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17th October 2008, 08:30 PM

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sunita jee:

aap ne to bohat khuub likha hai.. kyaa baat hai kamaal hai! aap to bohat dil-farb likhti hai.n.. ehsaas ko aap ne achchhi taah se lafzo.n me.n piroya hai, is liye mere jaanib se daad haazir hai! yuu.n hi likhati rahe.n.. mujhe yeh sher behad pasand aaye...

hatheli par rakh ashq, jo tumne choom liya,
hua afsos! Ab tak yeh moti ganvaye bahut,

muskil mein kyu koi haath na thaam saka,
kahne ko to dost humne bhi banaye bahut,

jane kaya tha uski udhaas si aanko.n mein,
woh jab bhi yaad aaye hain, rulaaye bahut,

umr-e-jawani apni kyuN tanha hi beet gaye,
yeh khalish abhi tak hai dil dukhaye bahut,



hmmmmmm...........mayank ji aap aur meri gazal par kaya baat hai....ek baar to yakeen hi nahi hua ki yeh aap hi ka review hai.....kyuNki aapko arse baad apni gazal par dekha hai....aapne mujhe pada mere ahsaas pasand kiye.....bahut accha laga mujhe, esi tarah aage bhi aapka saath chahiye....dil se shukriya.

god bless u


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.....Sunita Thakur.....

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