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Originally Posted by Zarraa
1. mere opinion meiN (jo galat bhi ho sakta hai), "ye" ki jagah "in" zyada munaasib ho shayad. "in asfsoon se" sounds intuitively better to me than "ye afsoon se" (behr mein wazan same rahega agar "in" ke "n" ko "afsoon" se "af" se jod dein) ... lekin shayad aapne "yeh" ki takraar se sher meiN lutf paida karne ki koshish ki hai ... to kya us haalat meiN yeh zyada munaasib rahega ? can't say ... sochne ki baat hai .... what is your opinion or the opinion of other members on this ?
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aapki is bat se maain poori tarah sahmat hoon Zarraa saahab... behad khoobsurtii se aapne us lafz ke sath insaaf kiya hai... aur Zainy ji aapke is khoobsiurat sher ke lioye meri taraf see laakhon daad....
Shaad....