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7th February 2006, 04:51 PM

Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Kabhi kabhi
Zindagi ke kitaab ke pan.non
par kuch lafz paata houn…
Magar we mere ungliyon ke
likhe houe nahin hein…

Khoobsurat ehsaas...!


Kabhi kabhi
Meri ankhon se
ek bound ansoo tapak jaata hai…
Magar mein wo nahin
jissne isse bahaaya hai…

Welll said...!


Kabhi kabhi
Apne chehre par
kuch sansein mehsoos
kar leta houn…
Tab samajh main aata hai…
Duniya ke dil ki dhadkanein
meri sanson se juDe houe hein.

Waaaaaah....nicely said...!


Aur tab mein apni ankhon
ko bandh kar leta houn…
Ouss madhur raag ko
sun.ne ki koshish karta houn
jiss main pyar ke swar hon…
Aur mein oun dhvaniyon main

Beautifulllllll......!

Bhaiya,

Kaise hain? ummeed hai sab acche se hi hoga... main thhek hoon...just a bit too busy with work...!

Bahut hi pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne bhaiya... har shabd khoobsurat hai.... There's a softness about it which impresses me the most.... Meri daad to aapke saath hi hai... bass yun hi likhte rahiye....Apna kahyal rakhiyega acche se....!


Chote Bhaiya...!

Toum ko yaha kavita pyaari si lagi...humein khushi houi...!

Younhi daad dete rehna

Thik se apna khayaal rakhna...ok ?

Aashirvaad sahit



Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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