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23rd September 2008, 03:14 PM

toot kar jo hum bikhrey to gabraye bahut,
teri bahho.n ke sahaarey yaad aaye bahut,

hatheli par rakh ashq, jo tumne choom liya,
hua afsos! Ab tak yeh moti ganvaye bahut

Waaahhhh... bahut hi umda aaghaaz hai.... Doosra sher dil ko chhoo gaya...


muskil mein kyu koi haath na thaam saka,
kahne ko to dost humne bhi banaye bahut,

jane kaya tha uski udhaas si aanko.n mein,
woh jab bhi yaad aaye hain, rulaaye bahut,

Bahut khooob... behad khoobsurat bayaani...


umr-e-jawani apni kyuN tanha hi beet gaye,
yeh khalish abhi tak hai dil dukhaye bahut,

mazhabi junoon mein, sarhad bana daalii,
Phir apne faisley pe haiN pachtaye bahut,

Behad khoobsurat...



kis kis ko batauN apnii udhaasi ka sabab,
ki “Sunita” ko ek pardesi yaad aaye bahut

Waahh...Kya baat kahi hai...

Hi Didi,

Kaisi hain aap? ummeed hain acche se hongi...

Aapki yeh ghzal dil ko bahut kareeb se chhoo ke gayi hai... Sach maaniye har sher bhut hi khoobsurat laga... Ravaani bhi khoobsurat hai, expressions bhi kamaal ke hain... dil khush ho gaya yeh ghazal padhkar...

Meri dil se dheron daad kubool kijiyega... bass yun hi likhti rahiye...


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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