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Smile 6th October 2008, 12:51 AM

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Originally Posted by sunita virender View Post
Namaskaar dosto

phir se bazm mein hazir hoon apne ahsaas lekar....kuch udhasi ke palo.n mein kagaz par likhe ahsaas aap sabke saath share kar rahi hoon.



"Yaad Aaye Bahut"

“toot kar jo hum bikhrey to gabraye bahut,
teri bahho.n ke sahaarey yaad aaye bahut,

hatheli par rakh ashq, jo tumne choom liya,
hua afsos! Ab tak yeh moti ganvaye bahut,

muskil mein kyu koi haath na thaam saka,
kahne ko to dost humne bhi banaye bahut,

jane kaya tha uski udhaas si aanko.n mein,
woh jab bhi yaad aaye hain, rulaaye bahut,

umr-e-jawani apni kyuN tanha hi beet gaye,
yeh khalish abhi tak hai dil dukhaye bahut,

mazhabi junoon mein, sarhad bana daalii,
Phir apne faisley pe haiN pachtaye bahut,

kis kis ko batauN apnii udhaasi ka sabab,
ki “Sunita” ko ek pardesi yaad aaye bahut.

(22.08.2008)
A really heart touching ghazal by u "sunita jee", congratulation 4 a beautiful peace of work;

keep it up...............................
It is wonderful experience to read ur poetry after such a long time........

i just wanna say
hats off to ur thought of mind, piece of work and off course creativity.

regards
manu
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