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4th February 2013, 07:35 PM

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Kshitiz sahab aadaab..........
aapki authority ke agee jaana mai munasib nahi samjhta..
magar yaha direct contradiction hai...so mujhe bhi pata chal jaaye ki mai kaise galat hu.aur baki members ko to faida hoga hi is debate se.

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Originally Posted by kshitiz View Post
Mujeeb bhai ..
Darasal aapka doosra arkaan wahaN khatm nahi ho raha jahaaN aapne stop liya po. Pe ..

kshitiz sahab phir kaha khatm ho raha hai....?
221 /1222 // 221 / 1222
hai 2 / ai 2 / b 1==first
ha 1 / zaa 2 / ro 2 / po 2= second


[COLOR="rgb(75, 0, 130)"]waise ye koi nuks nahi hai par . .

yaha baat sahab ,specially Bahr-e-Hazaj Akhrab ki hai.
to is meter me ye chooT nahi hai ki lafz carry ho sake ,next repeating arkaan me.
exactly A/b//A/b hai...is meter me ye chooT nahi hai.
dusre meters me to hota hi hai aisa .
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koi unglii to utha hi sakta hai

[COLOR="rgb(75, 0, 130)"]mai bematlab nishaaan nahi lagaa raha hu...aur agar aap kahte hai 'koi ungli to uTha hi sakta hai' ,to shayad aapko bhi to doubtful lag raha hai?
varna aap kyu kahe ki ungli uTh sakti hai?
khitij sahab is section ka maqsad hi ye hai ki debate ho.
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Muaaf kijiyega jaldi jaldi meiN aapse rubru hu
Jaldi hi tafseel se baate hongi

[COLOR="rgb(75, 0, 130)"]ji sahab , aap samjhaiye aur mai apne aap ko correct kar lunga.
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Apna khyaal rakheiN
   
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