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Thumbs up Very Good Job - 19th April 2009, 12:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Diya_Jale View Post
Mahfil ko Diya ka Salaam,
aaj ek sachai ko aap sabke samne rakhne ja rahi hun ,
yeh woh pal hai jo har ladki ke zindagi mein aate hai ....
aur har koi isko mehsus karta hai.....

yeh sirf mere dil ke ehesaas hai jise mein aap sab se share kar rahi hoon
Shayad aapko pasand aaye ....yeh ghazal humesha mere Dil ke kareeb rahegi
ghaltiyan keliye muaafi ki haqdar hu..............





Har koi nibhaaey yeh duniya daari babul
beti vidaa karne kii teri hai baari babul

Chhor ke chali jayegi beti maayka apna
sunehri yaadeiN bachpan ki saari babul

Rah jayenge pichhe apne khoon k rishte
yeh duniyaa ki reet kitni niyaari babul

Maa ke aanchal ki chaw jab naa milegi
khoob royegi tab teri raaj-dulaari babul

Saat feroN me banega rishta saat janam ka
fir paraaii ho jayegi beti tumhaari babul

Kaise jiyegi Maa judai beti ki seh kar
ye rasm padegi uspe bahot bhaari babul

Teri har yaad ko dil mein basa kar Diya
ho jayegi apne saajaN kii pyaari babul
Pyaari Diya,

Ek aisi sachaii ko tumne chand labzo.N mei.N bayan kiya hai...... jis sachaii mei.N chipe dard se waqif hote huwe bhi har Maa-Papa ka yehi sapna hota hai ki apni ladali ke jivan mei.N yeh rasam dher saari khushiya.N le kar aaye....

Yeh ghazal padhkar mere samne woh saari baate.N tazza ho gayi......

har baat ko tumne bahot hee khubsurati se is ghazal ke zariye pesh kiya hai....Very good job Diya.....


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