaz pe kabhi..gar lafz kuch paakeezah...
bulaane pe aa...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th September 2006, 03:26 PM
Replies: 36
Views: 1,975
Posted By komal5
Hi Kshitij! Kese ho..! Bahot hi pyara sa...

Hi Kshitij!

Kese ho..!
Bahot hi pyara sa likha hai....sadaa sidha aur sachha...:)
tumhari koi fresh likhi hui gazal padne mili bahot hi maza aya! ...:)


keep writing.
tc
komal
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 6th September 2006, 12:21 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,309
Posted By komal5
hi

Acharya ji...

tame kidhu aagad lakhu chu?..kya che agad nu!

do post.
tc

komal
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 6th September 2006, 12:17 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,309
Posted By komal5
Hi..Acharya ji! tamne aa vanchva ni paja...

Hi..Acharya ji!

tamne aa vanchva ni paja padi e jani ne ...saru lagyu! khub aabhar!! :)

Hey Pulkit...!

Tumne sahi kaha....i doubt tume kitna aur kya samjh aya :D heheh...but thanks so much...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 31st August 2006, 03:49 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,309
Posted By komal5
hi!

Sum only ji....Parul ji.... & Dhaval ji!!...........

THanks you so much for reading it...n liking it..! :)

N sorry for a late reply!

Tc
komal
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 29th July 2006, 12:47 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,309
Posted By komal5
Hath maa lidhelo hath chodaay kharo? (guj)

Hath maa lidhelo hath chodaay kharo?
haji humna ugelo vishwaas todaay kharo?

Bahu thay chhe kahi daun k tu kyaay naa jaa
pan em.. diwalo mahi dariyo puraay kharo?

Bahu thay.. k kyaank akela...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 19th July 2006, 04:33 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,428
Posted By komal5
hi

BAhot khub...:)

tc
komal
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 19th July 2006, 11:16 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,279
Posted By komal5
Hi Pulkit... thanks...so much!! Tumhe...

Hi Pulkit...

thanks...so much!!

Tumhe jo lines achi lagi...muje bhi vo lines achi lagi...! :)
Han..thoda alag hai...usual se...shayad is liye k..tried 2 write it as a prose..and just kept it...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 19th July 2006, 11:05 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,540
Posted By komal5
hi

Hey pulkit...it was not the first time...ya bt definately the 1st big intro!....

Usually to intro poem mai ek engaging factor add karne k liye, deti hun, is baar kissa kuch aur tha....muje is liye...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th July 2006, 03:17 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,892
Posted By komal5
hi!

Superb!...Cute...Natural...pure.....romantic.....soft .....touchy.....
....Lovely Expression ...Priya! :) ..........I luved it!.....Infact i am goin 2 save this one....in my favorites:)

Read u...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 15th July 2006, 02:14 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,279
Posted By komal5
hi

HI rohin....


Thanks so much...:) .........thoda sa confusing raha hai flow na...par kuch bate achi lagti hai yun hi lik dene mai.

tc
komal
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 15th July 2006, 02:07 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,279
Posted By komal5
hi

Sumonly ji

bahot bahot shukriya aapka!..har ehsaas k kai rang hote hain....vo hume kab chu jate hain khabar taq nahi lagti...agar in rangon ko shabd kaid kar paaye to kavita jeewan si lagti hai..!...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 10th July 2006, 01:37 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,279
Posted By komal5
Tere haath..

Tere haath muje aane wale kal ki zamee lagte hain,
isi liye umeedon ki lakeeren khinchti rehti hun inpar..!
Mausam k rang badal jate hain jab chhuti hun inheN..!
Aur umeed ki halki baarishon se...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 9th July 2006, 04:20 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,540
Posted By komal5
hi

Helo Sumone ji!

Main achhi hu...umeed hai aap bhi achhe honge!...

Han muje yaad hai apne kaha tha aap meri kavitaeN pasand karte hain. Muje khushi hai ki is baar bhi aapko mera likha pasand...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 4th July 2006, 08:20 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,540
Posted By komal5
Thanks so much Nidhi ji....M glad u liked it! ...

Thanks so much Nidhi ji....M glad u liked it!

tc
koma
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 4th July 2006, 08:19 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,540
Posted By komal5
Thanks di!.....:) Ej diwase emne wanchavi...

Thanks di!.....:)

Ej diwase emne wanchavi hati mai...! He liked it a lot!! :)

tc
komal
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 4th July 2006, 08:16 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,540
Posted By komal5
Hello..akeli jaan ji! bahot shukriya...

Hello..akeli jaan ji!

bahot shukriya aapka...! aap ka jawab pakar bahut achha lga! :)

tc
komal
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 30th June 2006, 06:19 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,540
Posted By komal5
Thanks so much...Rajveer....:)

Thanks so much...Rajveer....:)
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 30th June 2006, 02:10 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,540
Posted By komal5
Hi Rohin..! He is too sweet..is liye sweet...

Hi Rohin..!

He is too sweet..is liye sweet ho gayi hai poem!
Thanks a lot!....ya i wd show it 2 him....wondering how wd he react! :D

tc
komal
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 30th June 2006, 11:29 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,540
Posted By komal5
Zindagi Mili Hai..

Hello..friends!....Dua-salaam sabko!

Main aaj yaha kafi wqt k baad kuch likne aayi hu...kuch kaam ki masrufiyat badh gayi hai aaj kal to likh nahi paati..and the most sad part is padh bhi nahi...
Forum: Celebrations 28th June 2006, 06:15 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 2,977
Posted By komal5
Lovely lines Pulkit! Aasmaan ke taaron sa...

Lovely lines Pulkit!

Aasmaan ke taaron sa chamakta ek sitaaraa hai
Bastaa sabke dilon me pyaara yeh sardaaraa hai....ek dum fit hai! :D

Aman ji.........Wish u a Wonderful...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd June 2006, 03:07 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,664
Posted By komal5
HI!

Anil ji..

Apki kavita vastavik kisi kisse ko lekar hai, esa jaan padta hai.
Jo kaha appne sahi kaha hai...ungli uthani yun hi assan hoti hai...aur auratpe uthani ho to..kayi bahane dhunde ja...
Forum: Hindi Kavitayen 25th April 2006, 02:03 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 9,429
Posted By komal5
Tum ho gum ho ko chupaaye.. mai hun sar ko...

Tum ho gum ho ko chupaaye..
mai hun sar ko jhukaye....
tum bhi chup ho
mai bhi chup hu....kaun kise samjhaye...
ab duriyaaN itni hai jo....milna yahaN kal ho na ho........!

-frm Kal ho na...
Forum: Gujarati Poetry 7th April 2006, 11:16 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 5,539
Posted By komal5
Hiee Priya! u r right...choti choti baateiN...

Hiee Priya!

u r right...choti choti baateiN hi life ko sundar matlab de jati hain...har kisi k dil mai palti hain...har koi inhe jeeta hai....!

I am so glad ki Guj mai hote hue...u njoyed...
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