Assalam-o-Alikum Piari Bahen,
As I always say.. Your work is different from all
But I found some mistake in the basic idea of your last Nazam Khudi,
Kindly not it down as follow,
Quote
"Khudi aur Khuda mein ulze hue hain.
Khudi ka matlab na samze hue hain."
Khudi aur khuda may dekho saaf farak hay
Ek banda-e-ajiz aur wo zataye Azal hay
Quote
"Khudi se banta hai iman kamil
Khuda ki raza har amlon me shamil."
Bando ko sedha raha dekhay hay Allaha
Phir marzi insaan par us ky amal ke hay
My apology if you find me harsh
Keep
ing
Allaha Hafiz
Mr Nice Guy
Na tha kuchch to KHuda tha, kuchch na hota to KHuda hota
duboya mujhko hone ne, na hota maiN to kya hota ?
(Mirza Ghalib)
Q Zia-Kar Bano, Sooday Faramosh Raho ?
Fiqray farda na karo, Mahy-e-ghamy-e-dosh raho
Naly Bul Bul K suno aur hamatan Gosh Raho
Hum-nawa may bhi koi gul ho k khamosh raho ?
(Sir Allama Iqbal)