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1st February 2005, 02:34 PM
Hello Pulkit bhai
Aaj tumhare pehli koshish dekhe.Bahut pyari si Rachna hay.Main hamesha sochtey thi tumhare paas hamesha itna achha collection hota hay poetry ka jab tum apna qalam likhoge to who kitna khuubsoorat hoga.Aur aaj dekha kitna pyara likha hay.Hamesha tum mere rachnao ki tareef kartey ho aaj tumhari likhi Rachna ki tareef karne ka maqka mila bahut accha laga.
Mere dil me chhupe hain kucch ehsaas, kucch ankahi, kucch ansuni si hai baat,
Woh baat kehne main aya hoon...
Uska saanson se mehkana mere tan-man ko, aankhon aankhon me kar lena sau baat
Uske is andaaz se dil ko ab main naa bachaa paya hoon
Tanhaiyon me zara muskurana, sochte rehana unki hi har baat
Behekte jaane se khud ko ab main naa rok payaa hoon
Kaise kehdoon dil ki baat unse, kaise karloon izhaar-e-mohabbat
Badi shiddat se kalam uthhayi thhi, lafz par chaar hi likh paya hoon...
Wahh..................Nicely Composed.Tanhaiyon mein zara muskurana ...............this line I liked the best.
Sada kush Raho
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