aadaab Sunita di ..
ji waise koshish karna hi badi baat hai. aur har shayar kaheen na kaheen kisi had tak ek "perfectionist" hota hai. use jab tak koyee sher khud ko satisfactory na lage, wo us ko muqammal naheen karta, us ko duniya ke saamne naheen pesh karta. shayad yahi baat aap ke bhi saath lagoo huwee Sunita di. main is soch ko pooree tarah samajh sakta hoon, aur is ki bahaut qadr karta hoon. phir bhi, agar aap (ya koyee bhi member) kuchh "draft" form mein likh kar use is forum mein share karna chaahein just to get opinion or help or suggestion from members, to wo most welcome hai, par sirf agar wo member chaahe to.
chaliye, chhorhiye is baat ko ... kyunki jald hi ek naya lafz aane waala hai. ummeed hai ki wo thoda sa zyada "seedha" sa lagega aap ko aur aap ka ek umdah sher us lafz par padhne ko milega
apna saath yoon hi banaye. Hum sab ko us ki zaroorat hai !