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14th November 2010, 05:16 PM

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Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel View Post
Kya kahu aakhir main kahu to kya kahu................aapke kalam aapke sher riwayti khayalo se kitna hathkar hote hai........aapki soch ka paimana kitna oocha hai Masood saheb..........iska andaza lagana yaqeenan mere bas ki baat hai..............bohat mushkil me daal dete ho aap mere bhai.................bohat himmat jutani padti hai aapko daad dene ke liye hahahahahaah.......

Yeh sher haiiiiiiii kya kahu mere bhai bas jaan nikalte nikalte reh gayee samjho........

Jo aap bose kaa waada Karen to ye haq hai
Karun dehn ko main apne buye gulaab se tar


Allah aapko har buraiee har aib se mehfooz rakhe...AAMEEN

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saajid bhai
kaise hain
mashallah jab aap qalam chalaate hain to kaagaz pe sunahre harfon ki maalaa bun dete hain aap ki pazeeraayi se dil ko mahmez miltee hai aap ke khiyaalaat jaan kar dil ko taraawat ka ehsaas ho taa hai
ek ghazal ka matla abhi abhi huwa hai main aap ki nazr karnaa chaahitaa hun agar ghazal mokammal ho gayee to inshalla use post bhi kar dungaa

main tere sabr ko is darjah aazmaaungaa
gire gaa tu hi magar main hi choT khaaungaa

main leke jaaungaa chaahat ko us moqaam talak
tere manaane se pahle hi maan jaaungaa

main aapka shukr guzaar hun ki aapne achhe lafzon me meree ghazal ko yaad kiyaa
haan magar baat to tab thee ki jab aap us pe tanqeedi nigaah daalte aor us ke oyoob ko bhi aashkaar karte taaki mujhe seekhne ke mazeed mawaaqe naseeb hote koshish karen ki kam az kam meree ghazlon pe bhar poor tanqeedi nigaah daalen
doaaon ke saath
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