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4th February 2013, 10:17 PM

Zidd saaheb adaab ..

Kya kah raha tha maiN ..haaN

Darasal mera kahne ka matlab tha ki mufaaiilun to khatm ho gaya par posheeda nahi ..aap mufaaiilun ko po pe khatm nahi kar sakte koi bhi aisa lafz hota jo mufaaiilun pe khatm ho raha hota to ye jaayaz rehta..


Nuks isliye nahi hai ki jab aap misra thoda jaldi jaldi parhenge to po aur sheeda ke beech ka faasla khatm ho raha hai aur ek had tak aap posheeda samjhaane meiN kaamyaab ho raheN haiN ..

Unglii isliye utth saktii hai ki ek misra jo ki beher meiN to hai par lafz tootne ki wajah se parhne meiN vo maza nahi aa raha jo ki ek mauzooN sher meiN aana chaahiye ..

Ijaazat dijiye


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