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17th January 2013, 04:40 AM

[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';446865]ab chalte hain aapki ghazal ki taraf...

bata de k itna pasheman kyun hai
mitakar mujhe ab pashemaan kyuN hai


1) agar radeef hai "pashemaan kyuN hai" to kya "itna" aur "ab" hum qaafiyaa hain...

2) agar qaafiya lafz "pashemaan" hai aur radeef "kyon hai" to agle sher me "pashemaan" (constant qaafiya) eemaan me kaise tabdeel huaa...

bhayee ... qafiyee pareshaan aur pashemaan hi hoga .... ye mujhse chook huee..
dono lafz ek se haiN... swabhik hai ye ghalti....

maine kahi koe qafiyaa change nahi kiyaa hai... zaroorat bhi nahi hai... qafiye sare durust haiN :P



theek hai ..


Last edited by maikasH; 17th January 2013 at 05:43 PM..
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