[Mayank]

Originally Posted by ADHURI HEER

Shayri.com ke sabhi dosto, ye special poem onn sabhi special dosto ke liye jo special aa kar meri rachnavo ke special time de kar read karte hai, aur phir ek special reply dete hai, mai onn sabh ka specially thanks karti hu, ye poem aap sabhi ke naaam



Dukh to bahut likhe rabb ne nasib me
baatane wala na mila koi diljani dosto
dukh aur dard hi the mere paas aaye
cha aur khushiyo ki, ki hai kurbani dosto
oski yaade le kar aaayi thi iss mehfil me
jis ke intzar me kati hai jawani dosto
jakhamo pe dava ka kaam kiya aap sabhi ne
jab tarraphti thi ye jind nimani dosto
likhane ki mujhe jaach kab aayi thi
aapka diya hosla hi meri nishani dosto
jin logo ko na mai mili, na dekha kabhi
vo meri kavatao ke dete hai parwani dosto
meri enn likhto ko aap jo "wah wah" ho karte
aapke hugare se hi bani hai kahani dosto
dil ki baate kaise kehati ye HEER
agar Shayri.com ki na hoti meharbani dosto


and also thanks Iss website ke Administrator aur moderators ki, jin logo ne ye mehfil banayi aur hum sabh ko ekathe hone ka moka diya

A heer jee:

SSA,

aray waah! kyaa baat hai.......!!! itne dino ke baad aap kii yeh poetry mujhe paRhne ka mujhe mauqa milaa... aur mujhe aap ke ehsaas bohat bohat pasand aaye....... aap ka is site ke liye aur yahaan ke members ke liye pyaar dekh kar bohat achchha laga....aap ne bohat khuubi se apne pyaar apne ehsaas ko bayaan kiya hai... aur aap kaa yeh qalaam to dil me.n ghar kar gayaa..... mujhe ek ek lafz pasand aaya..... aur behad khushii ho rahiii hai aap ka qalaam paRh kar.........

sach hi kaha hai aap ne, yahaa.n ham ek duusre ko jaante nahii.n hai, na hii kabhi unse ham mile hai.n, aur aisa bhii nahii hai kii zindagii me.n bhi kabhii un se mulaaqaat hogiii phir bhiii..... phir bhi ek duusre takhliif ko baa.nTne kii koshish karte hai.n.... shaayad yehi dosti hai!

oopar waale se duaa hai kii aap kii chaahate.n puuri ho, aur aap zindagii me.n khushiyaa.n hi khushiyaa.n aaye!

apna khayaal rakhiye!

all hats off to you....

Mayank

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