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zara suno.............. -
23rd October 2004, 08:57 PM
dekho meri tumse koi zati ranjish to hai nahi .........maga maine woh baat sirf isliye kai thi ki.......tum khud bhi urdu badhati ho......maano tumne koi sher likha .......aur ye lafz "likha".......shayar ki mahanat ki shiddat ka nahiin samjha sakta .........khair tumne ek sher badi mushkil se khud apni kalam se likha ...........aur ek din wahi sher tumhara koi frd apna naam lekar suna de to tumpar kya guzaregi........
in short u must give credit to the shayar for composing a desent sher.......
manta hoon ab hamare marasim bhi behtar honge.....
muskurakar mila karo humse
kuch kaha aur suna karo humse
baat karne se baat badhati hai
roz baatein kiya karo humse.....
--anonymous
usne chukar mujhe pathar se insan kiya
muddaton baad meri aankhon mein aansoon aaye
dr.bashir badr
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