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13th July 2014, 01:40 PM

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Originally Posted by Praneeta View Post
shukriya zarraa sahab...initially main ne ye likha tha:

tere fusoon-e-bosa ki kya tareef karun ananthpak
ke ek bose ne umr bhar ka itminaan de diya

phir mujhe wahi singular plural mein confusion ho gaya so I edited it.
I agree with your suggestion

thanks again
Shukriya Praneeta ji ..............


maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
   
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