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25th September 2008, 04:59 PM
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Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you View Post
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Pranaam!!

bazm meiN aapki taazaah Ghazal naZ'r aaii .. aapne apne dil ke ehsaasoN ke saath pooraa iNsaaf kiyaa haii.. lafzoN kaa bhee ba-Khuubee istemaal kyaa haii... Ghazal kaa mat'laa aur maq'taa mujhe sab se zeyaadaah pasaNd aayaa.. dil par gehraa asar kar gaii aapki yeh Ghazal... duaa hay Khudaa aapki KhaahiSh bahot jald poorii kareN.. YuuNhi bazm ki raunaq afzA'ii karte raheN aage bhee.. daad.. !

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka chhoTu

~ Dhaval
shukriya mere chottu.....hamesha saath dene ke liye

tumhari sister

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