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11th December 2010, 03:22 PM

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Originally Posted by janumanu View Post
hassas bhayee

bahut acha laga padh ke

naye kafiyoN se parichaye kara diyaa aapne

shukriyaa lkhte raheN

aadaab
taakheer ki maazarat
aap ki daad ne sokoon bakhshaa khosoosan qaafiyah ke hwaale se jo baat aap ne ki achhi lagi
main chaahitaa thaa ki is me ek sher aor daalun magar us se itnaa mutmain nahi thaa is liye nahi daalaa haan magar ab aap ko sunaaye detaa hun

jabhi wafaa se daghaa se kabhi to chughlee se
kabhi to qatl se mansoob higayeen aankhen

apnaa khiyaal rakhiye gaa
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