12th November 2008, 01:28 PM
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Originally Posted by kshitiz
WaaHHHH
bahut khoob zainy jee ..
masha allaah badi pyaari si ghazal likhi hai ..
mujhe har sher me rabt dikhai dee aur ghazal aapke juzbaat ki zubaan lagi ..
Jo dekha hameiN to woh sharmaaye hai yuu.N,
Keh haathoN se chehraa chupaane lage haiN.
Nasha ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
Sanam ke sitam bhi lubhaane lage haiN.
yuN to har sher khoobsoorat hai par ye 2 ashaar kuch khaas lage
dua hai aap yuN hi likhti rahiye
tareef Qabool ki jiye
apnaa khyaal rakhiye
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Main aap ki bahut mamnoon hoon jo aap meri post per hazir hoye aur aapne meri likhi ghazal pasand ki,..... beinteha hi khushi hui ,aysa laga jaise mera likhe kalaam ki mehnat wasool ho gayi, waise ek baat yeh hai ke main koi zyada khaas to nahi likhti ,bas jo dil mein ehsaas hote hain unko likh ker yanha post kar deti hoon aur aap jese doston ki nazre karam ho jati hai ..........ek baar phir aapka bahut bahut shukriya dil ki gehraiyon se qabool ho...........khush rahiye.....
zainy
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
Last edited by zainy; 12th November 2008 at 01:37 PM..
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