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4th July 2015, 09:30 AM
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Originally Posted by maikasH View Post
chaar misre mehfil ki nazr, shayad kisi kaam ke hoN :



yaad phir us ki aa gayi hogi
dil ki parteiN hilaa gayi hogi

daaman-e-zabt chuTT gaya, “maikash”
umeed, sapne dikhaa gayi hogi


rab raakha
maikash
kya khoob likha hai Maikash ji....
yaad phir us ki aa gayi hogi
dil ki parteiN hilaa gayi hogi

Maikash ji...2 sher likh kar aap to chale gye, par hamari be-qaraari aur bada gye hai aap...plssssss yeh aadhi aadhoori baate poori kiya kijiye...aadhi baatoN se utsukta aur badh jaati hai...so plsssssssssss ab jaldi se poori ki poori gazal pesh kijiye.

Rabb Raakha ji

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