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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
Aap DostoN ki jaankaari ke liye ... bataanaa zaroori samajhtaa hoon ... iss valueable thread ke likhe aalekh ki creation meri nahi hai ... jinhoNe isse likha hai ...Unke naam aalekh ke shirshakh ke saath likhe hue hai ... Praan sharmaa Ji aur Satpal " Khayal" Ji ... !
Mujhe inke likhe aalekh ki upyogiitaa SDC parivaar ke liye mahtavpoorN lagi ... isliye ... iss thread ko yaha banaanaa aavashaq samjha ... taaki naye aane waale members aur hum sab isskaa laabh uthaa sake ... Ghazal kaise kahi .. likhi jaati hai ...
aur isski takniik ki baariikiiyoN ko acche se samajh ke apni shayri ke lekhan ko behtar banaa sake .... yahi mera khaas maqsadh thaa ... isse yahaaN prastut karne ka ... !
aap sab dostoN ka Thanks ... Praan Sharma Ji aur Satpal "Khayal" tak pahuch raha hai ... jinhone itni mehnat se humari shayri ko behtar banaane ke liye yeh mahtvpoorN aalekh likhe ...
Main shukriya adaa kartaa hoon ... Praan Sahab aur Khayal Sahab !
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