[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by zidd

off late you have been doing very good poetry lamha...........

ye bhi tumhare kalam se nikli acchi tehriro me shamil hai.......
kahi kahi kuch lafz colloquial hai.......chaadar taanna ' kaha tojaa sakta hai magar shayad apke situation me nahi....

lekin in general tumhe itni choti umr me jo adaigi ka knowledge aur talent hai...thats unsurpassed on sdc.

good work but ofcourse you will do better....ye to agaazh hai.......

lage raho lamha sahiba........

Zidd ji,
aapke comments milna mere liye bahut badi baat hai... mere khayaal se sdc pe aapko shayri ki jitni knowledge hai utni to kisi ko bhi nahi... aapne meri is koshish ko sarahne laayak samjha, i m honoured.... shukriya.... shukriya.... shukriya.....
mai puri koshish karungi ke aapki umeedon pe khari utar saku...
bas yuhi apna saath banaye rakhiyega... khush rahiye...