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Some Mirrors Lie...
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Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: Shehr-e-husn
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22nd July 2014, 12:59 PM
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Originally Posted by ananthpak
bohat bohat shukriya Zarraa sahab .....I whole heartedly agree to your opinion sir ....yes your suggestion would add life to my sher ...thanx a lot.....
mureed hoon ,tera zindaanee hoon main
ab chhahe tu jaa.n lele ya zindagi baksh de
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wahhh... Ananth jii,,
boht khooob..... daad hi daad...
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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